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A Father's Redemption [page 6] (Page 5)

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Posted: 27 November 2012 at 5:47am | IP Logged
another wonderful update!!!! luv u Ava fr writing so well!!!!! Smile

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Posted: 27 November 2012 at 6:44am | IP Logged
u bettter continue or i'll hunt u down...kidding...i love the sarcasm...are u by any chance an nri?

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Posted: 27 November 2012 at 7:14am | IP Logged
A wonderful update.Loved Virat and his daughter.Loved it so much.Waiting for the next update.

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Posted: 27 November 2012 at 7:51am | IP Logged
hey...where to start...okay...first thing i want to tell u that u r a brilliant writer and i mean it...may be u know that...every single piece is portrayed so perfectly...i m a silent reader of ur perfect mistakes..but now i couldn't stop myself to comment on this...mostly it is a sad one and emotional... but  nevaeh succeeded to bring a smile on my face with her sarcastic comments...and i like her...i like nevaeh name...not a common name...suits her character...so both jeeman r died...i liked virat and viren's talk...its a different story...not like any other story that i have ever read...it didn't make much sense to me...i mean i m confused...but still i liked it...i understood what i read..and that is amazing...that's enough for me...so if u want to continue this..i ll be happy soul...i want to read it...take care...

madhu...

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Posted: 27 November 2012 at 9:27pm | IP Logged
love u AVA for this,really a fabulous work ..
loved the update to the core...n NEVAEH ! m n love with this name...
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thnx 4 another masterpiece ( other than perfect mistake ) ..

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Posted: 29 November 2012 at 3:24am | IP Logged
vry nice update. .really heart touchng

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Posted: 30 November 2012 at 5:12pm | IP Logged
This is so, so beautiful! Your writing is very powerful! Clap Thanks for the PM! Please continue soon! 
In your note you explained a lot, but just one question, what happened to Jeevika? 

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Posted: 01 December 2012 at 5:06am | IP Logged

I just don't need to tell how beautifully you write as I have been doing it since a while and trust me I'm tired!  Approve Actually you did the right thing by not eliminating Manvi completely from the story as she is dead. and what I see, is Jeevs dead too? What's that. Okaay! You give glimpses of Virat's past which is too good.

I felt at relief when I read Nev wouldn't be suffering like Virat much as in your other ff. Big smile That's truly is so sweet of you! I know this comment is nothing but bizarreness, But I actually I don't understand how more should I praise you, I love it! I love the sarcasm Nev show in her every sentence, how she takes things in a light hearted way! The trio are the currently my most favorite characters out of all.   

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