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It all started with 300 Rupees Chapter 32 Thread 5 (Page 6)

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Posted: 09 November 2012 at 3:03am | IP Logged
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Posted: 09 November 2012 at 4:35am | IP Logged
Hey KC!!!

You captured the pain of their loss very well! 

Thank you for this beautiful story!

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Sam and ananya...*HI FIVE* mission accomplished Hug

KC  "maybe" yesterday you look like this...SHOCK laga...laga re SHOCK laga...LOL


CONGRATS BUDDY  

Chapter 31 coming soon...samjh nahi aaya...yeh jo update tha woh chapter 31 tha ya nahi...ab yeh mat kehna MAYBE....because you always write your chapter number after heading...like It all started with 300 Rupees 29 or 30...but is baar kuch nahi tha...okey jo bhi ho...i liked it in fact like always I LOVED IT...

hmmm now about the update...

It was emotional...sentimental...intense...

kissi bhi cheez ki ahemiyat (importance) apko tab samjh aati hai jab aap usko kho dete hain...aur zyada tab jab aap usko mehsoos karte hain...Arnav till now just know he lost his child but didn't feel it...a simple small black and white piece of paper made him realised it...what all he lose because of his mistakes...after reading part A don't knowbut I just want to take their hurt away and comfort them...

The hug in Part B was surely different...Arnav was so much fragile emotionally...he was feeling guilt for so many things...that can't be reciprocated...

part C Clap

Part D...kaise likh lete ho aap itna achcha...words kum pad jate hain...apki tareef mein...the way you wrote...

their unborn baby resting between their palms...like they are holding it...

"Maybe that wasn't the right time for that picture to turn into a coloured photograph to adorn a frame in a home..."  

"that glossy paper refused to see a world where there was so much pain…….even in love……."

is simply remarkable...using the line Kyun Dard hai itna Tere Ishq mein...pain even in love...

picture waiting for a better time to turn into a beautiful smiling child...just like us readers...as we're also waiting for it...Embarrassed

together watching dawn...promising them a brighter future... YEAHHH TOGETHER...

Thanx for the note...I Love reading and liking all the posts...

P.S. thank you CutieSanaya...
Ananya, Sam, Shivi 
see you at FM 


Edited by rocking meenu - 09 November 2012 at 5:18am

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Posted: 09 November 2012 at 5:17am | IP Logged
Superb...loved it! 

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Posted: 09 November 2012 at 5:30am | IP Logged
great story...

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Posted: 09 November 2012 at 6:40am | IP Logged
enjoyed it .. update soon :)

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Posted: 09 November 2012 at 7:01am | IP Logged
It was sad how she lost the baby

thanks u

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A very beautiful and emotional update...and awesome precap :)

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