Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee


Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee


mounacuty Goldie

Joined: 14 January 2012
Posts: 1814

Posted: 28 December 2012 at 5:09am | IP Logged
lovely teaser update soon

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BabajiKaThullu IF-Addictz

Joined: 26 February 2010
Posts: 54270

Posted: 28 December 2012 at 5:19am | IP Logged
superb work dear..

i loved ur poem write more Thumbs Up

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vrinda22 IF-Stunnerz

Joined: 19 March 2011
Posts: 32175

Posted: 28 December 2012 at 5:57am | IP Logged
Originally posted by 9n9i9s9h9u9

after reading last update
i was  just too much emotional that wannnt to write this lines,but avoid it
but as you again give that teaser
make me think about maan's state of mind
ad see
finally i write this

meri ruh pyaasi thi
bas ek tere pyaar ke ahsaas ke liye
mai yeh zindagi  ji raha tha
bas tujh khaas ke liye

mera dil akela tha
chahe aas paas
logo ka mela tha
is dil ne ,bas tujhe chaha tha
aur na koi dusra kabhi
chu sake tujhe
chu to kya,aare na koi
dekh sake tujhe
dekhna to dur
na koi kabhi soch sake tujhe
bas yahi to is dil ne chaha tha
aur is liye 
khud ko maine aisa banaya tha

mai har pal tujhe yaad karta tha
tere hooth  ki  har ek chuan ki raha tak ta tha
 soch ta tha
ke ab to tere hootho par mera naam hoga
mujhe pyaar karna hi bas unka kaam hoga
tu haase gi mere liye
tu saaje gi mere liye
kyoki inke siya
kuch aur ho tere hootho par
ye soch bhi 
mera dil na gawaara karta tha

par jo sunna  maine
 tere hootho se kahi unkahi baato se
wo har ek ahsaas to mujhe maarne ka kaam karta tha
ye unkahe pagaam
kaafi nahi the kya tere liye
jo ,tune
khud ko khatam karne ki raah par chalne ki soch kar
muju par is duniya mai akela marne ki sajaa thop kar
ja rahi thi

yeh mai kaise hone deta
aapne saamne
aapne aapko khud se kaise khone deta
par ab jab ye teri chahat hai
ki mai ji na saku
to sun 
mai chala jaauga
is duniya ko chod kar
har rishte,naate ko thod kar
par tu khud ko kuch na karna
mai mar bhi nahi paauga,yeh soch kar

awesome poem dear..

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keerthi90 Goldie

Joined: 12 June 2011
Posts: 1377

Posted: 28 December 2012 at 6:50am | IP Logged
Thank god hamare khatir ek happy wala teaser diya tumne...
Waiting for update!!!!

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spvd IF-Addictz

Joined: 22 December 2007
Posts: 51612

Posted: 28 December 2012 at 7:35am | IP Logged
nice dear...

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Alamelu IF-Rockerz

Joined: 08 February 2006
Posts: 7356

Posted: 28 December 2012 at 1:00pm | IP Logged
omg...even if maan wants he cannot stay away from geet and no one can separate them...not prem or annie...

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ammu5 IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 13 December 2010
Posts: 10548

Posted: 02 January 2013 at 6:03am | IP Logged
heartwrenching n painful update. brilliantly written
..AnushaGeet.. IF-Addictz

Joined: 06 July 2011
Posts: 50243

Posted: 17 April 2013 at 11:32pm | IP Logged
What a painful update yaar...
I could hardly read cause I was crying all the time...Cry

It's sad that prem understands Maan so well whereas geet failed to Cry
My heart cries seeing Maan in pain...

I feel bad for geet too...but what she did by trying to kill herself was not right.! Her fear killed her love Ouch

I just hope that b****** Dev doesn't take advantage if the situation...

Please make Maan alright soon.! Can't take this  pain anymore Cry

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