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Posted: 08 November 2012 at 9:43pm | IP Logged
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Posted: 08 November 2012 at 9:44pm | IP Logged
painfull but awesome...congrats for thread 5...

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Posted: 08 November 2012 at 9:49pm | IP Logged
my1500 post

res.

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i was thnkng that i wll not be able to post my 1500comment on ur update n wll hv to post it randmly but m glad u updated
thanx a lot di

coming back to d update
it was sooo emotional n heart touchng
LAFZON SE THA JO PARE
KHALI PAN KO JO BHARE
KUCH TO HAI IS UPDATE KE DARMIYAAAN

really di when i was readng this update i was feeling sumthng inside
don't know how to express it... luvd ur expressions
it s so true...lyf give us challenges n we hv to overcome it (survival of d fittest)
the way one seek comfort frm d other partner...sumtym hubby needs his wife beside n sumtyms wife needs him
. they both support each other n lyf goes on happily

d way he was holdng d proof of their loss n she placed her hand above it
Their unborn child…..
Resting between those two palms…..
it was just amazng
MAYBE THAT WAS NOT D RIGHT TYM FOR SYMBOL OF THEIR LUV TO COME
(maybe their symbol wanted to come in their lyf when they were together)

MAYBE( shayad ) is shabd pe to duniya kayam hai...there r several individual who start evryday of their lyf when d frst ray of sun enter their lyf wth d word MAYBE. ths word s small but really has a vry broad aspect

d endng was awesum
a ray of hope entering their lyf
Promising them of a brighter
future……
Giving them another chance…….
waiting for happiness to enter their lyfDay Dreaming

perfect title 'MAYBE'

luvly update
wth respect to u n ur work
---- shivi

Edited by shivi.10rocks - 08 November 2012 at 11:42pm

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Posted: 08 November 2012 at 9:57pm | IP Logged
You captured the pain of their loss very well! Today has been such a sad day with so much happening that I am out of words! 
Thank you for this beautiful story!

Maya Di

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Posted: 08 November 2012 at 9:58pm | IP Logged
beautiful update!! loved it!!

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Shruti21 IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 08 November 2012 at 10:17pm | IP Logged
Congrats di for your fifth thread.. 


i know i know you must be wondering from where i appeared... life is hell busy n i don't like giving one word comment atleast on some of my favorites ff..

comment..?? ohh its right down.. :P


every cloud has a silver lining.. i wonder when arnav-khushi will see their siliver lining... 

this was a heart-wrenching update.. trust me i was actually shivering and had goose bumps...

what more they are destined to face..?? i mean seriously meri life mein if i face this much trouble i don't think i will be able to survive...

my goodness.. how can you be so cool hearted di..?? i am wondering how you managed to write this.. SERIOUSLY..!!

everything was fine..to every extent but the ultrasound.. omg..that pain is beyond to be  thought..mumma.!!

you are just BRILLIANT...taking a bow infront of you di.. only you can keep your reader stick to your ff and yet keep the pace of the story slow.. i was like karti kaise ho aap...if you see in starting loads of thing happened then dhere dhere sab kuch slow-slow ho gaya.. don't know whether you got it or not..but still samajh jana..hahahaLOL

but i want you to continue till eternity... i have read the hurdles,the pain,the problems which arnav-khushi went through and i want to read about their happiness.. how they cope up with this bitter part of life,how they turn their every single bitter memory into a happy one..


P.S- sorry for not commenting regularly..Ouch


Edited by Shruti21 - 08 November 2012 at 10:25pm

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Posted: 08 November 2012 at 10:45pm | IP Logged
You are an awesome writer. Love your writing a lot.
Emotional update ... Khushi had to go through a lot ..
Now Arnav and khushi are together, will wait for their Happy moments Smile

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Posted: 08 November 2012 at 10:45pm | IP Logged
beautiful update...

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