Fan Fictions


Fan Fictions
Fan Fictions

ArHi FF:3:The BEASTS and the BLEEDING ROSES (Page 75)

bablio09 Goldie

Joined: 04 August 2010
Posts: 1148

Posted: 01 December 2012 at 5:30am | IP Logged
You are a star dear Lin.  Another chapter full of Rabba ve's.  I was literally singing rabba ve when he was devouring the grapes.  

fantastic update.  i so wish that they stay in the forest overnight in each others arms WinkLOL.   

i love reading these long chapters.  feels like an episode without the disturbaces of HP, ANjali, Nani, Buaji  etc.

I know i know Fortune was there,  but then he is such a darling to find the Lordy Lord and get him back to rescue the tangled Khushi.

Just saw the VM too.  fantastic one.Clap  Thank you Ghausia.

Thanks for the pigeon dear Lin.

Edited by bablio09 - 01 December 2012 at 6:17am

The following 5 member(s) liked the above post:


-Farwa_Ibrahim- IF-Rockerz

Joined: 29 June 2012
Posts: 9357

Posted: 01 December 2012 at 5:46am | IP Logged
i love u Lin love u sooo much[>:D:<]... Loved the updateHeart... It was epic... So romantic n cute... My smile grew wider and wider with each line... I m quoting some lines from the update and remaining will also be quoted when cant tell u... So here i go

Lord arnav stopped confused ''what'' and then he frowned at the bird '' is it a green female bird,this Green heart?
really lordy u thought fortune has found a crush lolz and of cource how can he understand to whom Fortune is meant by green heart... In intellegence he is not as good as khushi i guess...

When he saw some torn clothe of her gown in paw of Fortune he became worried for khushi... Hai such concern love it

hahahahah LOL[ROFL] he called her '' village monkey''... lordy has some sense of humor[:O].

He looked at her "something i will soon regret''
Lolz i dun think so lordy

Instead he leaned down at her feet and without touching her with his hands to keep her still,knowing that astonishment would keep her immobilized for him,he opened his mouth and bit the rich violet grape that was on creeper around her ankle.

i couldnt help but blush and my heartbeat going all DHAK DHAK and unlike khushi i was sure it has nothing to do with acidity...

And then the torture went on and so does my heartbeat and my smile grew wider... Till he ate the grape on her neck... Time stopped so does my heartbeat for a moment and then my cheeks grew red and my heartbeat as wild as khushi... Loved it... It was such a romantic update without much of physical touch as being physical is not necessary for being romantic and love doesnt need too much of physical touch a mere glance a smile little brushes of touches... I really love this kind of love... And i always love this kind of update lots of applause... I wont mind to say it a sizzling update...

Than u so much Lin sweetheart for the special pigeon I really m thankful to u. Really i cant thank u enough. There will very rare storytellers like u not only by the way u narrate but most because of the beauty of ur heart... We the comrades and readers r honored to have such a geniune person with us.

Edited by -Farwa_Ibrahim- - 01 December 2012 at 5:53am

The following 8 member(s) liked the above post:


hoopoe IF-Dazzler

Joined: 10 January 2012
Posts: 2874

Posted: 01 December 2012 at 5:54am | IP Logged

Thanks for sending the pigeon dear...

Once again, the chapter left me all mesmerised... my mind is still dazed and roaming somewhere in the alluring jungles of Arhasia... with no mood to come back to the real world. I feel nostalgic after reading  their romantic adventures in the dark jungle...
His subtle way of expressing his emotions... her childish acts... their continuous bickering... their repeated struggles to control the conflicting emotions and desires of heart and mind... the gradual strengthening of the emotional bond they share even unknown to themselves... its always a pleasure to read about these two sweethearts.
I have never mentioned it before. But today i feel like saying it... Thanks for keeping these epic characters alive in the world of Arhasia through this unique FF. You have not only maintained the original essence of the characters, but also added more depth to the characters and the plot, doing perfect justice to this epic story. Thank you... Hug

Edited by hoopoe - 01 December 2012 at 5:55am

The following 8 member(s) liked the above post:


angeldream14 IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 19 November 2011
Posts: 12654

Posted: 01 December 2012 at 8:09am | IP Logged
will this jorney change things b/w them
wills hyam's truth be out soon

The following 4 member(s) liked the above post:


Ayaat1216 Senior Member

Joined: 25 June 2012
Posts: 434

Posted: 01 December 2012 at 8:34am | IP Logged
Wow greatly written Big smile
That was quite hot lol with him eating the grape out of her neck, damn fortune for interrupting!!! Tongue

The following 6 member(s) liked the above post:


Aura7 Senior Member

Joined: 05 May 2012
Posts: 564

Posted: 01 December 2012 at 8:34am | IP Logged
updated in p.75 Smile

The following 6 member(s) liked the above post:


Mxk3444 Goldie

Joined: 11 April 2012
Posts: 1500

Posted: 01 December 2012 at 8:48am | IP Logged
You seriously have no idea how happy i am to read this scene in the story! It brought back so many joyful memories. As I was reading i kept remembering how the scene was played out on Iss Pyar. I truly am thankful for you in writing this out. The Nanital scene was one of my favorite scenes and I was so happy that you managed to grab the essence of the scene. You did a wonderful job in writing everything out including a few twists of your own! I love you for writing out this story it truly is helping us remember how awesome Iss Pyar was. I cant wait to read the update on Monday! Have a nice weekend!!!

The following 5 member(s) liked the above post:


Pristineblue Groupbie

Joined: 22 May 2012
Posts: 68

Posted: 01 December 2012 at 9:06am | IP Logged
Great update waiting for the next one u know what ipkknd wil live in our hearts only if arhi writers never give up their passion to write...until the next season comes it is really going to be tough with no ipkknd so cheer up give us updates whenever u can make arshi live...

The following 6 member(s) liked the above post:


Go to top

Related Topics

  Topics Author Replies Views Last Post

2 3 4 5 6 7 8

Author: Hina69   Replies: 58   Views: 64421

Hina69 58 64421 11 September 2016 at 8:28am by TANVI_SEXY
Arhi os:Khushi's chalenge to Arnav for arhi sangeet

2 3 4 5 6 7

Author: Hina69   Replies: 55   Views: 55850

Hina69 55 55850 30 August 2016 at 5:27am by Jinitha55

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 156 157

Author: Aquiline   Replies: 1253   Views: 373201

Aquiline 1253 373201 18 January 2016 at 6:17pm by asgeet

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 147 148

Author: Aquiline   Replies: 1178   Views: 118747

Aquiline 1178 118747 04 March 2014 at 10:38pm by princessunara

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 140 141

Author: Aquiline   Replies: 1120   Views: 134013

Aquiline 1120 134013 29 January 2014 at 11:18pm by dpriyad

Forum Quick Jump

Forum Category / Channels

Fan Fictions Topic Index

Disclaimer: All Logos and Pictures of various Channels, Shows, Artistes, Media Houses, Companies, Brands etc. belong to their respective owners, and are used to merely visually identify the Channels, Shows, Companies, Brands, etc. to the viewer. Incase of any issue please contact the webmaster.

Popular Channels :
Star Plus | Zee TV | Sony TV | Colors TV | SAB TV | Life OK

Quick Links :
Top 100 TV Celebrities | Top 100 Bollywood Celebs | About Us | Contact Us | Advertise | Forum Index