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ArHi FF:3:The BEASTS and the BLEEDING ROSES (Page 54)

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Posted: 24 November 2012 at 10:16pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by kushipugly

Superb update Aquiline & yes all my guesses go down the drain that it was anjali's paln to send kushi with arnav but it was indeeed O.P neglegance towards the whole khushi departure plan.
i m sorry, wont be able to review in detail as close family staying over the weekend, so just sneaked out to read the update & comment.
My dearest Sweethaert Aquiline, i m looking forward to see you soon inshaAllah. hope you come back safe & sound.
 
You said you going to a holiday ,will come back & you are coming back .
barun sayingg the same thing, i hope he keeps his word which he indeed will but  but but i m just sick n tired of SP lies.
Nomore ipk for me now, enough of this headache & heartbreak & i refuse to take it anymore . now i just want to indulge on my & our favourite ff TB & TBR.
 
 
 
Love you aquiline, glad to know people like you who keep their words & always care for the feeling of their fans, dont leave them in the middle of nowhere unlike sp/ph!
Love you so so much...
 
 
 

My dear Kushipugly,  the hurt will soon go away...believe me.  I still think it was Barun's decision and we should respect it.  If you think of it that way, it will be easy to move on. Pls don't be sad, we need your happy and bubbly personality here... AND as you said so rightfully we have our own TB&TBR and guess what, i think a Rabba Ve scene is in the making ... so there is something to look forward to. 

Its funny my guests just left and now you've got guests...enjoy your time with them and see you soon - happy and smiling okay!

Hugs and kisses,
Leafs


Edited by Leafs - 24 November 2012 at 10:27pm

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Posted: 24 November 2012 at 10:44pm | IP Logged
superb update

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Posted: 25 November 2012 at 12:33am | IP Logged
Ohh wow!! 

that was a quick update and a wise thought to have it injected before the Arnav - Khushi scene... 

Lady Lav .. Lady Anjali... dont worry u butter cups ... its all meant to happen!! 
Yes ... Nani ... u know whats best!! 

sorry folks its just me today ... my lill monkey are off for the day ... 
but nevertheless i shall return to the INN with them soon for the next update!! :)

c u guys soon!!

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Posted: 25 November 2012 at 2:41am | IP Logged
i smell conspiracy here.! lol i loved it.

was not able to comment in your earlier chapter

as i was having ma semesters. but here i m now.! desperately

waiting for ur next part..

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Posted: 25 November 2012 at 3:16am | IP Logged
its impossible not to wait for updates
105 -pg 16
106 -pg 28
107 -pg 39
108 -pg 50
...love them

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Posted: 25 November 2012 at 3:33am | IP Logged
so Nani is the one behing this all
can' wait to see what happens next
thanks for the update

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Aaannnd I AM BACK!!! Whew again I return to see a pile up of chapters waiting to be read and commented on… Boy do I have a lot of work to do…. LOL

 

CH 92: Just the beginning of this chapter was so arousing, in the sense that the scene with Arnav staring at the flickering candle made me think about the things to come….. And hence it aroused in me emotions that can't be put into one word, it was a combo of anticipation, fear, anxiety, excitement and nervousness all at once… Just imagining him sitting in that pose and lost in his thoughts made a very breath-taking picture…. Wink

OH MY GOD (in Janice style), he was thinking about all that???? And finally the bleeding roses make an appearance… They feature prominently in the title of the FF and I was curious to see how they would be incorporated into the story… Well now that I think of it, it makes me think of Khushi and her love, would it be laced with bloodshed in the sense that would her emotions, her innocence, her beliefs be butchered by the beasts surrounding her coz that would tally with the red sullying her white dress, will she be tainted by the beasts, would they overpower her and destroy her, or would she make them feel what they never thought existed??? This has many connotations and hence their interpretations are also varied….  Shocked 

Another possibility is that she makes him bleed, what I mean here is that she makes him human, takes away the animal in him, makes him feel again… Or is it to do with the war that is gonna erupt between him and Shyam??? Oh dear sweet lord, what do I make of this puzzling piece of a dream???? Shocked

Awww he finds the room empty without ther scent! Is that sweet or what?? Embarrassed

REALLY??????? Khushi has the same kind of dream too???? My  god what are you hinting at Lin???? But here, she holds the roses and THEY do NOT bleed, it's the BLOOD FROM HIS HANDS that falls on her dress staining it, also the fact that he marked her as his by smearing her cheeks with blood is very significant…. Thumbs Up

A very INTRIGUING chapter I must say…. It has set the wheels turning in my brain…. LOL

 

 

CH 93: After having read your note at the beginning I must write in a word for arushi_fan's comment… That was brilliant insight dear…. Kudos… Clap Clap Clap

I will say it again Lin, the way you describe a scene is just stunning, from the owl hooting to the gloominess of the night all just paint a picture in my mind and I feel so easy to imagine whatever happenings you so graciously say… It is a talent I tell you, to be able to transport the reader to a land of imagination and YOU my dear, are excelling at it… Cool

Ohk, you simply pile on to our misery don't you???? Evil you are… Dropping hints in the form of bits and pieces here and there about what Arnav & Shyam actually are and not telling us all, making us guess and estimate and imagine all sorts of things… Now I see the General can fly and boy do I not like it at all, he might take Khushi and fly off one day! But I wanna read and find out WHAT he IS…. Angry

The poor cat *chuckles* that was a good one Lin!! Wink

OMG he is that desparate??? And to top it off, she sees him in the middle of the night, in her lawn, trespassing  and what does this girl do??? she goes to him with a blanket! *smacks hand on head* That girl is too trusting and nice for her own good….. *shakes head and sighs in defeat* Wacko

 

I know I am supposed to give the General a chance but come on man, saying that he has NO family is way too much… I mean I know he isn't connected to Anjali the way he is to Khushi but then why lie yaar, you don't love the woman, you be a man and say it…. All this hiding is nothing but cowardice…. Censored

 

And voila, what do we get??? A FREAKING PROPOSAL… Ooohhh Beast or not, I wanna wring his neck for sure… Censored

 

Thank you Khushi for realizing your feelings for him were nothing more than a friend and not leading him on…. Dancing

 

I cannot tell you how happy I am to know that Shashi saw it all, why doesn't Khushi tell him everything though???? Would have made a lot of things easier… Ahhh, the way human minds work, you can never understand a person's reasons for doing/not doing something….. Party

 

Now coming to your note at the end, I tried to find out the other lie and I failed miserably… Coz when I read it all again, I could see that all of it was true form his perspective… The fact that he was lonely, had no family, wanted a companion, all pointed to the fact that he did not consider Anjali as his wife from his heart, did not think of her family as his and hence seeked refuge and solace elsewhere… All this I can understand but cheating a woman who worships you like a devotee is totally unpardonable…. Dead 

 

P.S. I agree with Indiavizion's comment, if she brings out the beast in him he should STAY THE HELL away from her, but as per my understanding,  his mind thinks that if she can turn him into the animal she can turn him back as well, THAT I guess is the reason he goes to her, seeks her out and offers her companionship… Thumbs Up

 

P.P.S. Special mention to Kushipugly for the pic of Shyam on pg 40 of thread two, great work dear… it captures the essence of the beast and the man aptly and perfectly…. And also to medharees for that AWESOME poem on the same page…. Heart

 

CH 94: WHAT IS ALL THIS TALK OF YOU GOING AWAY FROM THE FORUM????????????? I THREATEN YOU LIN, U R STAYING PUT, YOU HEAR ME???????????????? Broken Heart

 

Awww, La is really turning out to be a dear…. Poor Khushi I can empathize with her coming away from home, leaving her family behind. It's one of the hardest things to do…. 

 

Can I hug La, PRETTY PLEASE!!!!! And kisses to you as well for making La realize this soon enough and also be humble and friendly enough to REMOVE Khushi as a handmaid and ask her to stay as her FRIEND!!! That just warmed my heart to no end…. Hug

 

Hmmm, so the lordy lord was gloomier than La eh??? I bet he missed her like HELL!!! Khushi is really an angel I tell you, she helps La in all her endeavours and also makes her agree to meet Nani… Ohhh I am excited to see what happens!!! Big smile

 

Great Chapter Lin, you emphasized the power of emotions and feelings and most of all FRIENDSHIP!!! Heart

 

CH 95: One word, ADORABLE! The way La really addressed Khushi, asking her permission, being so kind and polite all just made me smile as well, and even nani saw the change that has occurred and also accepted La… Ah happy times… I wish they lasted forever….

 

Boy am I glad that nani showed mami that she was wrong to taunt Khushi so incessantly and that too for no fault of hers… Also the conversation that took place and the words you italicized have certain emphasis and meaning hidden in them which my decoding mind is trying to decipher, there are obviously layers of subtle hints and pointed meanings in that conversation amongst the women and I can't help but feel that Nani as usual, sees more than what meets the eye! Approve

 

Oh my, the mami here is positively vitriolic/caustic/acerbic…. I never thought that she would address Nani as Charity Mother and that too in her own room…. Hmmm…

 

GO LA!!! I wish I had pompoms right now! Dancing Would have cheered her on for her retort to mami… Lin this was such A heart-warming chapter that I cant help but feel that the world is a happier place….. See such is the effect of your words on me, a chapter can make me sad or joyous and change my perspective about a lot of things….

 

 

CH 96: He is FURIOUS isn't he??? Even Nani finally came down from her room to stop him from hurting HER and he is so blinded by rage that he just doesn't see the impact Khushi has had on almost all the members of his family…


I AM TERRIFIED FOR KHUSHI….. SOMEONE GET HER OUT OF THERE…. PLEASE….

 

 

CH 97: Poor Khushi, the girl suffers so much torture at the hands os this beast…. Eerie place yaar… eeekk, me getting goosebumps….

THAT WAS DOWNRIGHT MONSTROUS…. Can I WHACK HIM????????? Angry

What can I sat the last two chapters simply overwhelmed me…. A predominant emotion took over me and I can't find words to write anything else other than the two lines I have written for this ch and the last on as well…. 

 

 

CH 98: Oh my, he really is a beast isn't he??? Why oh why did Khushi have to be caught in this mess…

So, all the family tries to convince him, but nothing gets inside his stubborn head eh??? Though u mentioned that someone suggested that he locked her up to save her from himself?? But I dint see the thirst and THAT sort of rage within him… So I cant really say much about that…

The last line about him locking his door to keep out the others' comments and guilt was right on target… I don't know why but I have an inkling that he might go down to her in the night to check on her… Embarrassed



Will comment on the remaining chapters soon!! tc and lotsa love, thnx to Aura too for sending PMs unerringly

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