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Kyun ke...virman ss part 5A pg 21 (Page 11)

chandiniebinda Goldie

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Posted: 02 July 2013 at 8:42am | IP Logged
Awesome yaar...

Love Dabbu care for Manvi...
Cant wait for Virman meeting...

You really stop on the wrong place yaar...

Pleasee continue soon...
And pleasee PM me alsoo..

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chandiniebinda Goldie

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Posted: 07 September 2013 at 2:04pm | IP Logged
When are you going to update???

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niki795 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 08 September 2013 at 12:01am | IP Logged
plz update..

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Posted: 08 September 2013 at 9:58am | IP Logged
It is such a nice concept..u should continue this..would love to read more
Plz try to update dear..whenever u get time..its a request

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..BlueBird.. IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 08 September 2013 at 10:29am | IP Logged
plz continue it.

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lalmirch Goldie

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Posted: 11 September 2013 at 10:21am | IP Logged
Hey I'm back after so so so long :) I know u futz must be very angry n u have all ryt to be angry but I'm really sorry guys believe me I didn't came to this forum bcoz of my personal Problems so please forgive me :) n now I'm here with new update so here I go ::)

                                                                Part 2

As Dabbu saw bus came n stop he smile widely after so long his gonna meet his mannu his angel

Dabbu' mannu agayi he said

Sidharth' aree wah chalo phir Milte hai Choudry family k Sabse chote member say he said teasing Dabbu n they all laugh

Dabbu give him I will kill u look

Virat' aree Dabbu gussa kyun hota hai Yaar chal hum Teri mannu ko dur se Dekh lege he said n winked

Meanwhile people where coming out of the bus one by one but manvi wasn't there Dabbu got tensed

Dabbu' mannu kaha hai he said

Virat' kya Teri mannu in logo mein nai hai he asked

Dabbu' nai he said

Dabbu went to bus driver n asked where is the girl name manvi the driver said he didn't know whom he is talking about Dabbu got angry he pulled him out of the bus by his collar N yelled

Dabbu' meri mannu kaha hai

Shocking everyone there Virat gang 2

Before bus driver could answer they heared beautiful voice from the top of the bus

Manvi' apki mannu yaha hai bhaiya she said smiling standing on the top of the bus

Dabbu smile looking at her

And our Virat he was just staring at the angel he was just so lost in her smiling while staring at her this never happen to him his heart beat became so fast he don't know what was happening his eyes where glud to her innocent and beautiful face

Varun saw Virat staring at manvi like she was the most beautiful thing in the world he called him but he didn't realise so he shake him by his shoulder and he came back to his sense

Virat' kya he asked

Varun' wohi toh Mai puch raha hu kya hua tuje mere Bhai he asked

Before Virat could answer they heared Manvi screaming bhaiya and hugged him Virat saw this and smile

After a while they broke the hug n Dabbu cupped her face

Dabbu' kesi hai meri Angel he asked lovingly

Manvi' apke samne toh hu ek dam fit she answered smiling widely

Unaware of the fact that someone heart was beating on the spead of rocket when ever she smile

Dabbu' acha aur ye bata k tu woh bus k upar kya karrahi thi he asked confused

Manvi' woh actually bhaiya Mai phele niche hi thi par bad mein na ek aunty ayi un k liye jaga nai thi toh bus wale uncle unne nai ane derahe the toh Maine unne apne jaga di or khud upar chali Gayi she said innocently

And Virat heart came out for her she was so innocent and pure hearted

Dabbu' mannu tu hamesha apne bhaiya ko proud feel karwa I deti hai I love u he hugged her

Manvi' I love u 2 bhaiya

Then that lady came whom manvi give her sit she give her blessings and said

Lady' thank u so much beta god bless you agar t na hoti toh mera kya hota

Manvi' are aunty nai bare sirf hum choto ko blessings dene k liye hote hai thank u ya sorry Kahne k lie nai she said sweetly

Virat was just lost of words she was sach a angel he just wanted to go and hug her and never let her go he was smiling continuesly looking at her

Then the lady left and manvi said

Manvi' bhaiya mere pass apke liye ek surprise hai she said cutely

Dabbu' surprise really mannu kya hai bata na he asked excitedly

Manvi opened her hand bag and took her thropy from it and show it to him

Dabbu' mannu thropy it means tu woh singing competition jeer Gayi he asked happily

Manvi' haan bhaiya she said smiling

Dabbu' I'm so proud of u mannu

After that he said her lets go home they where leaving

And Virat didn't want her to leave but she left without even noticing him
That time Virat decided that no matter what he will make her his and only his he don't care want he have to do or face to make her his he just want her that's what matters to him nothing else

Virat' aaj sirf Dekha Janeman par soon hum milege very soon u will me I my arms forever bhot jald he said with a smirk n smile.

Ok that's it for today I know short hai par ab Maine decide kar liya hai k Mai har 2 days baad update karugi :)

Edited by lalmirch - 11 September 2013 at 10:51am

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