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ArHi FF:3:The BEASTS and the BLEEDING ROSES (Page 81)

Aquiline IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 02 December 2012 at 12:47am | IP Logged

To all my dear Comrades and Readers, for making my life more beautiful with your love for me...

Edited by Aquiline - 02 December 2012 at 1:01am

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Posted: 02 December 2012 at 1:38am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Aquiline

beautiful pic loved it... 

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Posted: 02 December 2012 at 2:12am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Aquiline

I wanted to thank each of you individually but I'm preparing to leave for my grandmother's now and once again, my planning of time leaves me with no choice but to shorten my thank you speech. But here's my love and thanks to all my Comrades and Readers for everything they have given me, You made me create Arhasia and Arhasia will be there for you to visit anytime you want. 

Welcoming new Reader Debby into our joyous midst and also announcing that Reader Revathy is now a Comrade (took the oath last night in the previous thread).


Would like to thank all those who commented all the days in my absence becoz reading your comments have strengthened me to stay strong even when according to Music's metaphor the Ship of IPKKND sailed into the horizon. But I am certain IPKKND Season 2 will be here soon. Believe and it will happen! 
With respect for my dear Comrades who requested to not speak of the show here, I stop for now, but leave behind this amazing video. Its the entire IPKKND in 8 and a half minutes. And the songs used are our very own! Tu HI Bata Meri Maula, IPKKND Title Song, Rabba Ve One, Rabbe One Two and so on...Watch memories and be strengthened to love them again and not be weakened to want to move away...Special thanks from all my Comrades to Ghausia who made it!

To all those who loved Fortune!

All Comrades and Readers are always welcome to hang out in the Cottage near the Inn. Thanks again Farwa!

And now to what happens in the forest of Arhasia...*ahem*clears throat* Someone hand me some warm drink and we'll commence!

Chapter One Hundred Ten: Tangles

The heat in the forest, as the day slowly retired to the late afternoon, was immense and Lord Arnav had removed off his coat and unbuttoned a few buttons of his pale shirt.

He had draped his coat over his shoulder and he was walking forward, his heavy boots crushing the scattered dry leaves on the forest floor, when he was overcome by heavy fatigue.

Sweat drenched his body and his shirt was beginning to stick onto him. The hair that fell on his forehead was wet too and he deeply inhaled and exhaled to calm his heating body.

And to make matters worse, he was hungry.

Since he hated having breakfast, he had skipped it in the hopes of returning to the Castle with the hermit in time for a plenteous lunch. But what with the girl's intrusion and the carriage disaster'''''..he remembered with clenched fists.

It was precisely at his time, as he kept trudging along, his coat held over one shoulder, that he heard a flutter of wings and something perched on his other shoulder.

He looked at it from the corner of his eye, knowing who it was by the mere flutter of the familiar wings, "What brings you back to me? Had enough of the village miscreant?"

The parrot squawked and flapped its wings, fanning Lord Arnav's face for a moment to feel the cool before crying, "Green Heart! Green Heart!"

Lord Arnav did not stop walking, "What is Green Heart?"

"Green Heart!!"

"Yes, what is it?" he asked causally, stepping over a root.

"Green Heart caught in Green braches!"

Lord Arnav stopped, confused, "What?" And then he frowned at the bird, "Is it a green female bird, this Green Heart?"

"Green Heart!" was the only thing the parrot said and Lord Arnav shrugged and kept on walking.

And then he saw the tiny strip of a gown in the parrot's claws, pressed on his shoulder and he stopped in his tacks, his fingers reaching for the piece of cloth. But before he could touch it, the parrot had taken off and flown in the direction of where he had come from.

A sudden wave of apprehension coursed over him. Was Kushi hurt? Was she the Green Heart he was referring to? Green branches?

And then without another moment's wait, he was rushing back, his coat slipping down his shoulder and falling onto the ground, forgotten by its master as the man raced back the way he had come, leaping over roots and circling trees to catch up with the flying parrot that was still in sight.

Almost an hour of running finally led him to a tree where Fortune perched and pointed his beak towards an oak tree further away and, panting heavily from the frantic running, Lord Arnav squinted up at its high branches.

His eyes shone with a relieved light when he saw her, alive and well, struggling in the tangle of vine creepers that grew around the tree.

"What are you doing up there?" he demanded, looking up at her.

Kushi stopped struggling and stared down, surprised, and then her frown returned, "Oh, it's you. What do you want?"

"Just curious as to what the village monkey might be doing tangled in forest vines," he smirked.

Lordy lordy showing his humors side and what to say abt the world famous smirk

Kushi gaped at him, "You! How dare-" And then she looked away, "Have you come here to offer a hand to aid me?"

"Must I?" he asked cunningly, "I think you are best left up there than down here eating one's sane patience away."

Kushi still didn't look at him, and grumbled, "Of course. Besides, I am nothing that you must care about."

He stared at her, remembering the echo of his words that had led to their separation a few hours ago.

He sighed, "You are very spoiled, do you know that?"  

"Not as spoiled as you," she muttered and resumed her struggles in the vine.

She heard some shuffling underneath and looked down to find him trying to climb up the tree.

"What are you doing?" she asked, alarmed.

He looked at her. "Something I will soon regret," he grumbled as he prepared to climb.

"No, I prefer being up here than down there with a heartless man like you," she said.

"Is it?" he asked casually, and stepped away from the tree, "Fine, suit yourself."

And then he was walking away, but he had barely taken a few steps when a loud yelp and the snap of breaking branches sounded in the air.

Turning around, in one swift move, he was beside the tree but the vine had grown around the tree in such a way that the fall was a skewed one, and his calculations of where she would be assuredly falling went awry.

Before he had realized his folly and his feet had taken the few steps to correct the mistake, the vine-tangled girl had hit the leaf-scattered ground, inches away from his reaching fingers.

"Kushi!" he yelled and leapt forward but his senses jolted and he stood still when he saw that she was not on the ground.

In fact, she had fallen into a hole, that had been covered by dry leaves, probably an animal trap intended by hunters.

"Kushi?" he called into the hole and, as the dust of the open hole cleared after her fall, he saw her look up from within the hole where she lay on a bed of dry leaves, her hair disheveled and her gown dusty, but her face was flushed and her eyes searching, trying to remember what had just happened.

The sight she was in was amusing but he wanted to make sure she hadn't broken any bones, "Are you alright?"

i cant stop imagining two eyes shining behind the face covered with dust and hair dusty and all messed up and i cant stop but laugh

Kushi was still tightly tangled in the creepers but she looked to where his voice had come from, and their eyes met and she frowned. "Why should you care!" she grumbled and then she tried to sit up but yelped in pain and lay back down.

His eyebrows slanted with concern Embarrassedand before he had thought it out himself, he had leapt into the hole which was not too deep but could be deep enough for one who fell from the top of a tall oak tree.

Kushi was appalled to see his tall shadow looming over her face, as he approached her, and she asked, "What are you doing here?"

She didn't like this at all. Was he going to break more of her bones for all that she had told him these past few hours?

He crouched beside her, "Does your back-?"

"I didn't break any bones, if that is what you are eager to know," she interfered, "The creepers held me inches away from the hole's ground before I hit it so my bones are well but my back is sore." She seemed to be talking to herself again.

"Well that is sad," he said, returning to his humor, "a few broken bones would have taught you to be more respectful in your speech towards me."

LOL oh lordy really ??? i seriously doubt it

"I would be respectful if you were one who deserved it," she said through gritted teeth, as she lay there, staring up at his face.

"So you need no help?"


He paused and then tilted his head, "May I ask why you climbed the ridiculous tree in the first place?"

"I was hungry."

"Oh," he smirked, "And I guess your appetite's extinguished after the accident."

"No, I had my fill of grapes before I got tangled in the vine," she stated triumphantly.

He cocked an eyebrow, "If you were so hungry, could you not have used the vittles my family had packed you off with for your home?"

"I could have avoided all this, of course," she said grudgingly, "If you hadn't gone and crashed the carriage and smashed the food basket along with one window!"

He frowned down at her and then he was contemplating whether to leave her there as punishment when his eyes fell on the unharmed grapes on the creepers that were wound around her.

His hunger, that he had been suppressing all this while, ravaged his mind again and he cast a glance on her face.

She was staring at him and she didn't like the expression on his face especially because it had something to do with the rounded grapes on her form. Embarrassed

"Are the grapes good?"

She frowned, "Why don't you climb the tree yourself and see?"

His eyes glinted evilly, "I am the Master of an Empire. I climb stairs, not trees."

"You're right," she muttered mischievously, "Besides, how can you climb a tree with that heavy ego on your back."

LOL oh god both of them never leave a chance

Rage flashed through his cold eyes but he didn't say anything.

Instead, he leaned down at her feet, and without touching her with his hands to keep her still, knowing that astonishment would keep her immobilized for him, he opened his mouth and bit the rich violet grape that was on the creeper around her ankle.

Fire rocketed up her leg, when his warm mouth had touched her tender ankle.

She inhaled heavily to calm herself but felt her strength slipping when she felt his mouth beside her knee. Though there was a gown between his mouth and her skin, she could feel the burning heat of his lips as though she were without cloth.

"No! What are you doing!" she managed to word.

"I'm hungry too," he said in a low voice and resumed picking on the grapes upon her body with his mouth.

i blushed like mad though he wasnt doing anything to her but still

"You're the Master of an Empire," she tried to reason with him to try to stop this sweet torment which she could take no more, "You are not used to eating forest fruits without having them washed well."

"Hunger in a Man does not make him pause to think of cultural norms."

hmm true

Kushi gasped, feeling his mouth near her thigh. Warmth swirled in the pit of her stomach and she groaned, "Please stop. If you're hungry, I will try and pluck whatever fruits I can find as soon as we get out of this hole."

"My hunger cannot wait," he stated simply, and his mouth was around a rich round grape near her waist.

She groaned, "No! Stop this''..." she tried to move her arms to push him away but the constricted creepers made any movement impossible.

"Do you want me to stop?"

"Yes, please!" she cried into the air, feeling his mouth near her shoulder.

And then fire exploded.

One last grape had remained in the crook of her neck, the only exposed part of her skin where the grapes were to be found. He had thought of stopping the torment with that one last fill but the moment his wet mouth had pressed on neck, his hunger found new delight.

my heart! hai so many rabba ves 

Kushi froze the moment she had felt his hot breath on her neck, and then when his burning mouth had pressed on her tender skin, she lost all sense of where and who she was. All she knew was she wanted him to find more grapes on her skin even though they would not be there.

oh dono taraf hai agg barabar lagi hoi... so romantic

She closed her eyes as he bit the grape, a drop of the violet juice falling on her fair skin. After having devoured the grape, he licked the drop on her neck with his burning tongue and she moaned.

Lord Arnav was lying along her length, when he had come to take the grape from her neck.

He looked at her when he had licked the drop of grape juice off her neck. Her cheeks were red and her lips trembling, while her eyes remained closed, taking in the torture he was meting out to her.

Her moan had undone him and he had leaned down to taste her neck again, to hear that moan again, when the parrot squawked overhead from a tree branch.

arghhh Fortune u r lady anjali in a bird avatar soiling the right moment... but what if it hadnt squawked what would have happen.

The spell broke and he moved away from her and she stared at him, her gaze dazed under the heated moment's aftermath but shocked too as realization seeped into her consciousness.

He stood up and was about to walk away when he realized she could not get up because she was tied down by the creepers. He crouched down beside her and she gazed at him wide-eyed, afraid he might commence on the torture again.

His hands had reached towards her and she had nearly yelled "No", when his fingers circled around the creeper near her waist and he slowly tried to ease it off her, without hurting her.

It was not an easy process.

"You need to stand," he stated.

She tried to sit up and he helped her to her feet. She was unsteady on her feet and leaned against him for balance. He appeared unaffected but she didn't know how hard it was for him to stay expressionless.

hai poor lordy

When she was finally poised in her equilibrium, she moved away from him, and his fingers were reaching for the creeper binds around her again.

Slowly, tenderly, his hands pulled at them, not letting them snap against her skin lest they hurt. He unwound them, circling her where she stood according to how easily the creepers around her could be undone. Occasionally, his fingers brushed against her skin and she would gasp inwardly and he would try to be more careful next time, more for his sake than for hers.

loved the recreation of my one of most fav. dewali scenes

Soon, the creepers no longer tangled her but lay on the bed of dead leaves in the hole they were standing in.

Her eyes were on the mess of the vines by her feet, unable to look into his eyes and he was looking towards the rim of the hole, trying to focus on how to get out than on the intense aftereffects of all the slow turning and touching.

Suddenly Kushi cried, "Oh, my dress!! It's ruined!"

Lord Arnav looked at her and saw her turning about, trying to look over her shoulder to the rear of her gown, and he saw that the grapes under her had crushed with her fall and the back of her gown was drenched entirely in the violet gluey juice.

He shook his head, "You invite hazards, don't you? One after the other!"

She stopped looking at her gown over her shoulder and shot him a look, "Well, good you mentioned it because you seem to be a recurring hazard in my life. Over and over again, popping up everywhere to wreck my life."

He gritted his teeth, "Don't start with me, again, Kushi Kumari Gupta."

"I would not want to start anything right now," she said hotly, "But I would be really thankful if you could get me out of this wretched hole, Lord Arnav Singh Raizada!"

Glaring at her, he moved to the end of the hole and climbed out. Then he leaned forward and stretched out an arm towards her.

She stood staring at the hand for a moment, not wanting to touch it, but she found her dusty hand slid into his dirtied one. The warmth in his hand assured her and he closed his fingers around her hand, securing her for the hoisting.

Then he lifted her up and they were out of the lurid hole at last.

She moved away, wanting to be as far away from him as she could be, and he looked to the parrot perched on a low branch nearby, wanting to divert his own muddled up emotions, "Come Fortune, let's go. We've wasted precious time already because of someone's festival stunts."

She looked at him and opened her mouth to respond but stopped herself in time.

She was not wanted with him but she was scared to leave the forest now especially because the sun would set any moment now and she would not reach home before it was dark.

Lord Arnav had taken a few steps forward, away from her, when he stopped and looked over his shoulder. He saw her standing there, beside the hole, dejected eyes cast upon the ground.

"If you will stay quiet and not mess with my head, I will escort you back home as soon as we find the hermit."

yes yes  Dancing

Kushi looked up, her eyes shining gratefully, but he had already walked on, and she retrieved her tiny box from beside the tree and rushed after him, Fortune encouragingly nodding at her as he sat perched on Lord Arnav's shoulder.   

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to be honest this was such an epic update tht words are not enough to praise u and i m lose of words to tell u how ii felt Clap

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Posted: 02 December 2012 at 2:26am | IP Logged
Originally posted by shass

Originally posted by Aura7



           GRAPE RELISH!Tongue


no doubt

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Posted: 02 December 2012 at 4:21am | IP Logged

Damnit I cant find where I resd' last time... Angry Anywho, here goes!!!! Smile


CH 99: You painted such a dark and dinghy picture of the dungeon that I felt profoundly sad for our darling Khushi, who was manacled and chained there by that ruthless beast…. Her scream of pain when she tried to move her chained hand had me wanna reach out to her and comfort and free her of this bondage and injustice…. I swear I'm gonna bust a few veins if this doesn't stop soon, it's highly inappropriate to be doing this to a girl who merely voiced her opinion to her mistress, how the hell was she supposed to know that such an innocent act was gonna be reciprocated by this level of stupidly stubborn madness…. Confused


Why oh why……   Cry Cry Cry


Serves you right Raizada, toss around more and more… Oh I wish I could torture him as well…. Angry


Gah, scary dreams Lordy Lord has…. I am guessing there is way more to this than meets the eye, but I'm too excited to read what's gonna happen next to slow down and put on my thinking cap!!!!  One thing I realize though, does Khushi have the key to his freedom??? Did the Dark Lady imply that????? Shocked 


Am glad that you showed the rest of the family to be deeply perturbed by the incident…. Makes me think that our dear aint all alone after all…. Rahim chacha is a dear…. Thumbs Up


The fact that he understood from Arnav's facial expressions that he wasn't gonna harm Khushi is such a relief I tell you… Thanks for making the chapter end on a good note… God knows I couldn't have taken any more pain….. Ouch


CH 100: YOOOHHHOOO!!! A centenary of wonderful chapters!!! Congratulations my dear, I have said all that I wanted to regarding this magnificent feat in my PM to you and hence I'll get on to reading straight away!!! Clap Clap Clap Clap  


Ohk it was SUCH a wonderful idea for the 100th Chapter to be posted on the 100th page!!! Kudos to everyone who thought of it and all those who made it happen!!Star


Also Lin, I LOVED the picture of the book!!! Being an avid reader it is a very soothing site to see an pld book, I love the feel of the pages, the musty smell that emanates from such tokens of a bygone era and most of all I was extremely joyous that you used it here… Sheer PERFECTION!!! Approve


The entire scene could have just been played out in front of my eyes…. I tell you Lin your powers of description are just amazing!!! The way he was tensed and worried about her, his fear on seeing her cold & lifeless, the way he wanted to bring her back all spoke of a desperation in his demeanor… And boy did I LOVE IT!!!! Thumbs Up


You know it was a masterstroke to include his thoughts in the scene, we saw for example how he thought to put her on his bed but then he refutes it, the way he thinks of heating her up, decides that she aint worthy of it but then gives in anyway just to save her… All of it indicate that deep down he is a human and cares for her though subconsciously but since he has been a beast for too long his ruthlessness and hard manner rise up to the surface…. I loved seeing this paradox in this chapter and I applaud you for doing full justice to this incident…. Clap Clap Clap 


Again the fact that her scent calms him down, the concern for her rises to the forefront…. He gets a little naughty there Lordy Lord! I was sorely tempted to see him kiss her but ahhh patience…. Day Dreaming


See there rises the beast again. Refusing to tear one of his clothes to clean her wound…. It's delightful to see the conflict within him…. Awww, he sleeps with her in his arms…. Boy I cant wait for the "morning after"!!!!! LOL Wink 



CH 101: I had this HUGE GRIN on my face as I imagined them LEAPING off the bed in their haste to get away from each other!!!! Embarrassed LOL Tongue

Hmmm, Khushi is so justified in giving him a piece of her mind…. But you gotta appreciate the girls' guts man, I mean she is actually shouting and fighting with the very man who put her in that vile dungeon in the first place…. 


Oops!! OP must have been scarred for life!! Poor guy, wrong timing I gotta say!!!! Wink 


Ohk, I seriously wanna murder him now, WHAT THE HELL man??? He really threatened to throw her out the window again??????? Like seriously??? Oh give me one of Buaji's swords right now someone, I'll like to put some sense into his thick skull…. How MUCH MORE is our darling gal gonna suffer at the hands of this monster, and that too all for no fault of her own…. Nuke

Thank GOD Anjali came bang on time…. I shudder to think of what might have happened… The dame is in distress and I SOOO wish for her to just leave and go back to her family… Anyways, she aint working here anymore, no financial reason for her to stay back…. Please let her go and have some peace and happiness in her life again…. Censored



CH 102: You know what I do not like??? Someone like Arnav being blackmailed/forced to give an apology without the perpetrator actually feeling even an iota of guilt… Coz that just brings out the worst in him…. I mean now he is gonna go to her and apologize in a way that makes it look like he is doing her a favor or he is just gonna say more demeaning ad insulting things to her…. And I DETEST that….. Angry Thumbs Down

Gonna comment on the remaining chapters soon!!! take care and lotsa love!! Hug 

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nashmia Goldie

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Posted: 02 December 2012 at 9:01am | IP Logged
Aweosmeee update dear ...
Loved it ... Very beautifully written ...
Shooo sooory for late comment ...
I am busy in my vivas ...

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Posted: 02 December 2012 at 9:14am | IP Logged
LS ... I had to leave you a pink etching ... always present, always proud ... always remember you with a smile Hug x

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Posted: 03 December 2012 at 12:24am | IP Logged
I edited my comment on page 74...

P.S @ aura... the pictures are awesome... the grapes tree, grapes... ohhh... amazing!!Day Dreaming i dont know how u can manage to get those awesome pics... but thank u... Heart

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