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ArHi FF:3:The BEASTS and the BLEEDING ROSES (Page 110)

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Posted: 07 December 2012 at 6:24am | IP Logged
Originally posted by maverickmartin

Hello, Aquiline. Did I say I love that name? Well, I do. Anyway, I was hanging around in the hope of reading the update for today before saying that I FINISHED EVERYTHING BEFORE IT!! *proud grin*

Therefore, I read the chapter before being surprised by your pigeon. Thank you, anyway, for taking the trouble.

OH, the vine scene!! It was seriously better than the unwinding of fairy lights from Khushi's body. I absolutely adored it!! Very well written! I am not going to take any guesses as to what will happen in the next chapter, but I'm willing to just wait patiently. For tomorrow!! Also, I like that hermit. Very tongue-in-cheek for a man of sacrifices, pardon me.

I'm so happy you're a quick updater!

I'm not good at this at all, but I try. I'm talking about the poem that follows. Forgive me if it well, is laughable, to say the least.


On a mystic land called Arhasia,
I stumbled upon, on a whim.
A land that held all enthralled,
Its story told  by Aquiline.

A tale of a disturbed Master,
Bewitched by a curse and a girl,
Who dared defy his arrogance
And left his mind in a whirl.

Gather around, fellow Comrades,
Let us what is to be.
Will the curse awaken or peace reign,
In the hut of hermit-ji?


Yes, I know. Desperate attempt to rhyme. But it was fun!

Waiting for the next one,

Love,
Mav

P.S. My very first day at the Inn! I shall remember.

P.P.S. Farwa, thank you for discussing my comment. Love you for that!

P.P.P.S. Just saw my name on the parchment! THANK YOU!!!!!
 
RabbaveySmile
glad to have you in the circle of comrads & it was so nice to read your views on darling Aquiline's ff.
 
just like you, we one fortunate day stumbled across Aquiline FF on the fiction forum & that very same day became addicted & obsessed.
I am always a midieval classical nononsense romance lover & this ff is the only ff which has the ingredients of an epic midieval gothic dark lovestory.
Aquiline, not only is a genus talented writer but we have always found her very easygoing, aproachable humble & happy but reserved person.
& yes she is a very regular updater & if she is busy always informs her readers in advance that update will be late.
 
now we just cant wait  to embrace of what storm is coming ahead which aquiline has warned!
 
Bring it on Aquiline, your comrads will ebmrace!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
 
 
 
PS: plz do join us in the arhasian chitchat club created by farwa.will love to have your companyh there.
here is the link
 
 


Edited by kushipugly - 07 December 2012 at 9:38am

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Posted: 07 December 2012 at 6:37am | IP Logged
Originally posted by maverickmartin

<font color="#339999" size="2">Hello, Aquiline. Did I say I love that name? Well, I do. Anyway, I was hanging around in the hope of reading the update for today before saying that I FINISHED EVERYTHING BEFORE IT!! *proud grin*</font>

<font color="#339999" size="2">Therefore, I read the chapter before being surprised by your pigeon. Thank you, anyway, for taking the trouble.</font>

<font color="#339999" size="2">OH, the vine scene!! It was seriously better than the unwinding of fairy lights from Khushi's body. I absolutely adored it!! Very well written! I am not going to take any guesses as to what will happen in the next chapter, but I'm willing to just wait patiently. For tomorrow!! Also, I like that hermit. Very tongue-in-cheek for a man of sacrifices, pardon me.</font>

<font color="#339999" size="2">I'm so happy you're a quick updater!</font>

<font color="#339999" size="2">I'm not good at this at all, but I try. I'm talking about the poem that follows. Forgive me if it well, is laughable, to say the least.</font>


<font size="2" color="#cc3366">On a mystic land called Arhasia,</font>
<font size="2" color="#cc3366">I stumbled upon, on a whim.</font>
<font size="2" color="#cc3366">A land that held all enthralled,</font>
<font size="2" color="#cc3366">Its story told by Aquiline.</font>
<font size="2" color="#cc3366">
</font>
<font size="2" color="#cc3366">A tale of a disturbed Master,</font>
<font size="2" color="#cc3366">Bewitched by a curse and a girl,</font>
<font size="2" color="#cc3366">Who dared defy his arrogance</font>
<font size="2" color="#cc3366">And left his mind in a whirl.</font>
<font size="2" color="#cc3366">
</font>
<font size="2" color="#cc3366">Gather around, fellow Comrades,</font>
<font size="2" color="#cc3366">Let us what is to be.</font>
<font size="2" color="#cc3366">Will the curse awaken or peace reign,</font>
<font size="2" color="#cc3366">In the hut of hermit-ji?</font>
<font size="2" color="#cc3366">
</font>

<font color="#339999" size="2">Yes, I know. Desperate attempt to rhyme. But it was fun!</font>

<font color="#339999" size="2">Waiting for the next one,</font>

<font color="#339999" size="2">Love,</font>
<font color="#339999" size="2">Mav</font>

<font color="#339999" size="2">P.S. My very first day at the Inn! I shall remember.</font>

<font color="#339999" size="2">P.P.S. Farwa, thank you for discussing my comment. Love you for that!</font>

<font color="#339999" size="2">P.P.P.S. Just saw my name on the parchment! THANK YOU!!!!!</font>



again quoting from mob but cant help it anyways for ur Thanx u r most welcome... It really was worth it... Plz do visit the chat thread where sometime when Lin had time she visits and we all have chit chat the link is being provided by our every so darling KP

@KP there is a msg for u on chat thread pls read that.. *winks*

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Posted: 07 December 2012 at 6:41am | IP Logged
Originally posted by music1

lin this is for sure the much needed opening into their relationship...his beastly past and the curse combined with her naivety  and purity...it is gonna be the clash of the titan and his fairy...who discovers who the most is an open question...but thinking about whats gonna happen in the next few hrs...i have hairs standing up straight on my body...I'm thrilled and excited at the same time will keep ur warning in my mind.But had to tell u...I am loving this hermit more and more as the story is progressing...he knows when and how to push the right buttons...one .wise man he is...Enjoy ur days off and return back to us fit and fine hunSmile
 
You exactly mirrored my thoughts dear music... well written...
And about your line in bold...  Clap

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Posted: 07 December 2012 at 6:54am | IP Logged
Originally posted by maverickmartin


 
On a mystic land called Arhasia,
I stumbled upon, on a whim.
A land that held all enthralled,
Its story told  by Aquiline.

A tale of a disturbed Master,
Bewitched by a curse and a girl,
Who dared defy his arrogance
And left his mind in a whirl.

Gather around, fellow Comrades,
Let us what is to be.
Will the curse awaken or peace reign,
In the hut of hermit-ji?

 
 
Welcome to the mysterious world of Arhasia...
And your poetry... its just brilliant...
The essence of the entire chapter is beautifully captured in that last line...

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Posted: 07 December 2012 at 7:13am | IP Logged
nice update...

Sage was at his annoying best by referring him as lion and her as lamb...now r u going to show the night spent in the hut and Arnav's constant fight with the beast in him...

The way u r showing trusting herself with him even after all the horrible things he has done with her, will that one thing will be enough for him to hold on to her even though he has asked her to return to her home...i really looking forward to how he will stop fighting his emotions and go with the flow...

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Posted: 07 December 2012 at 7:18am | IP Logged
heyyy,,,okay i jus caught up with the entire story..and to say i fell in love with it will be an understatement..!!!! this s amazing story telling...the characterizations..the narration..the scenes..the setup..and the writing...gothic anytime!!Smile guess a new member is knocking at ur inn nowBig smile am like totally cheering for hermit ya..am so waiting to see whats gonna happen next...ahh the curse..the hut..the sleeping beauty well the beast and the truth lies btwn all these!!!!  great going...Clap

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Posted: 07 December 2012 at 7:37am | IP Logged
Lordy Lord ASR..LOL I just love the way Arnav looks at Khushi...Smile Waiting for the next update...Embarrassed

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Posted: 07 December 2012 at 7:43am | IP Logged
aw awesome one..
thnx 4pm Big smile

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