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Kyun ke...virman ss part 5A pg 21 (Page 5)

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Posted: 23 November 2012 at 11:57am | IP Logged
sounds interesting...
continue soon
thnx for the pm.

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Posted: 23 November 2012 at 12:07pm | IP Logged
Nice continue soon

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Posted: 29 November 2012 at 8:14pm | IP Logged
hey guyzz how u all '.hope gud!!

I am here with first part of my ss kyun ke ..hope u like it please give ur feedback ok'

but first see how diya and sonia look
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                                      Part 1

  Everyone was having breakfast in choudry house when dabbu spoke.

Dabbu ' ajj mannu wapis a rahi hai apni parai (studys) puri karke he said happily

Nani ' toh hum kya karee haah ..woh mussibat wapis a rahi hai she said angrly

Dabbu got angry

Dabbu ' kyun karte hai ap saab usse masoom se itani nafraat haah ..kya kasoor hai uska he asked angerly

Madan ' tu toh aese puch raha hai jese tuje kuch pata hi nahi ...us larki ki waja se meri behen hum saab ke khilaf gayi thi

Dabbu ' jo kuch bi saloo (years) phele hua us mein manvi ki koi galti nahi thi yeh baat ap saab samaj lijiye

Rakesh ' galti hai uski waja hamari behen hum se dur ho gayi uski najayz ki waja se hi who hamare khilaf gayi

Dabbu ' bas bhot hogaya mai ab apni behen ke khilaf ek lafz (word) nahi sunuga 

Pinky ' chup kar who larki teri behen nahi hai samja teri behen yeh diya aur sonia hai samja

Dabbu ' manvi meri behen hai aur who mere liye sabse phele hai saabse he was fumming with anger

Nani ' bhot hogaya tera pyaar us larki ke liye kuch jyada hi ho raha hai ..kabhi apni in dono beheno ke bare mein bi soch liya kar

Dabbu ' in ke baree mein kyun ..kyun sochu mai inke bare mein yeh kis angle se meri behene hai mere samne yeh club mein un larko ke drink karti hai smoke karti hai ''jab bi mai apne kisi dost ke sath hota hu toh who hamesha muje inki harkato ke bare mein bata rahe hote hai ,,in dono ko behen kehte hue sharam ati hai muje.

Sonia ' oh pleasee phir se maat shuru ho jao ap drink and smoke normal hai bro aaj kar har larki karti hai'.its not a big deal

Dabbu ' it is sonia it isa big deal but tum nahi samjo gi kyun ke ghar pe tu dono ko koi kuch kahe tab naa

Diya ' so what u want us to do ghar pe baith jaye 'hum bas apne friends ke saath enjoy karte hai that's it

Dabbu ' oh yeah tum dono ke liye it just tume pass enjoy kar rahe hai friends ke saath karo karo 'I don't care

Kalpana ' tum in ki care kyun karo tume toh bas us larki ki hi fikar hai

Dabbu ' apne sai kaha muje sirf aur sirf apni amnnu ke fikar hai kyun ke who in dono ke tarah nahi hai who bhot massom aur pure hai who akeli delhi mein 3 salo (years) se par phir bi aaj tak usne kabhi kuch aesaa nahi kiya 'yeh baat toh hum saab jante hai ke manvi in dono se kahi zyada khoobsurat hai angel hai who lekin phir bi usne kabhi kuch galat nahi kiya

Diya ' manvi or humse zyada khoobsurat u must be kidding bro

Dabbu ' jhelous

Sonia ' oh please bro

Dabbu ' look mai saab ko btaa dena chata hoon ke agar ap log usse pyar se baat nahi kar sakte toh usse hurt bi maat kijiye gaa mai uski ankoo (eyes ) mai ansu (tears) nahi dekhna chahta samje ap saab saying this he left to his room not alowing anybody to say something

 

Evening time dabbu went to resive manvi I while ago manvi said him that she has missed her flight  but she caught a bus and she will coming a little late dabbu went to the street near their house as manvi told him that bus will leave her here as he was standing there next to his car waiting for manvi bus to come he saw virat and his friends a little far from where he was standing  virat was sitting  above his jeep smoking and his friends standing beside the  jeep also smoking.

Daabu hate virat and his friends he hate this gang .al they do is fight drink smoke and party 'dabbu had saw them many times hitting guyz like death and most importantly virat the india's most richest bussiness man's son a spoil brat 'everyday there will be news about virat and his gang in tv and newspaper  but these all don't care it was just so normal for them.

Suddenly  virat saw dabbu standing their looking at them angerly he  smirk

Virat ' eeeh dabbu waha kya karhaa hai yaar yahaa a naaa he said with a smirk

Dabbu look at him angrely

Dabbu ' no thanks muje tum logo se baat karne kaa koi shok nahi hai he said

Virat smile

Virat ' are yaar kya tu hamesha hum saab se naraaz rehta hai chor naa yaar idar aa he said smiling

             
Dabbu went to them and asked

Dabbu ' kya hai

Arif ' yaar kuch nahi cigret piye ga

Dabbu look at him angerly

Daddu ' yeh bakvas puch ne ke liye bulaya hai to mai ja raha hu and he was about to walk

Virat ' aree yaar dabbu ruk toh toh to yaar choti choti batoon mein gussa ho jata hai

Dabbu rolled his eyes

Virat ' wese tu is waqt yaha kese he asked

Varun ' lagta hai aj tu bi kisi ke saath wwe karne wala hai he said and everyone laugh except dabbu

Dabbu ' shayad tum log bhool rahe ho par yeh tum logo kaa kam hai meraa nahi

Mohit ' to tu bi jaa hamari gang mein

Dabbu ' jese mere pass or koi kaam nahi hai karne ko

Siddharth ' meri nazar mein tere pass ek hi kaam hai aur who hai tere dono beheno ko logo ke saath dekhna

Again all laugh and dabbu look at them angerly

Dabbu ' bakwas band karo tum log apni

Arif ' yaar hum kya kahee teri behene hi hum saab ke piche pari hai khass karke virat ke kya kahti hai who virat ko''''hah virat u look so hot virat ur so handsome he said the last part in girl voice and thye laugh

Dabbu ' maine unee kaha tha ke tum saab se dur rahe par who nahi samajtii ''par ab I don't care who jo karti hai kare

Mohit ' aesa kyun

Varun ' yaar jab behene hi aesi ho toh koi bi baas karde

Again they laugh

Dabbu ' dekho muje ab kisi or ki care karni hai ksii or ko khush rakhna hai kisi or ko tum jese se bachana hai

siddharth ' kis ki he asked

dabbu ' apni mannu ki he said smiling even when he think about his little angel he cant stop but smile

virat ' yeh mannu kon hai he asked raising his eyebrows

Dabbu ' meri choti si angel mera saab kuch meri behen

They all were surprised

Mohit ' behen teri ek aur behen hai

Dabbu ' haan

Varun ' who diya aur sonia ki behen hai kya

Dabbu ' nahi who un dono ki asli behen nahi hai

Arif ' acha wese kya who diya aur sonia ki tarah hai

Dabbu ' nhi woh in dono se bilkul alag hai

Virat ' acha to bata toh kese kesi ahi teri mannu

Dabbu ' kyun

Virat ' yuhi yaar tu usse itana pyaar karte hai toh bata kuch us ke bare mein

Dabbu ' dekho tum saab meri mannu bhot masoom hai ek daam bachi hai dil ki saaf aur mai usse tum saab se dhur (far) rakhna chahta hoon aur tum logo ko bi kah raha hu dhur (far) rehna usse

Mohit ' bara possesive hai yaar tu toh uske liyee wese yeh bata aaj tak toh hamne usse dekha nahi

Dabbu ' kyun ke woh aaj hi dekhi se apni collage studys khatam karke a rahi hai

Varun ' oh acha wese uski age kya hai

Dabbu ' 21

Siddarth ' toh phir tune kyun kaha ke ek daam bachi hai

Dabbu ' kyun ke who sach mein bachi hai masoom hai nahi samaj ti ke kon bura hai aur kon acha aur who fights saab se bhot daarti hai isi liye kah raha hu meri behen ke paas ane ki kosish bi maat karna tum log who bhot innocent hai

Virat ' choudry family mein koi innocent bi hai wah yeh toh new hai yeh toh news mein ana chaiye yaar

They all laugh

Mohit ' sai kah raha hai yaar tum logo ki family mein saab itane sharp aur matlabi (selfish) ho tumhari family mein koi innocent kuch jama nahi

Dabbu ' tum log apni yeh faltu ki bakwas band karo samje meri family jesi bi isse tum logo ko kya ''.aur rahi baat mannu ki toh who bhot innocent hai

Varun ' phir toh teri behen se milna hi parega he said smiling

Dabbu ' sochna bi maat samje

Arif ' wese tuje toh airport ya station pe hona chaiye naa tu yaha kya kar raha hai

Dabbu ' mai yaha isi liye hu kyun ke woh yahi ane wali hai

Mohit ' who kese

Dabbu ' uski flight chut gayi thi

Siddarth ' lagta hai teri behen sach mein choti bachi hai

Again they laugh

Dabbu was about to say something but stopped as he saw a bus came.

 

Ok that's it for now pleasee give ur feedback please..this is the first part so I am a lil nerveous



Edited by lalmirch - 02 December 2012 at 6:16pm

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Posted: 29 November 2012 at 8:48pm | IP Logged
awsom really it was a gr8 part, the waz u showd manvi dari v sehmi v nd virat a bad guy is gr8.. Plz make it love at first sight for both virman, thankyew so much for pm dear.. Plz update soon nd gr8 work keep it up<3

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Posted: 29 November 2012 at 9:13pm | IP Logged
Loved the update. Loved dabbu. A loving,genuine and true brother who is possessive on his sweet innocent lovely sister..Loved him so much.Loved the way u have characterized Virat .The way his interactions with dabbu made him t to go with the character u sketched for him.Loved the whole update.Thanks for the pm.Waiting for the next update.Smile

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Posted: 29 November 2012 at 9:46pm | IP Logged
Wow Wat a lovely update gr8!!!

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Posted: 29 November 2012 at 9:56pm | IP Logged
oh wow!!!!!! awesome start...Thumbs Up
beauty and the beast...i m loving this:):):)Embarrassed
dabbu is amazing...his love for his sister is so deep:)Day Dreaming
please continue soon as u get time:)Smile
thnx 4 pm dear:):):)Hug

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Posted: 29 November 2012 at 11:04pm | IP Logged
Waiting to see virat's reaction on manvi's arrival

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