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ArHi FF:3:The BEASTS and the BLEEDING ROSES (Page 54)

Pristineblue Groupbie

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Posted: 25 November 2012 at 8:34am | IP Logged
Hmm its 25th finally the day has come... eagerly waiting for the update

SankiPagal IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 25 November 2012 at 8:42am | IP Logged
Its finally 25th... have been waiting for the updates from past two weeks..
Update soon
A_Soul IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 25 November 2012 at 9:48am | IP Logged

Lin.. itna chotu update...'shuru hua nai ke khatam'.. No probs.. chota packet indicating the BADA DHAMADA..!!

Feel proud NANIji.. Lin has done that, that even IPK has not done.. a whole chap for you and your lovely characteristics..

Two beautifully n wisely written dialogues says it all, that 'aap ne bal dhup mein safed nai kiye'.. 

"As soon as he finds her with him, he will want her to not tag along with him," she nodded pragmatically, "He will do what he can to get her home as quickly as possible, if it is certain he cannot stand her as we all fear."

So what, that u locked urself in room and mention ruled by Lordy... Your eyes r all around.. and why not.. You have experience of Life  much more than any other member of mention..

After all, who has saved khushi from incidences, like lost in forest, horrible ride on horse and the major dungeon one.. here also he will take care of her (after hurting her for sure Wink)


"Besides, I am certain they will come to know of her departure sooner or later." And when she said this, no one saw how she had glanced at Lord Akash, who was staring at his teacup in deep thought.

And see you know about akash's status too.. Naniji you are the smartest lady, I have to say!!


Following few lines dedicated to Lady La, Lady Jha and OP.. 

yeh kya hua, kaise hua, kab hua
kyon hua, jab hua, tab hua
oh chodo, yeh na socho..

Message to two pretty lady...

@ Aura: dear, you are so beautiful.. yes for me its your pic!!! You distract was so hard for me to concentrate on tale after viewing ur pic..  i have literally stare around 2-3 mins, n capture all minute details and d features... Pretty pretty pretty..

And.. as Lin is coming back now..  no plz don't you think to go.. keep visiting dear!!

@Lin: Bec I know, that u know, that how much I have missed you.. I have never mentioned that in these days!! 

But I will mention that...

I missed,  to notice your presence in Inn by liking each comment

I missed,  those suprise PMs of yours..

I missed, beautiful open letters that we call Pre-notes.. (This is the only letters that everyone enjoys not only to read but also to let read)

Warm Welcome Hug Hug




Edited by A_Soul - 25 November 2012 at 9:49am

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A_Soul IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 25 November 2012 at 10:04am | IP Logged
Originally posted by shass

Whn they both left togathr,i wondered hw evry one vl react to dis news in da castle n i suspected dat Guptas wont b told of da matter,atlst not ne time sooner.. .. bt da way u hv described da whole scene n evry1z reactions in jst a single line.. conveying their feelings to da incident ws simply marvelous,dear Lin !ClapClapClap u r indeed God gifted,n am glad dat u chose to share it wth me..
  • Loved hw one single line describes dat there vl alws b two men heading dis family.. first lord Arnav.. second lord Akash.. ..
  • Loved hw evry1 expressed their care n anxiety on da scenario ..frm OP to lady manorama to lady Lavanya to Lady Anjali... who evn attempted to solve da problem..
  • but most of all... LOVED nani.. wht a wise n endearing lady she is.. ..altho she distanced herslf all these years frm da family.. it is still HER family n she knws all abt it.. so wht if she may disagree wth hr grandson n disapprove of his decisions... she knws him well.. she knws he may b many thgs bt he's reliable n trust worthy.. but i wonder hw well acquainted she is abt wht goes b/w khushi n lordy?? ws she da 2nd persn in da hall who saw lordy n khushi's luk exchng da othr day?? or ws it lady anjali dat keeps hr informd abt evrythg? or did hr wisdom see an opportunity fr hr grandson to recognize a ''Green Heart'' ?? ...well,i'll hv to wait a li'l more fr dat..
  • Loved hw she threw a last but meaningful glance at hr 2nd grandson.. there i feel, she perhaps sees n knws n undrstnds more thn we cn imagine!!StarStar


  • Aura jan.. what a wonderful picture!! u sure hv an eye fr da most unique n beautiful.. .. each picture speaks sumthg abt u..ClapClap...THANK U ,not jst fr updating,as i knw hw tough it is fr u thesedys, bt also for adding colours to it..Hug..
  • Lin jan.. u knw i'll nvr demand more thn u cn gv.. so u cn hv as long a break as u wnt.. as long as,u cn return here.. i hv no prob wth it.. vl wait fr u..Heart


  • Pugly, i cudnt help bt smile at u, reserving 1st place.. a long ovr due.. congrats..dis shud lessen da misery,atlst a little bit, dat u r going thru thesedys..a tyt hug fr u..Hug
  • KA.. jst read ur last comment..

                '''Eye lock, pushing-pulling, pinning!! ''''

fingers crossed buddy!  i hope we get all dat n much more..Wink

Shass: Loved reading your thoughts and d questions playing with your mind...

Lin... did you see.. shass's comment is even longer than update...Wink 
Comrades .. to those who are having problem reading shass's comment... plz read here.. Smile
(just kidding shass dear.. . plz don't mind.. Love U) 

Edited by A_Soul - 25 November 2012 at 10:06am

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kushipugly IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 25 November 2012 at 10:11am | IP Logged
Our sweetheart Aquiline is coming soon,
@ leafs: love you so so much. you are indeed the nani in comrades always lifting our spirits up in hard times with your warm,kind & wise words.
love you & thankyouHug
@ a_soul: yes, its difficult times for us arshians but hopefully some miracle will happen & at least SP will not show any disturbing scene of arnav, my gudda.
@Shass@ reserving first spot indeed cheered me up big timeBig smile.
loved reading your analysis, just brilliant
@ aura: i m not very good in asking people to stay back, the whole SP is now aware of how do i make a request for not letting barun go. So i m humbly with full respect & love want to tell you

Edited by kushipugly - 25 November 2012 at 10:16am

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Leafs Senior Member

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Posted: 25 November 2012 at 10:48am | IP Logged
Originally posted by A_Soul

Originally posted by kushipugly

My dearest A_soul,
such a lovely lovely picture of our happy fairylandClap
youu have no idea how much you have calmed down a distressed soul, dear A_soul. After watching today's epi full of arnav, i was trying everything to cheer me up but nothing workedCryCry.only this pic brought a smileSmile
Love you so so so much & thankyouSmile
this picture  deserve the epic kiss of all times...
 ooo dear KP... now this what i call relations based on vibes... from so many pics of D EPIC JODI... you have chosen only this one... DO YOU HAVE ANY IDEA, THIS IS THE MOST FAV ONE OF MINE... till the time from all the scenes this one i have watched around 25 times...
Thank you... and pleasure is all mine dear to make you happy...
BTW from Friday eve i m also weeping inside... 

Originally posted by bablio09

oohh woooww  dear A_soul, such perfect pic for us in Arhasia.  just loved it.   mmmuaaahhh.    Star

Flying kisses to you too dear... Glad u all like it!! 

@Leafs : I m feeling so sorry... deep inside, i was feeling i missed some one... its not like m covering up or something but with due respect may i say, U r  the one (near aura in pic) the representative of all (also u r lin's mentor)...

a_soul -  You are so sweet and there is absolutely nothing to be sorry about...the Picture was such a 'feel good' picture - it was brilliant of you to post it.  And if I remember correctly there was no appropriate 'senior' character to represent me Wink    Luv u,  Leafs

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Aura7 Senior Member

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Posted: 25 November 2012 at 10:50am | IP Logged



Having coming across my work being plagiarized, I was at first numbed to react or, should I say, overcome by a mixture of emotions. I wasamused that the assumed "claim" that my work will never be plagiarized had actually failed. I was surprised that someone had actually done it which meant they found my work worthy of being spread outside the Forum. I was excited because it was like a mission to investigate who the culprit was and how I must wisely and carefully spill her beans.

And only slightly I was disturbed. Now, what was I disturbed by? No, not because my work was plagiarized. But because I knew the plagiarizer could be one whom I had come to embrace.

Owing to my FF having the least readers even though it crossed its 105th chapter and also for proved reasons, it was certain she was a member of the Forum. Hence she fell into one of the following categories: She was either my silent liker or silent reader. But what I feared most: she could be a Comrade or casual commentor I had thanked and took to heart.

This is what hurt me. That there was a Brutus to my unsuspecting Caesar. That there was a Judas at the table where I dine with and narrated out to my dear readers. However, after a series of dramatic vigilance conducted upon the writer's blog by me and Aura, now the storm is past and this is my valedictory words to the concerned person:

I would like to heartily thank my plagiarizer for being kind enough to terminate her blog which, I would prefer to believe, she had made out of obsessive love for my story. I am touched by your affection, dear, but I so hope you have understood why plagiarism of any kind is said to be in human and disrespectful.

If I knew who you were, I would hug you and assure you that I have only gratitude for you being so quick to understand my demand. On behalf of all my readers and Comrades (who out of their protective love for my tale were violently assertive in their demand to make you understand your folly), I offer a polite handshake to my dearest plagiarizer whom I have completely forgiven and who, I believe, will not commit this act again and will continue to read my tale with the same amount of love with which she had begun reading it.



Hoopoe had asked a very valid doubt in the update before the last and I just wanted to ensure that she was answered righteously. Shas had vividly pointed out the answer but brilliant Hoopoe still needed some more fodder to digest the doubt. Hence these few lines were created on the spur to show her what I had intended and had thought needed no wording since my readers are brilliants! This short scene is for you, Hoopoe, for your unquenched question'''Hope it will help.


He woke up with a start and realized it was already morning after another night of troubled sleep. The first thought that crossed his mind was what made this morning more important than all the others.

He got out of bed and after his morning wash, began changing into a new set of clothes, at the near completion of which his sister came into his room, enquiring after him. The presence of the other in the room, silently confirmed the memory of what they had lost, the pain they had endured in its aftermath and the prolonged drag to recover from it.

After he was readied, he left his room and made for the stairs, followed by his sister. He had just stepped down from the last stair and emerged into the living room when his eyes fell on the door closest to the stairway.

He paused.

"Is she gone, Di?" he asked, his eyes on the door.

"Yes, Chotey. A few minutes ago."

He continued to the central doors, heading for the stable.

He had sensed the wistfulness in his sister's last words but strangely he was not disconcerted by it. All he could think of was his mother who was no longer there and for whom he was willing to overlook his staunch atheism to allow rituals to be conducted in the Castle for her sake.

And when it came to his mother, he was blind and deaf to everything around him. Even to his sister.




Aura darling. Thank you for captaining our Comrades Ship for a while. You are a dear one, you are! And dear friends, like I said, I need a chota break. Just a day or two or three''Depends. But I am coming, yes your Aquiline the Storyteller, with what's waiting for you in the coming chapters! *evil smirk*

Edited by Aura7 - 25 November 2012 at 10:49am

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9424976 Senior Member

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Posted: 25 November 2012 at 11:35am | IP Logged
I am so happy you are back Lin! And glad that you have sorted out that awful issue, hope it doesn't happen anymore. Will start commenting after finals are done. <3

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