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FF||An Untainted LoveStory(Chap 7- Pg 17) (Page 5)

--Sarunholic-- IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 25 November 2012 at 8:04am | IP Logged
Wow Day Dreaming Awesum update!!! Thnx fr d PM Embarrassed Continue soon!

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Posted: 25 November 2012 at 11:14am | IP Logged
superb updt

updt soon

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Posted: 28 November 2012 at 11:32am | IP Logged
Once again... RES!

I'll read it tonight Big smile
Love you Yash Hug


EDIT*

I'm falling in love with this story more and more Yash!! Brilliant update, and a perfect way for them to meet!!

Firstly, let me just mention that i LOVED the conversation between Garima and Khushi at the start. Don't ask me why, i just did lol. The way she said 'take care baccha' it was so touching and cute. You've portrayed their relationship so wonderfully... Very realistic as well. Typical mother and daughter banter! Brilliantly done Yash

Now on to Kabir and Yash!! THEY'RE SO CUTE!! I love how you've given them two a vital role in this as well - how you've described the feelings they have for each other as well. The way he stood up for her as well... And smiled at her sleeping!!! Hayyeee Day Dreaming I officially love Kabir! All strong characters, and i love it!!

I love how Arnav came to Khushi's help when they first met... Superhero Barun Heart (Even if it was just something littleLOL) You've given a lovely setting for their budding story! Also, the fact that Khushi saw Arnav shouting at that Meenakshi bitch... i don't know whether this is a good thing? Or is it setting us up for his temper problems in future? Or is that me reading tok much in to it lol? Either way... At least Khushi has seen how caring he is!! Clap

AND YES!!!  love their little friend circle now!!! LOL I love friendships like this!!!

Well done you! I loved this update, and i cannot wait to see where you go with this... Already love the Khushi/Arnav relationship!

HATS OFF YASH!
I love you Hug





Edited by shay1990 - 28 November 2012 at 2:13pm
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Posted: 29 November 2012 at 5:12am | IP Logged
Originally posted by casker

loved the update.
i thought yash will be a fiesty girl.

In bold...
Hey casker... I showed Yash as such coz... well U know how Khushi is...so Yash will be quite different I guess!!!

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Posted: 29 November 2012 at 5:16am | IP Logged
Originally posted by shay1990

Once again... RES!

I'll read it tonight Big smile
Love you Yash Hug


EDIT*

I'm falling in love with this story more and more Yash!! Brilliant update, and a perfect way for them to meet!!

Firstly, let me just mention that i LOVED the conversation between Garima and Khushi at the start. Don't ask me why, i just did lol. The way she said 'take care baccha' it was so touching and cute. You've portrayed their relationship so wonderfully... Very realistic as well. Typical mother and daughter banter! Brilliantly done Yash

Now on to Kabir and Yash!! THEY'RE SO CUTE!! I love how you've given them two a vital role in this as well - how you've described the feelings they have for each other as well. The way he stood up for her as well... And smiled at her sleeping!!! Hayyeee Day Dreaming I officially love Kabir! All strong characters, and i love it!!

I love how Arnav came to Khushi's help when they first met... Superhero Barun Heart (Even if it was just something littleLOL) You've given a lovely setting for their budding story! Also, the fact that Khushi saw Arnav shouting at that Meenakshi bitch... i don't know whether this is a good thing? Or is it setting us up for his temper problems in future? Or is that me reading tok much in to it lol? Either way... At least Khushi has seen how caring he is!! Clap

AND YES!!!  love their little friend circle now!!! LOL I love friendships like this!!!

Well done you! I loved this update, and i cannot wait to see where you go with this... Already love the Khushi/Arnav relationship!

HATS OFF YASH!
I love you Hug





DI!!!! Was waiting for ur feedback...
Now coming to ur comment...
Hah!! U noticed that filler in the beginnin!? thank u... that was an excerpt from y (our) lifeSmile i guess
Kabir is Cute... and believe me u will love him moreEmbarrassed
Arnav!!!!! This man will kill me one day with his looks!!!
Khushi and everyone else will share a great friendship... no doubt!!!

tHANK U SO MUCH DI...
YASH  

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Posted: 29 November 2012 at 5:18am | IP Logged
Originally posted by --Sarunholic--

Wow Day Dreaming Awesum update!!! Thnx fr d PM Embarrassed Continue soon!

Thank u so much dear...Smile
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Posted: 29 November 2012 at 5:19am | IP Logged
Originally posted by summaiyasayed

nice updt

luv it

thanks for pm

Thank u summaiya
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Posted: 29 November 2012 at 5:20am | IP Logged
Originally posted by kria1996

wow !
that was awesome...!
update soon..
n thank yu for the pm.. :)

Thank you Kria... am glad u loved itSmile

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