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ArHi FF:3:The BEASTS and the BLEEDING ROSES (Page 2)

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Posted: 08 November 2012 at 2:53pm | IP Logged
Missed the 1st page *crying*

 
Awesome update loved it specially these lines

Lord Arnav stood up, his eyes suddenly very cold, "You think I don't know what it is like to die inside?"

Kushi stared at him: his voice, his words...they all sounded so unlike him.

"You will never know," he said, pained somewhere and angry everywhere, "what it is like to be so young when one is only learning to live (is it something like learning to live with curse?) and then having to lose his parents to Death from which there is no return. You will never know how he lost himself, died that night in the lonely world filed with the echo of his sister's tears. You will never know! You will never know what it is like to bury your parents and to roam the forests looking for food because you cannot go back to the place you once called home because it is now a miserable place that haunts you of lost memories and an empty future."

And with that he stormed out of the barn, leaving Kushi gazing into the air, broken inside and silently weeping again, not for her, but for a heart that had been harbouring unhealed wounds behind the guise of his cold face until his heart iced over and froze and he was no more warm...


m not doing any decoding as i have never done before though found some stuff catchy as something like hint or anything cant explain but the underlined and bold words and lines are those where i felt my heart shattered not for the pain of Khushi but for Arnav no doubt he had suffered alot to become such cold heart that now a little warmth which is provided by Khushi though unknowingly is bothering him as he is feeling himself alien to this warm. Again i would say u r an awesome writer a much gifted one. the field of writing u chose is the most different for an FF and the way u describe it superb like we say in urdu 

Aallaa 

i hope u had a great time with ur family. Sorry for late editing but i wanted to give u real comment





Edited by Farwa_Ibrahim - 10 November 2012 at 10:25am

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Posted: 08 November 2012 at 2:57pm | IP Logged
Congratulations on the new thread! Big smile
I really liked the fact that Arnav went feed her, it shows that somewhere inside he does care Embarrassed
I really think he should man up and apologise now! Imagine being locked up in a dungeon, it's scary Confused
Have fun on your vacation! Tongue

Edited by Ayaat1216 - 13 November 2012 at 8:23am

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Posted: 08 November 2012 at 3:11pm | IP Logged
hey have a gud vacation with ur parentsss...
conzz 4 new thread...
and awesome updatesss...
i thought khush would say tht she will leave castle but arnav said itt...
thnx 4 pm Big smile

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Comrads in the circle, WE DID IT
 
                
Congratulations & lets party
 
 
              


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Posted: 08 November 2012 at 3:21pm | IP Logged
wowww!!! just wow!!!
Lord Arnav making an effort there.. Khushi all broken and hurt, but came back nevertheless for his sake, .. to be hurt all over again by his last words.
i love the story! :)

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Posted: 08 November 2012 at 3:29pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Aquiline


Greetings my Beloved Comrades, Dear Readers and Kind Visitors!! We commence the suddenly decided:

Thread#3
Of the ArShi FF
The BEASTS and the BLEEDING ROSES


Having crossed the 100th chapter, we now move deeper into the story heading for the second century which is still a long way away....


 




 

Also, in case there are essential images or collages or notices to be brought to the readers' notice, it shall be provided under the:


 



 


 
 
 
Aquiline, superb midieval pictures
 
 
 

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Posted: 08 November 2012 at 3:43pm | IP Logged
Congrats On The Third Thead Of This Amazing FF. (:

Have A Safe Trip Lin. (:
See You In Two Weeks. Hug

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Posted: 08 November 2012 at 3:50pm | IP Logged
Have a great time with your family!  You will be missed!
 
Fab update!  I'll read it again when I get home...

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