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ArHi FF:3:The BEASTS and the BLEEDING ROSES (Page 109)

ShrutiPandey Groupbie

Joined: 09 July 2012
Posts: 189

Posted: 07 December 2012 at 4:48am | IP Logged
"I was wondering what took the lion and lamb so long" LOL LOL

witty creature he is! Wink

Big smile Big smile

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-Farwa_Ibrahim- IF-Rockerz

Joined: 29 June 2012
Posts: 9357

Posted: 07 December 2012 at 4:59am | IP Logged
Okkk if I say tht the after note didnt find me dreadning will b a lie but all i would say is we r standing side by side for the upcomming update... N i wont ask u the reason of ur late update as i was really worried of ur well being... Now update was awesome Calmness of Hermit irked him lolz oh lordy. At first he was feeling unease in having the soup witout spoon but later he had four helpings.
''not only was her life in danger but even his own desires might not be easily controlled in the darkness of their tempting solitude''.
Oh he knew she affects him plus he cared for her n is having the fear of hurting her may b coz of his curse

another superb update loved it.

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music1 IF-Dazzler

Joined: 02 August 2011
Posts: 3368

Posted: 07 December 2012 at 5:14am | IP Logged
lin this is for sure the much needed opening into their relationship...his beastly past and the curse combined with her naivety  and is gonna be the clash of the titan and his fairy...who discovers who the most is an open question...but thinking about whats gonna happen in the next few hrs...i have hairs standing up straight on my body...I'm thrilled and excited at the same time will keep ur warning in my mind.But had to tell u...I am loving this hermit more and more as the story is progressing...he knows when and how to push the right .wise man he is...Enjoy ur days off and return back to us fit and fine hunSmile

Edited by music1 - 07 December 2012 at 5:28am

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Mxk3444 Goldie

Joined: 11 April 2012
Posts: 1500

Posted: 07 December 2012 at 5:15am | IP Logged
Yay you updated that made my whole day thank you:) it was nice to have someone defy lord Arnav other than Khushi and according to that note I'm loving this sage I'm trying to match the sages character from someone in the show and the only person who's coming in my mind would have to be NK! Anyway can't wait to read how Arnav spends the night with her! Thanks again for the update :)

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maverickmartin IF-Dazzler

Joined: 15 March 2012
Posts: 3298

Posted: 07 December 2012 at 5:40am | IP Logged
Hello, Aquiline. Did I say I love that name? Well, I do. Anyway, I was hanging around in the hope of reading the update for today before saying that I FINISHED EVERYTHING BEFORE IT!! *proud grin*

Therefore, I read the chapter before being surprised by your pigeon. Thank you, anyway, for taking the trouble.

OH, the vine scene!! It was seriously better than the unwinding of fairy lights from Khushi's body. I absolutely adored it!! Very well written! I am not going to take any guesses as to what will happen in the next chapter, but I'm willing to just wait patiently. For tomorrow!! Also, I like that hermit. Very tongue-in-cheek for a man of sacrifices, pardon me.

I'm so happy you're a quick updater!

I'm not good at this at all, but I try. I'm talking about the poem that follows. Forgive me if it well, is laughable, to say the least.

On a mystic land called Arhasia,
I stumbled upon, on a whim.
A land that held all enthralled,
Its story told  by Aquiline.

A tale of a disturbed Master,
Bewitched by a curse and a girl,
Who dared defy his arrogance
And left his mind in a whirl.

Gather around, fellow Comrades,
Let us what is to be.
Will the curse awaken or peace reign,
In the hut of hermit-ji?

Yes, I know. Desperate attempt to rhyme. But it was fun!

Waiting for the next one,


P.S. My very first day at the Inn! I shall remember.

P.P.S. Farwa, thank you for discussing my comment. Love you for that!

P.P.P.S. Just saw my name on the parchment! THANK YOU!!!!!

Edited by maverickmartin - 07 December 2012 at 5:42am

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hellgirl Senior Member

Joined: 02 July 2011
Posts: 240

Posted: 07 December 2012 at 6:02am | IP Logged
Waiting for update since morning...
Wow u r i ful jungle mood...
Our poor master of empire hv to spend night in a hut along with khushi...
This is sheer torture *cough**wink*
waiting for next update.

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kushipugly IF-Dazzler

Joined: 31 March 2012
Posts: 3187

Posted: 07 December 2012 at 6:14am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Aura7

aura, when will u unR?

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Jammy- IF-Dazzler

Joined: 16 May 2012
Posts: 4860

Posted: 07 December 2012 at 6:19am | IP Logged
Ohhh they spend the night! The hermits comment about the lion and the lamb reminds me of a quote from twilight's series- " ...and so the lion fell in love with the lamb" Waiting for that day! <3

Linny dearie, I hope you are ok. You don't sound like your- enthusiastic- self. All good yeah? 

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