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ArHi FF:3:The BEASTS and the BLEEDING ROSES (Page 88)

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Posted: 03 December 2012 at 10:35pm | IP Logged
the way you portrayed the emotions of her family is really beautiful...The same thing happened in the show...but the way you expressed their feeling were just too good...much better than the show...Loved the part...And even love the father-daughter understanding part...such a lovely bond...
Amazing part...Thanks for the pm :)

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Posted: 03 December 2012 at 11:05pm | IP Logged
Comment updated on 86!!

And I am waiting for next update... LOL Hum bhi katar mein hai...  Day Dreaming  Day Dreaming


P.S. @ arushi where did ur monkeys go?? i always loved them... bring them back dear.Big smile

@ shass where are u hon?? i saw u havent edited ur comment which is unusual... are u bg with studying??? Big smile


Edited by khusiarnav - 03 December 2012 at 11:07pm

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Posted: 03 December 2012 at 11:10pm | IP Logged
hi lin,

i m so sorry to have reserved and been unable to unres the spot...but there was a lot i had to write and couldn't do it because of the time constraints i am facing nowadays...today as well i am late and again i am sorry...okay lets start with the previous chapter...i already told u i am in love with fortune...and even more when he took word to the lordy lord...it was an intense chapter with funny situations and flirtatious comments flying everywhere...the grape incident was *ahem ahem* interestingEmbarrassed...now for the current update though i missed arhi and their jabber i felt grateful to u for showing us yet another part of the story...payal's love is blooming and their father is certain that the general is not the one for their daughter...it was heart touching and soothing as the impending danger of the general seems to be at bay for now...for those who have read carefully and with utter loyalty such diversions are necessary to go with story...to make it full and to kill the curiosity which grows in our heart..

love shamin

P.S. currently grapes are my favorite fruitWink

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Posted: 03 December 2012 at 11:56pm | IP Logged
A vry warm update, dr...
daughter father relationship, perfectly portraid...
Wish u good luck with xams..
come back soon...
will miss u in the inn...

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Posted: 04 December 2012 at 2:36am | IP Logged
awesome update :D
Thnxx<3<3

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Posted: 04 December 2012 at 3:10am | IP Logged
Thanks for sending the pigeon dear...
 
A very warm update... enjoyed reading it.
 
A loving, caring and well bonded family...
 
Buaji... jubilant and excited about the proposal for Khushi, Garimaji... a protective and vigilant mother concerned about khushi's future and life in getting her married to a military person, Shashiji... a sensible and judicious father who is wise enough to sense the fishiness in the General's character, Payal... a caring and loving sister expecting the assurance from her father to find the proposal worthy enough for her sister... Its interesting to see how each member of the family is concerned about khushi's happiness in their own way...
 
The lovely conversation between the father and daughter highlighted the lifestyle and beliefs in their world of Arhasia. Its a perfect blend of the age old moral values cherished in Indian culture and the modern thoughts and liberties of the western world. Loved it...
 
P.S. This story, according to me is no more a mere ArHi FF or IPKKND FF but simply its the TALE OF ARHASIA...
 
P.S.S. My best wishes to you and Aura for your uni exams... All the best.


Edited by hoopoe - 04 December 2012 at 3:10am

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Posted: 04 December 2012 at 4:06am | IP Logged
I kn0w m late...well I like this buaji better...a l0t better and n0 didnt miss ArHi

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Posted: 04 December 2012 at 4:30am | IP Logged
busy with studies and exam but loved this part.continue soon.

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