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Kyun ke...virman ss part 5A pg 21 (Page 13)

Huma0301 Goldie

Joined: 09 September 2012
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Posted: 12 September 2013 at 9:28am | IP Logged
Aaawww thats our mannu
sweet cute n adorable
nobody cqn resist her
buttt omg virat smirking not a good sign
eeekkksss cnt wait for nex part
continue quickly plzzz Wink

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manvilover18 Goldie

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Posted: 12 September 2013 at 1:10pm | IP Logged
finally u update...
super update...
plzzz plzzz update soon...
waiting for next update...

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lujeyn9 Senior Member

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Posted: 12 September 2013 at 2:35pm | IP Logged
Awesome update!!!!!!!!!!
thanx 4 pmSmile

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lalmirch Goldie

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Posted: 14 September 2013 at 9:22am | IP Logged

Helow lovelies :) Kese ho sab? Fit na gud acha wesy Mai tum Saab se gussa hu sirf tum logo k liye Maine wapis apni stories start ki or tum log itane kaam comments chalo ab Dekho abi se kahrahi agar is baar muje Zada comments nai mile toh Mai story continue nai karugi sorry agar rude lagrhi hu par wht can I do sorry isiliye baad mein muje maat kahna ke continue Karo ok thanks
Anyways here I'm with next part

                            Part 3

Manvi woke up in the morning and went to window and smile looking outside she was so happy yesterday she came back shimla and his Bhai has gived her so much surprises and happiness she look at her room and smile widely yea this was a gift from her Bhai she didn't had room she use to live in store room when she was young and now she is having a beautiful room just like a princess just bcoz of her Bhai she loves him a lot more then anything but she agree that she was missing her collage life her friends there masti everything and everyone she was missing them badly but what can she do collage has to end one day but she happy because some of her collage friends live here in shimla so that's means she's not so far from them.

Dabbu came to her room and saw her smiling lost in thoughts he smile looking at her and called

Dabbu' mannu

Manvi came back to actual world and said

Manvi' Han Bhaiya kya hua

Dabbu' muje toh kuch nai hua tu apna bata kaha ghum hai he asked while walking throwd her

Manvi' aree Bhaiya khai nai bas yuhi collage ki Yaad Arahi thi she answered

Dabbu' hmm samaj Gaya Yaad toh Ayegi hi itane salo se waha thi he said

Manvi smile

Manvi' wese bhaiya ap yaha itani suba koi kaam tha

Dabbu' Han actually mannu tujse kuch baat Karni hai par phele tu Beth yaha he made her sit on the bed and sit infront of her

Manvi' Han bhaiya bolo

Dabbu' Mannu Mai ye soch raha tha k ab tu yaha agayi hai toh aghe kya karna chahti hai like kuch or aghe Parhna chahti hai kuch classes Lena chahti hai Dekh mannu tu jo kuch bi karna chahti hai us mein tera bhaiya hamesha tere saath hoga ok he said Sweety Manvi felt so happy her bhaiya was always with her what else she want

Manvi' bhaiya Mai kisi art gallery mein job karna chahti hu bhaiya Mai artist banna chahti hu apko pata haina muje painting karna kitna pasand hai please bhaiya please she plead him innocently

Dabbu' aree pagli is mein please kyun karrahi hai ye toh bhot achi baat hai ke tu painter banna chahti hai ab Choudry family mein ek artist bi hoga muje koi aetaraaz nai hai mannu tu jab chahe join karle he said smiling

Manvi' thank u so kuch bhaiya I love u she hug him tightly

Dabbu' par tu konsi art gallery join karna chahti hai he asked

Manvi' the mesmerizing art gallery bhaiya woh shimla ki famouse art gallery hai Mai aaj hi waha jaugi aur unne apni painting dikhau gi ok

(Guys I don't know anything abt shimla toh bas aese hi art gallery ka naam likh diya pata Mai is naam se is duniya mein koi art gallery hai bi ya nai )

Dabbu' Theek hai mannu

It was evening time 4 o clock Dabbu went To office and manvi was getting ready to go art gallery she was wearing long flour length blue skirt and white short crop top showing her belly looking gorgeous as ever she took her handbag and put her pendrive in her back on which her painting where she went down stairs and saw nani and pinky where sitting in the sofa went to them and said them that she is going to look for her dream job they shout at her and said get out of their eyes she was hurt Tears came out of her eyes but she wipe them and went.

It was 7 in the evening and she was returning back to Home she couldn't believe that she got the Job their she was on cloud nine she was so much happy she was walking back home when she got call from Dabbu she told him that she got the Job he got very happy for his sister and told her that right now his going to Mumbai urgently regreting some office meeting and he will be back in 2 days she said ok sadly Dabbu also told her not to talk to people in home and be careful from diya and Sonia she agreed and cancel the call. She was walking when suddenly she saw some guys fighting they were 2 group of guys beating each other like death she got extremely scared she walk behind without looking and bump to wall she hugged her arms near her heart and tears came out of her eyes. They were Virat group and someother group but Virat gang where beating them more they where pleading to leave but these guys were not leaving suddenly Virat saw a little far manvi he can see that she was hell scared he smirked looking at her and told his friends to take all of them away and said he will join them in sometime they went and Virat start walking throwd manvi with a smirk

Manvi saw the guy coming to her she or more scared She was not able to move because of the fear and finally Virat came infront of her he put his arms on each side of wall to block her way he looked at her and smile manvi was very shocked and scared she don't know what to do she could see the guy looking at her with a smile but she keep looking at side way scared to face him she close her eyes Tightly and tears again start making their way out of her eyes Virat saw her tears and asked

Virat" daar lagraha hai he asked slowly

For once she look at him but in a sec she again turn her face sideway she was not able to say anything but still she tried to say something

Manvi " muj ..e ...ja ..jaan she just manage to say this

Virat"aree meri jaan tume aese Kese itani jaldi Jaane du abi toh hum mile hai phele ek dusre kon jan to le he said with his killer smirk

Listening to him manvi heartbeat stopped she got more scared

He saw her shock expression and smile still her face was side way he move his hand throwd her face and tucked her hair stand behind her ear and move his face forward and she close her eyes in fear he smile looking at her getting so scared and kissed on her hairs just above her ear and rest his lips there for gud 10 seconds then move back and still she has her eyes close tightly he held her from her naked waist and pulled her throwd him and her hands atomaticlly came in his bold chest

Virat"chale he said and smirk

And manvi was hell shocked where his gonna take her and why she wanted to ask but she couldn't because of her fear

Ok thanks it guys promise kiya tha ab jaldi update kiya karugi aur pura kiya par ab I'm saying agar muje is baar Zada comments nai mile toh Mai phir continue nai karugi ok na

Edited by lalmirch - 14 September 2013 at 9:39am

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pink1 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 14 September 2013 at 9:46am | IP Logged
nice update her brother so sweet he taking care her lot
and her behaving very rude to her and she got job in art
gallery and where her taken her and don't stop u r story
think those u comment and like u r story for them
u should write story  and update soon

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Huma0301 Goldie

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Posted: 14 September 2013 at 10:12am | IP Logged
Aaawww poor manvi
Only has a brother caring for her
but yeh virat woahhh
par mujhe lagta hai he will take her home
n that will make her think hes a good guy
dekhte hai wat happens
cnt wait
update soon plzzz Wink

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chandiniebinda Goldie

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Posts: 2406

Posted: 14 September 2013 at 10:32am | IP Logged
Awesome update..
Dabbu is really nice yaar... He is a too good brother...
Her family is really mean...
Manvi got the job.. And dabbu has to leave for 2 days...
Wow Virat is really fast yaar..
Loved it...
Pleasee continue soon and thanks for the PM...
And pleasee dont think about to stop this story..

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Posted: 14 September 2013 at 10:40am | IP Logged
Hi,dear its wndrful update !!!! Luv the bond share by manvi n dabbu !!!!! Hate pinky chachi ... Bt when virat is here nt to fear ,,,,, he is her saviour ... Hahhh @@@ really luv this virat ... Egrly waiting for next update &&&&&& dnt dare to quit the story ,, plz think about us,who do cmmnt n like ur wrk ... Plzzz !!!!!! Thanks alot for pm ,dear ... Keep rocking*****

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