Just read many chapters in one Go
Ok about chapter realisation i want to give u a standing Ovation.👏
reasons
1. u have justified what a dark story and character is actually. Showing dark characters and story doesnt mean one go to extreme that there is no room left for repentance. The way u write dark stories is the actual way people like . Let me tell u in detail...
why do we love dark stories and characters?
its becuase we know that person is being rude, brutal, animal but the moment that person realises mistake it will leave a tsunami of emtions...we love to see a dark charcater and dark scenes hoping a tsunami of REALISATION will come one day.It doesnt not mean one need to cry 24/ 7
sadly in the show on TV they makers did not do justice to CONTRACT MARRIGAE . Khushi was devasted with the marriage but just a kidnap changed her...Aranav wooing her back was more forceful and less romantic . Forceful wooiing can be apologetic but it was made comedy..
I have seen u and madhu always have dealt with hurt and pain so gracefully but the 4lions did not at all.
few months back i read The FF of black paradize. that one especially in which khushi is raped by arnav. that was really dark and i enjoyed but was dissapointed only because as i said if u make dark scenes and characters , u have to also put REPENTANCE to that level of dark scene atleast to balance it..orlese it is not worth .THat TM did not do full justice according to me because RAPE was indeed an unforgivable offence but REPENTANCE from arnav in that FF was luke warm ..not great. i was thinking if AAPy cud v done that story she wud hv made it more emotional.
bUT honestly u have truly justified what a DARK STORY is all about. The REALISATION CHAPTER is a proof that u have balanced all the harsh moments with this realisation. so effectively
the dialogues Misha says is just too worthed it and emotional.
well done and keep writing
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