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A Father's Redemption [page 6] (Page 2)

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Posted: 09 November 2012 at 8:46am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Shivrajput52

Cant wait... Post now.. wanna read nw..!!
ohh god your pic Nia& Karan awesome

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Posted: 09 November 2012 at 10:34am | IP Logged

Ava, really you are briljant, love her nickname, 'Heaven spelt backwards', the story is so good, it gives me hope, not every father has to be a bad one. In most cases the dads are awesome, and in this particular case he is ... -can't find the right word(s), you will get to hear then when I found it. Gosh I breathing heavily, that is the effect your story has on me. It is beautiful in the end when you are done reading everything sinks in. Ava you are awesome you are so damn special you writing is so different from all the other writings. I love your work.

P.s. The part where she's happy because she shares something with her mom, it is beautiful. The feeling when you share something with someone you miss so much, it is awesome! It is so easy to relate to, like I am really listening to someone.



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Posted: 09 November 2012 at 10:52am | IP Logged
It was beautufuly written loved it

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Posted: 09 November 2012 at 11:15am | IP Logged
I...erh... I actually dont know what to tell!!
U just made me think of my dad! Its really a beautiful relation. 
Viraat and nevaeh shares a really sacred and pure relation! The relation of a father an daughter! Not to forget about our emotional BP, he is just too caring! 
I just loved it to the core! It just touched my heart!
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Posted: 09 November 2012 at 11:24am | IP Logged
oh! my my 
ava what can i say ...u write so beautifully! man i hav officially becum ur fan ! 
this story perfect mistakes n some things r just better written all r fab just completely awesome!
i m short of words now...tis work is really vey precious n amazing by reading it i m loving my dad more n more 
in the end i luv u virat!

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Posted: 09 November 2012 at 11:37am | IP Logged
OhMyGosh Ava...That was beautifully described.
The Father-Daughter Relationship is so deep...
You have decribed it perfectly...
You bring out the emotions in people...
and that is just amazingg!!!

Please do continue...
Thanks for the PM!

P.S: Get Well Soon!! <33

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Posted: 09 November 2012 at 12:11pm | IP Logged
AHMAZING!!! i love the concept. please update soon, and pm me. and you're DEFINITELY continuing with this :)

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