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ArHi FF:3:The BEASTS and the BLEEDING ROSES (Page 115)

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Posted: 08 December 2012 at 1:47pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by shass

Woohoo..i see dat a discussion is already in progress..so i wont start with mine yet...
OH MY, HP !!ShockedShockedShocked..i'm biting nails n shuddering inside coz dis is one topic am very sensitive about,atleast.. n for my own sake i hope it doesn't take dis route..but thn i also know dat u r seldom wrong about nethg.. n i do doubt if lin will handle something as explosive as this..but if she does then i DO TRUST HER dat she'll do it in the most nicest way..
honestly,HP i had not looked at things this way..so am quite confused right now n shudnt comment as its bound to affect my judgement..besides,u know that symbolism is not my forte..i cant decode it..so that makes me more unfit..but i'll still say afew things here dat i have understood..may b what i saw was part of what u saw..
 

since the beginning i have seen lordy as both a man n beast.. the man is trust worthy i believe..he has a very strong control over everything regarding him..n i think just because the author showed that he lost himself doesn't mean,he wud have NOT stopped himself.. for me i feel whenever he has lost himself into her..it has been a strong serene n blissful feeling for him..like a war in him settles for a moment or something..tho we cant deny their strong physical attraction for eachother..but thats the man in him that feels it..a man i think,very much in control..we esp. saw this in the forest chpt.. when he was not even that protective about her but still he chose not to harm her..that somehow his cursed hunger cud b controlled... its the beast in him that he doesnot trust..that his sister doesnot trust... my question is..will the beast feel something of a physical attraction for her??? may b... but i think, his hunger wud b of a very different kind!!

interestingly,i had searched some ''grape symbolism'' n they have been associated wth good luck..but grape juice is symbolic to ''blood''.. dnt know how to fit that here..just remembered n mentioned it.. but my above point cud explain this one too..*shrugs*

ok..so this is how i had read it.. again pointing at the fact that she stayed away with him in the forest.. cud produce problems for her... n only he will b able to help her may be??? but @ the hands ..i was also thinking..HP ,isnt his hands already dirtied with staining her dignity long time ago?? with the problems he caused her,when she wasn't at fault?? but now time has changed n his feelings for her r also not the same.. the past few chpts have emphasized on dat, dat now there's more assurance for her in everything he does...once he let her fall from his window, now he lifts her up..from the hole..in his arms.. do u think a loop may have closed here?? cud we take it in that sense too???

 
And they lived happily ever after...
 LOLLOLLOL...i loved this one!!..if only things were as simple.LOL
 
Dear shass, im not at fault here in making such wild guesses. Its all because of Aquiline's disclaimer. Its making me to see things from a different perspective... Im just bracing myself to face the worst possibilty... if the story doesnt take this route, i'll be the happiest.
 
Infact the chapter gave me a good positive vibe... First, the sacred hermit - who has the ability to foresee things - stresses on them staying back in the forest for that night... if he had sensed any danger for the poor girl, he might not have proposed such sleeping arrangements. Second, Lord Arnav drank the soup prepared by the sacred hermit that appeased his hunger... i think it should have some suppressing effect over his beastly hunger. Third, Khushi is there to calm down him even if his beastly instincts surface up in the middle of the night. Fourth, Khushi's words about hermit's information regarding Fortune spending the night in forest trees... to me it seems that the hermit intentionally made them stay together in the hut for that night... and im sure his intentions were in the best interest of Lord Arnav and Khushi... He referred them as Lion and lamb, yet let them stay together in the same hut...
 
I suppose some big revelations and realisations are about to happen in the middle of the night moving their unacknowledged physical attraction and emotional bonding to the next higher level...
 
I completely agree with ur words about him feeling serene and blissful whenever he gets lost in her... i guess the entire scenario is to make him realise that khushi is the chosen one to provide tranquility for the beast in him.
 

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Posted: 08 December 2012 at 2:54pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by hoopoe

Originally posted by shass

 
Dear shass, im not at fault here in making such wild guesses. Its all because of Aquiline's disclaimer. Its making me to see things from a different perspective... Im just bracing myself to face the worst possibilty... if the story doesnt take this route, i'll be the happiest.
 
Infact the chapter gave me a good positive vibe... First, the sacred hermit - who has the ability to foresee things - stresses on them staying back in the forest for that night... if he had sensed any danger for the poor girl, he might not have proposed such sleeping arrangements. Second, Lord Arnav drank the soup prepared by the sacred hermit that appeased his hunger... i think it should have some suppressing effect over his beastly hunger. Third, Khushi is there to calm down him even if his beastly instincts surface up in the middle of the night. Fourth, Khushi's words about hermit's information regarding Fortune spending the night in forest trees... to me it seems that the hermit intentionally made them stay together in the hut for that night... and im sure his intentions were in the best interest of Lord Arnav and Khushi... He referred them as Lion and lamb, yet let them stay together in the same hut...
 
I suppose some big revelations and realisations are about to happen in the middle of the night moving their unacknowledged physical attraction and emotional bonding to the next higher level...
 
I completely agree with ur words about him feeling serene and blissful whenever he gets lost in her... i guess the entire scenario is to make him realise that khushi is the chosen one to provide tranquility for the beast in him.
 

Totally understandable dear HP ..n am glad i cud discuss it with u..coz u have a very valid point here dat i didnt consider earlier.. but coz of all da four points u mentioned, i too dont feel scared of da up cumming chapter.. esp. dat khushi's there...  now dat u n music have been considering a beastly transformation, i still dont feel scared..coz its bound to happen,sumday it had to cum in da open.. n tho we dont know exactly how things will play out.. i too believe it'll b for da good. well,lets wait n see.. but it was a very nice discussion..i loved it..
PS; there's a strong symbolism in ''lamb n lion'' part..i mean from historical point of view... have been doing a li'l research of my own.. but am not posting it coz i dnt want ppl to doze off..LOL



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Posted: 08 December 2012 at 5:48pm | IP Logged
Diaclaimer is warning of severe storm ahead but me follows sanaya irani rule"I take things/life as it comes"Big smile 
me already brainless so dont have a clue as if hermit , his soups & his hut will play some crucial rule in calming the curse of lord arnavConfused.
 
So we will face the storm when it will hit with full force but why fear nowBig smile
 why not drift away in our own arshi dreamland for the time beingBig smile
 
just imagine this song with arshiDay Dreaming
 
               HUM TUM EK HUT MAIN BUND HOON
               AUR HERMIT CHALA JAA AY
 
               LORDY KAY NAINOON KEY BHOOL BHULAYAN MAIN
                KHUSHI KHO JAA AY
 
               Day DreamingDay DreamingDay DreamingLOLLOLLOLLOLLOL
 
 
 
 
@ Aquiline:
just bring it on!!!!!!!
your readers are tough cookies, we will embraceApprove
 
 
EDITED:
i was watching the song & at 3:39mins the hero is wearing the same clothes as arnav &  ME FAINT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Just imagine arshi in the whole song & me FAINT AGAIN!!!!!!!!
 
 


Edited by kushipugly - 08 December 2012 at 6:28pm

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Posted: 08 December 2012 at 6:03pm | IP Logged
@shass & hoopoe:  ShockedShockedShockedClapClapClapClap
 
superb, just superb reviews.
 
aura with her creative picture makes the update so much more visual & you girls digging deep into the text make it so much easy for the other readers to understand what hints actually to look for into the textClap
 
loved loved loved itClap

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Posted: 08 December 2012 at 10:07pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by shass

Originally posted by kushipugly

Originally posted by shass


first of all i want to ask you how badly we were missing your company in the inn & your reviewsCryCry.
Missed you a lotCry
HUGSSSHug
 
What a superb superb superb reviewClap
 
This show caught the attention of millions across the world because even though it was alove story but it was not some silly rushed teenage crush romance. It was all about how a man who has locked his heart behind thick multilayer walls & how a simple pure hearted girl  gradually break through the walls surrounding his heart & finding a way to his locked heart.
but a man who is used to protect his heart throughout his troubled life will not let anyone easily break his barriers &  will fight all passions /desire to keep his wall intact.
this is what the disclaimer is all about. He knows khushi has dared to bring his walls dowwn but will he surrender to her easily ???
 


every word echoed truth here.. KP have to admit..dat was too gud buddy! ClapClapClap..u hv captured da essence of da whole tale perfectly in just afew words !!Star..
Missed u too dear..dats why me not going ne where any time soon.. i missed dis place n its craziness!Smile

@LEAFS--WOW !! U TOO???ShockedShockedShocked...man! but i really dont find my comments too small-sized..wonder why??.. but yeah..u guys need to throw DHRASHTI A party !!LOLLOLLOL..MISSED U TOO..Hug

@Farwa-- HUGS..HUGS..HUGS...LOLLOLLOL..There's atleast sum1 who doesnt struggle with da comments..LOL..n thank u all for da warm welcome.. n missed u too farwa.. da deal is,i dnt knw precise writing..n Babi wont give me classes.. EVIL BABI *squinting*... so i hv to write long..ALAS!!





Sorry shaas...it is the age and not the fault of your font size!  Its just very convenient to put all the blame on your fontsWink  

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Posted: 08 December 2012 at 10:39pm | IP Logged
KP - I followed the instructions on 'how to upload videos' and this is what I get...what am I doing wrong?






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Posted: 08 December 2012 at 11:15pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Leafs

KP - I followed the instructions on 'how to upload videos' and this is what I get...what am I doing wrong?




 

sorry i am butting in dearies... since KP is not online so... i thought i could answer...

Leaf dear.. u need to copy paste that link to notepad and then again copy paste the link from notepad to here.. it will work...

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Posted: 09 December 2012 at 12:51am | IP Logged

Rabba Ve, my Comrades and Readers.

Well, who would have thought "one" person could come and make sense to all that I intended. Well done, Shas! You came and you won. And that does not mean Hoopoe's theory is wrong. In fact her Tangles perspective is very significant if only she had completed it. There is a point she has left put: she has forgotten to "position" the "theory". Does the theory apply to a single scene along? Or to a phase in the story? And thanks for the suggestion of adding chapter names to the Index, dear. Something I kept postponing but now realize the need of. Will do the other thread Indexes when I return after my exams, hope that is fine? Mav, you trying to make a place in me lil' heart? Your stalking in the Inn and peeps into the Cottage is quite working up my cheer! Congrats Bablio for "guessing" what the "storm" in the disclaimer was about. I want to thank the rest of you too but I am just too caught up in my exams. Hope you understand. Thank you from the depths of my heart for all your love, your discussions and support (Kushipugly).

Welcoming happy new Reader subiscs to our Arhasian midst!


The Lord Akash I see in Arhasia is specs-less and handsome and Payal is just perfect for him.


I had once said that we don't have NK in this FF. I had already said NK will however be seen in Master Aman and Ram. Well, with due respect to the show, I decided we could actually envision them as this, because the Ram I had in mind did have the cuteness of the kid...


Also, the major men in the FF who play a very important role. You will love the way their stories swirl, rave and connect...

 

 

Chapter One Hundred Fifteen: The Night and All that Happened

A few minutes after the candle had extinguished and the inside of the hut had plunged into darkness, Lord Arnav stood up from where he had been sitting in one corner of the room and opened the door of the hut.

Moonlight shone into the room and he stood at the doorway, bathed in the light, for a moment before resuming his place near the corner of the room, away from where Kushi lay sleeping on the floor.

When he had seated himself with his back to the cold wall, his legs folded before him, he looked at her from over his knees and drank in his nightly vision.

She looked angelic, curled on the mat, and the moonlight did more than justice to accent her curves within her night gown.

She had cleverly let her open hair fall over her to avoid his eyes from studying her but the poor girl did not think that in her frequent shifts in sleeping postures, the hair would slip away and reveal her as and how his insides would rage with wild want.

But what struck him the most was that, in spite of all the furious enmity between them, she had sought his presence to ward off the fears of her dark night. She had even lain on the mat, facing him and the candle, so that she could assure herself that she was not alone.

But no sooner had the tired girl lain down than she was fast asleep, leaving him alone to struggle with his strange cravings.

He tried to not look at her but he could never look away from her for more than a few seconds. He always found his eyes drawn to gaze at her peaceful repose, and his fingers longed to reach out and touch her.

One time, he actually did.

A strand of her hair had slid onto her face, obstructing his view of her bewitching beauty.

Frowning at the interfering hair strand, he crawled across the room from where he had been sitting to where she lay. One hand reached out and his fingers delicately moved away the strand of hair to lose itself in the sea of her black cascade.

The proximity of their faces, the nearness of his hand from her skin, the fact that they were alone in the empty hut and that she was irresistible and he was aroused………….….all this could have ended in a disaster but he restrained himself and drew apart, resuming his place away from her, his back against the cold wall, trying to kill the awakened desires in him.

A while later, he lay down, still not taking his eyes off her. They now lay on the floor, divided by a distance that was flooded by the moonlight pouring from the door he had opened for her.

Sometime in his deep gazing, his eyelids weighed and he had closed them and drifted into a light sleep.

Yes, his sleep was light for he was still aware of the sounds around him.

But not so light as to be aware of the shadow that had stealthily crossed into the room. The intruder was too proficient in noiselessness, undoubtedly, for his entry was a feather-touch to existence.

It was the strange new scent that Lord Arnav caught on first. He opened his eyes and studied the darkness in the room.

The moon had presumably been hidden behind dark clouds that moment for, though the door was open, there was no moonlight. Only darkness.

Then he saw it.

The obscure shadow hovering over the sleeping Kushi. An angel in white darkened by the creature standing before her. The intruder was leaning towards her as though to get a better glimpse of her face, or maybe even her neck.

No sooner had he spotted the trespasser than Lord Arnav leapt onto his feet.

But the other was quick and equally alert.

Sensing the wakened state of the man from the corner of his eye, the creature had bolted out of the door like a soundless whirlwind.

Intending to not wake Kushi, Lord Arnav too raced out noiselessly after the invader. Whatever it was, it was faster than any creature Lord Arnav had chased his entire life. They ran through the forest scaling trees and rushing like the wind but there was always a consistent distance between the intruder and his chaser.

Wild rage rose in Lord Arnav's chest as he leapt over a root and, crouching, bounded after the creature.

As they ran through the dark forest, avoiding trees and maneuvering to give off the other to lose, Lord Arnav had one benefit.

He was behind his enemy.

Which is why he had the advantage of studying the moves and the timing of the moves in the intruder's escapade.  

No sooner had he grasped an inkling of the creature's modus than he calculated the next few advance moves that it would take.

And then he caught the creature unaware when it intended to swerve rightward to deploy his next move but instead crashed into his quick and calculative chaser.

They collided in each other heavily and both growled at the other, before withdrawing and standing apart to fight.

But now, it was Lord Arnav's turn to be staggered. The moon that had hid behind clouds chose this precise moment to emerge and its light cast upon the scene in the deep heart of the dark forest.

Lord Arnav's bared teeth and raged energy froze when the moonlight fell upon the creature before him, who was eyeing him with a strange anger.

Lord Arnav gaped, shocked by the realization, and the creature used this opportune immobility of his chaser to escape into the night. He spread his wings and flew away into the dark night, leaving his chaser unsteadily trying to overcome the state of shock he was in.

No, no, it can't be, he tried to reason desperately but he knew there was no denying what he had seen. The only thing he was not sure of was the 'why' of the situation. Why the creature had become so and why he had come into the hut in the night………….…

And with these worrying thoughts haunting his mind, he sank onto the ground, and with hard agony constricting inside of him, he whispered helplessly into the darkness, the one word that had always been his strength, "Di."

 

To return back to the INDEX 

 

Did someone say cliffhanger? *looks around*

Again: Remember, Arhasia is safe in my hands. Always. But the question is if you trust it in my hands?

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