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It all started with 300 Rupees Chapter 32 Thread 5 (Page 3)

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Posted: 08 November 2012 at 9:49pm | IP Logged
my1500 post

res.

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i was thnkng that i wll not be able to post my 1500comment on ur update n wll hv to post it randmly but m glad u updated
thanx a lot di

coming back to d update
it was sooo emotional n heart touchng
LAFZON SE THA JO PARE
KHALI PAN KO JO BHARE
KUCH TO HAI IS UPDATE KE DARMIYAAAN

really di when i was readng this update i was feeling sumthng inside
don't know how to express it... luvd ur expressions
it s so true...lyf give us challenges n we hv to overcome it (survival of d fittest)
the way one seek comfort frm d other partner...sumtym hubby needs his wife beside n sumtyms wife needs him
. they both support each other n lyf goes on happily

d way he was holdng d proof of their loss n she placed her hand above it
Their unborn child…..
Resting between those two palms…..
it was just amazng
MAYBE THAT WAS NOT D RIGHT TYM FOR SYMBOL OF THEIR LUV TO COME
(maybe their symbol wanted to come in their lyf when they were together)

MAYBE( shayad ) is shabd pe to duniya kayam hai...there r several individual who start evryday of their lyf when d frst ray of sun enter their lyf wth d word MAYBE. ths word s small but really has a vry broad aspect

d endng was awesum
a ray of hope entering their lyf
Promising them of a brighter
future……
Giving them another chance…….
waiting for happiness to enter their lyfDay Dreaming

perfect title 'MAYBE'

luvly update
wth respect to u n ur work
---- shivi

Edited by shivi.10rocks - 08 November 2012 at 11:42pm

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Posted: 08 November 2012 at 9:57pm | IP Logged
You captured the pain of their loss very well! Today has been such a sad day with so much happening that I am out of words! 
Thank you for this beautiful story!

Maya Di

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Posted: 08 November 2012 at 9:58pm | IP Logged
beautiful update!! loved it!!

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Posted: 08 November 2012 at 10:17pm | IP Logged
Congrats di for your fifth thread.. 


i know i know you must be wondering from where i appeared... life is hell busy n i don't like giving one word comment atleast on some of my favorites ff..

comment..?? ohh its right down.. :P


every cloud has a silver lining.. i wonder when arnav-khushi will see their siliver lining... 

this was a heart-wrenching update.. trust me i was actually shivering and had goose bumps...

what more they are destined to face..?? i mean seriously meri life mein if i face this much trouble i don't think i will be able to survive...

my goodness.. how can you be so cool hearted di..?? i am wondering how you managed to write this.. SERIOUSLY..!!

everything was fine..to every extent but the ultrasound.. omg..that pain is beyond to be  thought..mumma.!!

you are just BRILLIANT...taking a bow infront of you di.. only you can keep your reader stick to your ff and yet keep the pace of the story slow.. i was like karti kaise ho aap...if you see in starting loads of thing happened then dhere dhere sab kuch slow-slow ho gaya.. don't know whether you got it or not..but still samajh jana..hahahaLOL

but i want you to continue till eternity... i have read the hurdles,the pain,the problems which arnav-khushi went through and i want to read about their happiness.. how they cope up with this bitter part of life,how they turn their every single bitter memory into a happy one..


P.S- sorry for not commenting regularly..Ouch


Edited by Shruti21 - 08 November 2012 at 10:25pm

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Posted: 08 November 2012 at 10:45pm | IP Logged
You are an awesome writer. Love your writing a lot.
Emotional update ... Khushi had to go through a lot ..
Now Arnav and khushi are together, will wait for their Happy moments Smile

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Posted: 08 November 2012 at 10:48pm | IP Logged

res for someone special Wink

--edited--




Ek baar 'Ananya' ne kaha tha...

"I'm not a Stalker...I'M DEDICATED "   

you proved it...yes you are right...

it's something like ?"Ek baar jo maine commitment kar di, toh phir mai apne aap ki bhi nahi sunta"

almost 50-60 pages...filling them without getting bored and that to alone...goshhh
love you yaraaa 


I learned so many things from KC...and i'm glad I met you through her story...
now I also learned what dedication is...you know i'm a lazy fellow...sooo THANK YOU

Dear
I'll be your friend.
And I'll always be there.
You can depend that I'll never leave you
And though we may be apart,
You'll stay in my heart.
You can depend till the end
That I will be your friend...

Jisne bhi tumhara naam rakha hai sahi rakha hai...
Ananya...one in a million...UNIQUE...
yeahhh you a unique piece Wink

 

you're # 2 today in HALL OF FAME (FAN FICTION) Party








Edited by aanisawarsi - 09 November 2012 at 4:03am

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Posted: 08 November 2012 at 10:56pm | IP Logged

res for update...Cry Cry Cry Cry
 


Edited by aanisa - 09 November 2012 at 2:59am

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Posted: 08 November 2012 at 11:33pm | IP Logged
nice update...

very heartwarming...

they will finally able to heal the gap in their hearts as they hv come out to each other n most importantly have each other by their side..

congrats on thread 5

pls continue soon

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