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Kyun ke...virman ss part 5A pg 21 (Page 18)


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Posted: 20 September 2013 at 11:07pm | IP Logged
update plz...

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lalmirch Goldie

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Posted: 21 September 2013 at 4:21am | IP Logged

Helow my Frds back with new update and here I go


                            Part 4

Manvi was shivering badly sitting in his car and Virat was continuesly smiling while driving his car he looked at manvi and saw her she was hell scared he smirked seeing her

Manvi just wanted to go home she wanted to shout at him but she was so scared she was not even able to say a single word but she still tried

Manvi' pl..e please ...muj ..mujee jj...jaa...Jaane dii..jiye she said while crying

Virat smile again listening her he look at her side

Virat' tumme phele bi kaha hai meri jaan chali jana par thora sabar rakho wese tume daarne ki bi koi zaroorat nai hai Mai tume maruga nai he said and smirk

Manvi didn't know what should she do why this guy was talking to her like this they don't even know each other and beside it where he is taking her thinking all this she looked out of the window it was all dark outside so late at night and a guy who is all stranger to her is taking her somewhere Again she thought to try to convince him

Manvi' pl ple please mu muje mee mere ghh ghar jaa Jaane di di dijiye she said while sobbing

Virat looked at her angerly

Virat' tume ek baar mein samaj nai ata kaha na ghar bi chali jana par abi nai baad mein samji he said angerly

Manvi got more scared seeing him angry

She start looking out of the window while sobbing which irritated Virat but he didn't said anything

After sometime Virat stop his car and looked at her side who was looking out of the window lost in deep thoughts

Virat' chalo he said

Manvi came out of her thoughts and looked at him and saw him getting out of the car and came to her side he open the car door for her and held her hand and drag her out of the car

Manvi look front and saw a beautiful garden with small bridge a small river many flowers etc etc

Virat hold her hand and starting walking he went on the small bridge and stood there with the bridge reeling

He let go of her hand and asked

Virat' kesi lagi ye jaga he asked smiling

He looked at her side and saw her shivering and looking at the water from bridge he got very angry he don't like when someone don't answer him he don't like waiting

Virat' Maine tumse kuch pucha hai tume Sunai nai deta kya he asked angerly while hitting the reeling

Manvi suddenly shivered more with his behaviour

He came closer to her and she start moving back until her back hit with the bridge reeling Virat came and stand closer to her and asked

Virat' kesi lagi ye jaga he asked intensionly looking at her

Manvi was looking down in fear

Manvi' bh bhot khh Kubh khubsuraat hh hai she replied back

Virat smile and put his both hands on her waist and pulled her closer to him and manvi hands automatically came and rested in his chest but still she was looking down

Virat' par tumse Zada khubsuraat nai he said smiling

Manvi was getting more scared by his actions

Virat put his one hand on her chin and make her face him and saw her eyes which were full of innocents purity and fear He twisted her and now her back was facing him and hugged her tightly from behind and his hands rest in her belly manvi whole body shiver with his action he put his face on her right shoulder

Virat' tume daarne ki koi zaroorat nai hai Mai tume kabi nuksan nai ponchau ga Mai toh bas tumse pyar karna chahta hu pyar bhot pyar jitna kisi ne kisi se na kiya ho utna pyar he said lovingly

And manvi was shocked beyond limits listening to him suddenly she felt some moments and realise that it was Virat he was nuzzling his nose in her hairs

Manvi hold her skirt tightly in her small fist and close her eyes tightly After sometime she didn't feel any moment as Virat stopped she opened her eyes

Virat' manvi tume pata hai Maine jab se tume Dekha hai tab se kuch hosh hi nai rehta pata hi nai chalta kab kya kar jata hu tumhari Yaad dil se jaati hi nai dil karta hai bas yuhi tume apni bahoon (arms) mein liye rakhu aur kabi na Jaane du he said and hugged her even more tightly

Manvi kept silent

He turn her making her face him He cupped her face and looked in her eyes

Virat' I can't live without you samji tum I love u he said intensionly

And listening to him not just manvi but her soul also shivered He saw her shock face and smirked

Virat' shock maat ho ab tum ho hi itani ghazab ki ke pyar hogaya he said smiling

He looked at her for a while and moved his face forward and kissed her forehead manvi closed her eyes tightly he moved back and smile

Virat' so muje apna answer do jaldi

Manvi didn't know what to say

Virat' wait kahi tumhara koi boyfriend toh nai haina he asked comfused

Manvi still kept quite

Virat got very angry

Virat' Maine tumse kuch pucha hai damn it answer me tumhara koi bf hai

Manvi' n nai

Listening to her he smile

Virat' chalo acha hai kisi ki jaan Bach Gayi warna koi hota toh aaj hi maar deta usse Mai he said angerly

Manvi felt more scared

Virat' ab jaldi bolo Mai or wait nai karsakta Han bolo jaldi

Manvi was just so damn scared but she said

Manvi' Mm Mai kk Kese bo bolu ma maai tt to toh apk apko jja janti bi na nai hu she said innocently

Virat smile and said

Virat' toh jan Lena meri jaan us mein kya mushkil hai

Manvi' ple please aap a aa aesa maa maat ki kij ki jiye mu muje jaa jane do She plead

Now Virat was freaking out if his mind

Virat' bhot hogaya ab ye kya kab se Jaane do Jaane do lagaya hua hai hah tume samaj nai Araha that I love u damn it pyar karta hu Mai tumse pagalo ki tarha he shouted at her while shaking her

Tears start coming out of her eyes she was crying as Virat saw her crying he immegetly move a little back

Virat' manvi please rooh (cry) maat please manvi Mai tume aese nai Dekh sakta please stop crying

Manvi wiped her tears and said

Manvi' mm muje gh ghar jana hh hai

Virat' Theek hai tume ghar jana haina ok hum Jayege par phele answer me please say yes Mai tumse bhot pyar karta hu

Manvi' le leki Lekin mm Mai aee aese kk Kese ha Han Bo Bol du mm Mai tt toh apka na nam b bi na nai ja janti

Virat' ok fine ye baat hai toh Theek hai Mai tume kuch time deta hu 1 week ok 1 week hai tumhare pass muje jan Lena aur phir muje Han kahna Theek hai

Manvi didn't say anything

Virat' par agar 1 week baad tumne haan nai kaha toh Mai or bi bhot kuch karsakta hu get that in ur mind

Manvi shiver listening to him

And he start walking toward the car and she also they settle down in the car and he drove after sometime they reach her home and she left silently and he also went to his home

Ok that's it guys kesa tha???

Edited by lalmirch - 21 September 2013 at 5:17am

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virkush Groupbie

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Posted: 21 September 2013 at 4:42am | IP Logged
Yayy am the first...
Thank u so much for updating, my mood was off but ur update made me happy
Virat is really a bad boy, he is madly in love with her & will go to any extent and poor Maanu is so scared, hope Virat changes his behaviour...
Btw wht's ur name?Have send u a buddy request...
Kicha111 Senior Member

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Posted: 21 September 2013 at 4:44am | IP Logged
Nice update
Virat confessed hs poor manvi she evn don't knw hs name nd he s asking hr 2 say yes...
hmmm 1 week time aftr tht if she didn't tell yes thn he won't mind in doing anything...
do cont soon dear
qwerty012 Senior Member

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Posted: 21 September 2013 at 4:53am | IP Logged
Poor Maanvi!!  Virat is so impatient... But i like this virat...
I week .. let us see... Pls include some virman romance too

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Posted: 21 September 2013 at 4:55am | IP Logged
virat confessed his love.
manvi is so innocent.
jia123sagar IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 21 September 2013 at 4:56am | IP Logged
awesome update
luved it
poor maanvi
virat confessed his love
he gave her 1 week
waiting for next update
shaimah Goldie

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Posted: 21 September 2013 at 5:30am | IP Logged
Amazing update
Loved it
Continue soon and thanks for the pm!!

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