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BARUNILU_Arshi Senior Member
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Posted: 09 November 2012 at 4:10am | IP Logged
awsum,mindblowing yaar...it was hot...omg I lovd it so much...well done...Thumbs Up

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Posted: 09 November 2012 at 6:13am | IP Logged
it's just too amazing beyond limits...
i really don't have any words to appreciate it...
u r such an amazing writer...
thanks for this beautiful os...

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Posted: 09 November 2012 at 6:48am | IP Logged
Loved it :D keep up the goodwork :)

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Posted: 09 November 2012 at 7:36am | IP Logged
awsum!!

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Posted: 09 November 2012 at 3:59pm | IP Logged
...erm...I'm kinda late for this aren't I?..LOL..

Oh Gawd! This is beautifully written! And you say you aren't a good writer, where the hell did you get that notion from, seriously? Your fics are just so brilliantly written, and this doesn't fail to meet any expectations at all...
If I were to summarise in word it would be this. Beautiful! <3

Faye x


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Posted: 09 November 2012 at 6:33pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by lovharshu

Now is this the "Aggressive love"????

Ohw! I loved it...each n every line of it Smile

Rey's Inner being as such "In his mind he knew that this obsession on her isn't healthy but he couldn't help himself, he is brain dead when it comes to her."


Taani's not her type thoughts which flash into her mind " Yeah she felt likeshe wanted to smack him so hard that his whole head twists around in circle for days and then she wanted to kiss him, yes it was totally confusing and annoying and he was the butt of all her problems, never relenting or even showing that he cared and if he did the next minute he became an angry young man, storming up a cloud."
The line emotes her love,frustration,anger,confusion ----- this particular line...I love it
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Then comes their aggressive Romance...ab uske baarey mein kya kehna Blushing
I was like dis all the timeBlushingBlushing

A very well written one-shot or I'd rather say beautifully aggressive Clap

Ok now I'm gonna run to ur FF Smile


I dont think it was as aggressive as I wanted it to be,but it was something I was working towards. Oh well i will try and improve on the agression on my ff. Thanks for the appreciation i do enjoy reading your comments...

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Posted: 09 November 2012 at 11:51pm | IP Logged
wow! 

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Posted: 11 November 2012 at 8:14am | IP Logged
omg this was  brilliant,awesome,really loved it
u defo have brilliant writing skills and the way u describe the scenes is commendable
taarey omg as such they r so hawt and the kiss made it even hotterBlushing
great job dear keep up the good work

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