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ArHi FF:3:The BEASTS and the BLEEDING ROSES (Page 112)

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Posted: 07 December 2012 at 12:40pm | IP Logged
N0o0os!!! y0u are leavings?? after this?? Lin!! Tum kali h0!! Lin n0t fair!!(If y0u didnt get the j0ke refer t0 the end sequence 0f B0l Bachan) :D This update leaves me with certain expectati0ns

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Rabba ve fellow comrades...
 
Since Aquiline mentioned that  she never make a scene just for the fun of it, everything has more layers to it than what is seen... and since the closing lines of the chapter echoed the supposed storm she mentioned in her disclaimer for the next chapter...
 
 
He paused a moment to think it through, the consequences of sleeping in a hut alone with her in it.

Not only was her life in danger but even his own wild desires might not be easily controlled in the darkness of their tempting solitude.

 
I went for a re-reading of the previous chapters and guess what, I found the romantic grape eating chapter to be very dark,foreshadowing the impending storm which Aquiline mentioned... Its just my point of view ... Kindly read the following excerpt from Ch 110- TANGLES and share your views my dear friends...
 
 
And to make matters worse, he was hungry.
 
His hunger, that he had been suppressing all this while, ravaged his mind again and he cast a glance on her face.

"I'm hungry too," he said in a low voice and resumed picking on the grapes upon her body with his mouth.

"You're the Master of an Empire," she tried to reason with him to try to stop this sweet torment which she could take no more, "You are not used to eating forest fruits without having them washed well."

"Hunger in a Man does not make him pause to think of cultural norms."

she groaned, "Please stop. If you're hungry, I will try and pluck whatever fruits I can find as soon as we get out of this hole."

"My hunger cannot wait," he stated simply, and his mouth was around a rich round grape near her waist.

"Do you want me to stop?"

"Yes, please!" she cried into the air, feeling his mouth near her shoulder.

And then fire exploded.

One last grape had remained in the crook of her neck, the only exposed part of her skin where the grapes were to be found. He had thought of stopping the torment with that one last fill but the moment his wet mouth had pressed on neck, his hunger found new delight.

Kushi froze the moment she had felt his hot breath on her neck, and then when his burning mouth had pressed on her tender skin, she lost all sense of where and who she was. All she knew was she wanted him to find more grapes on her skin even though they would not be there.

She closed her eyes as he bit the grape, a drop of the violet juice falling on her fair skin. After having devoured the grape, he licked the drop on her neck with his burning tongue and she moaned.

Lord Arnav was lying along her length, when he had come to take the grape from her neck.

He looked at her when he had licked the drop of grape juice off her neck. Her cheeks were red and her lips trembling, while her eyes remained closed, taking in the torture he was meting out to her.

Her moan had undone him and he had leaned down to taste her neck again, to hear that moan again, when the parrot squawked overhead from a tree branch.

The spell broke and he moved away from her and she stared at him, her gaze dazed under the heated moment's aftermath but shocked too as realization seeped into her consciousness.

Suddenly Kushi cried, "Oh, my dress!! It's ruined!"

Lord Arnav looked at her and saw her turning about, trying to look over her shoulder to the rear of her gown, and he saw that the grapes under her had crushed with her fall and the back of her gown was drenched entirely in the violet gluey juice.

He shook his head, "You invite hazards, don't you? One after the other!"

She stopped looking at her gown over her shoulder and shot him a look, "Well, good you mentioned it because you seem to be a recurring hazard in my life. Over and over again, popping up everywhere to wreck my life."

 
So some damage done... and to rectify it...
 
 
Then he leaned forward and stretched out an arm towards her.

She stood staring at the hand for a moment, not wanting to touch it, but she found her dusty hand slid into his dirtied one. The warmth in his hand assured her and he closed his fingers around her hand, securing her for the hoisting.

Then he lifted her up and they were out of the lurid hole at last.

 
And they lived happily ever after...
 
What do u guys think? I know my mind is in overthinking mode after i read Aquiline's disclaimer... but do share ur point of views.


Edited by hoopoe - 07 December 2012 at 4:07pm

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Posted: 07 December 2012 at 4:14pm | IP Logged
awesome update ...can't wait to see what happens in the hut ... i mean will the curse activate or not...loved it ...continue soon...

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Posted: 07 December 2012 at 4:14pm | IP Logged
love it but the story pace is so slowly plzzz kind of hurry up and make asr love her 

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Posted: 07 December 2012 at 4:17pm | IP Logged

OMG!!!!!ShockedShocked

I  just realized today its been a whole week since ipkknd ended & i was so busy  indulging myself  in TB& TBR that i forgot my addiction for a daily visual doze of arshiShockedShockedShocked
 
Aquiline, your sizzling explosive updates this week have surely cast a spell on us & pulled us out from our mournfull miserable state to reliving the story of arshi in a better more focused way on each detail which sadly was left by the cvs in show!
 
Well doneThumbs UpClap
Proud of youHug
 
 
        
 
 
            & WE WILL RELIVE IT WITH
 
 
 
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Edited by kushipugly - 07 December 2012 at 4:16pm

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Posted: 07 December 2012 at 4:27pm | IP Logged
Awsome Update. Arnav Cant Trust Himself Alone With Khushi. Nice. please Make Them Fall In Love With Each Other Lin.

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Posted: 07 December 2012 at 4:34pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by hoopoe

Rabba ve fellow comrades...
 
Since Aquiline mentioned that  she never make a scene just for the fun of it, everything has more layers to it than what is seen... and since the closing lines of the chapter echoed the supposed storm she mentioned in her disclaimer for the next chapter...
 
 
He paused a moment to think it through, the consequences of sleeping in a hut alone with her in it.

Not only was her life in danger but even his own wild desires might not be easily controlled in the darkness of their tempting solitude.

 
I went for a re-reading of the previous chapters and guess what, I found the romantic grape eating chapter to be very dark,foreshadowing the impending storm which Aquiline mentioned... Its just my point of view ... Kindly read the following excerpt from Ch 110- TANGLES and share your views my dear friends...
 
 
And to make matters worse, he was hungry.
 
His hunger, that he had been suppressing all this while, ravaged his mind again and he cast a glance on her face.

"I'm hungry too," he said in a low voice and resumed picking on the grapes upon her body with his mouth.

"You're the Master of an Empire," she tried to reason with him to try to stop this sweet torment which she could take no more, "You are not used to eating forest fruits without having them washed well."

"Hunger in a Man does not make him pause to think of cultural norms."

she groaned, "Please stop. If you're hungry, I will try and pluck whatever fruits I can find as soon as we get out of this hole."

"My hunger cannot wait," he stated simply, and his mouth was around a rich round grape near her waist.

"Do you want me to stop?"

"Yes, please!" she cried into the air, feeling his mouth near her shoulder.

And then fire exploded.

One last grape had remained in the crook of her neck, the only exposed part of her skin where the grapes were to be found. He had thought of stopping the torment with that one last fill but the moment his wet mouth had pressed on neck, his hunger found new delight.

Kushi froze the moment she had felt his hot breath on her neck, and then when his burning mouth had pressed on her tender skin, she lost all sense of where and who she was. All she knew was she wanted him to find more grapes on her skin even though they would not be there.

She closed her eyes as he bit the grape, a drop of the violet juice falling on her fair skin. After having devoured the grape, he licked the drop on her neck with his burning tongue and she moaned.

Lord Arnav was lying along her length, when he had come to take the grape from her neck.

He looked at her when he had licked the drop of grape juice off her neck. Her cheeks were red and her lips trembling, while her eyes remained closed, taking in the torture he was meting out to her.

Her moan had undone him and he had leaned down to taste her neck again, to hear that moan again, when the parrot squawked overhead from a tree branch.

The spell broke and he moved away from her and she stared at him, her gaze dazed under the heated moment's aftermath but shocked too as realization seeped into her consciousness.

Suddenly Kushi cried, "Oh, my dress!! It's ruined!"

Lord Arnav looked at her and saw her turning about, trying to look over her shoulder to the rear of her gown, and he saw that the grapes under her had crushed with her fall and the back of her gown was drenched entirely in the violet gluey juice.

He shook his head, "You invite hazards, don't you? One after the other!"

She stopped looking at her gown over her shoulder and shot him a look, "Well, good you mentioned it because you seem to be a recurring hazard in my life. Over and over again, popping up everywhere to wreck my life."

 
So some damage done... and to rectify it...
 
 
Then he leaned forward and stretched out an arm towards her.

She stood staring at the hand for a moment, not wanting to touch it, but she found her dusty hand slid into his dirtied one. The warmth in his hand assured her and he closed his fingers around her hand, securing her for the hoisting.

Then he lifted her up and they were out of the lurid hole at last.

 
And they lived happily ever after...
 
What do u guys think? I know my mind is in overthinking mode after i read Aquiline's disclaimer... but do share ur point of views.
just superb hoope!!!!
ever since this hermit hunt has started, every single scene has some hidden hints for the upcoming updates as to how the story will unfold & the line her dusty hand slid into his dirtied one , it holds so much depth & all of the bold highlighted parts have deep meanings within!
 
missing shass & A_soul analysisDisapprove
 
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He shook his head, "You invite hazards, don't you? One after the other!"

She stopped looking at her gown over her shoulder and shot him a look, "Well, good you mentioned it because you seem to be a recurring hazard in my life. Over and over again, popping up everywhere to wreck my life."

 
khushi knows about lord arnav's state at night but she herself is calling him in the hut for her & trusting him to give her protection thus inviting hazards .
but she always ends up with arnav on her side nomatter how much she wants to be away from him. She was supposed to be at her home now, given a ride by OP but ended up in arnav's carriage with arnav.She is always left with no choice but to trust on arnav that he will rscue her in time of troubles even if these troubles were arisen by him.
just like in grapes session, it was arnav who pulled her out from the hole...
 
 


Edited by kushipugly - 07 December 2012 at 4:44pm

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Posted: 07 December 2012 at 7:01pm | IP Logged
Since i hv tkn a break from writing long posts for a while..n i so wanted to step aside n only read it..but as long as i hv certain people in my life,i think i'll have to oblige by their wishes,coz their love n care means alot.. dedicating afew lines dat i choose to scribble here tonight... love u Lin jan n awesome Hoopoe...

Like always..i loved everything in the previous updates..from chp 112-114... loved da humor..da forest..da hermit..fortune...da passion..n even dat which lingered around but was not too obvious !!
LIKE I have always said..their relationship is very special n different from any other pair... it will never follow da usual routes to its destination. ...so sweetly they pace their way towards eachother,no matter  how un-intentional it may be.. how breathtakingly beautiful is their bond.. how they both have started to tread in a strange comfort zone ...she forgets,she had called him her enemy n vowed to never forgive.. n he realizes more n more how strongly she has come to affect him,by each passing day! ...i said once dat everythg dats dear to him..finds its way into his life n people make their own place in his life,until he accepts them... see how slowly khushi is doing dat.. how slowly but steadily she is unlocking da closed heart... am sorry lin dat i couldn't see the passion b/w them.. what i saw was much more powerful n beautiful than that.. how she comes to his rescue,when she feels he fails in his attempt infront of the hermit..knowing very well,his weakness n covering it... n in turns he shows nothing but care n care... from waiting for her near the river to get rid of that which had caused her discomfort...to constantly keeping guard over her throughout her bathing...to making her comfortable n at ease by asking her sum random questions after an unthoughtful action...to staying back for da night back with her coz she pleaded she feared darkness n being alone!! still thinking her safety first...but something in him knows he cant harm her...he'll never do dat... n what does she chooses ?? care in return for him..n protection! i guess,there's some part of her dat believes lyk him,dat he can't really hurt her... need i say the word,linny??... MAGICAL !!Wink

PS;I ESP.LOVED dat how he picks her up n raises her above him..how she felt dizzy of such a height... da losing into her part came much later..his main desire was to just hold her close to him.. but he didnt let her fall,linny..she still stood with him in the end...did i just see a symbolism there?? WinkBig smileBig smile...no matter what it ws da oak tree bending down n picking her up to his level n evn above...giving a strong protective support... da vine creeper can climb this one tree ..it'll always be her guardian n strength !!
PPS; sorry to all buddies...i was so busy lately that i cudnt read any of ur comments.. but from now onwards,i'll try to b there.. HP,what did u write previously??plz send me da link..am sure it must b sumthg crucial... n also dat i wish to start a knew discussion soon n want every1z opinions on it... lin owes us afew answers n i wont accept riddles any more..
ALSO, accidentally,i stumbled upon a comment mentioning me..i think it ws DHRASHTI ... she complained about my writing..n i burst into laughter..dear,join da club..there r many here who'll hug u..coz other than da FF,it has been my ''writing style'' dats discussed da most on dis thread !!LOLLOLLOL... however,ur complaint made me think if dat was da reason every1 wanted a larger font... so i attempted it...NO OFFENSE INTENDED N NONE TAKEN !!Smile

GASPS !!! did i say ''afew lines'''?? *face palm*


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