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ArHi FF:3:The BEASTS and the BLEEDING ROSES (Page 108)

kushipugly IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 07 December 2012 at 9:35am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Aura7


             HERMIT'S HUT

HOT... STEAMY... SLURPY... Tongue

Aura, do you even know how much amzing your images for the updates are & what magic you create for the readers to indulge more in the story????????????
Just amazingClapClap
& arshii will be in this hut, in these surroundingsDay Dreaming. for me the whole place is looking ethernal just because arshi is happening to themClapClap
just saw the 2 new picture which you have updated in your post, just amazingClap

Edited by kushipugly - 07 December 2012 at 4:21pm

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angeldream14 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 07 December 2012 at 10:10am | IP Logged
loved it
wht is gone happen now  dam curious

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-Farwa_Ibrahim- IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 07 December 2012 at 11:21am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Aura7

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" color="#ff33ff" size="7">RABBA VEEYYJJJ...Wink</font>

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<font size="6" color="#ccc33" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">HOT... STEAMY... SLURPY...</font><font size="6"><font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif"></font>Tongue</font>
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AWESOME PICS LOVED THEM... the soup looks so yumii mmm my mouth is watering

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farha5556 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 07 December 2012 at 11:40am | IP Logged
two more exams and i am free.loved the update,hermit is so calm person.loved his reply to arnav.continue soon.

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Crinklez. Senior Member

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Posted: 07 December 2012 at 11:54am | IP Logged
Fab update as usual.

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hatelove_1 Goldie

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Posted: 07 December 2012 at 12:16pm | IP Logged
loved it

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saga_twilight IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 07 December 2012 at 12:40pm | IP Logged
N0o0os!!! y0u are leavings?? after this?? Lin!! Tum kali h0!! Lin n0t fair!!(If y0u didnt get the j0ke refer t0 the end sequence 0f B0l Bachan) :D This update leaves me with certain expectati0ns

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hoopoe IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 07 December 2012 at 3:58pm | IP Logged
Rabba ve fellow comrades...
Since Aquiline mentioned that  she never make a scene just for the fun of it, everything has more layers to it than what is seen... and since the closing lines of the chapter echoed the supposed storm she mentioned in her disclaimer for the next chapter...
He paused a moment to think it through, the consequences of sleeping in a hut alone with her in it.

Not only was her life in danger but even his own wild desires might not be easily controlled in the darkness of their tempting solitude.

I went for a re-reading of the previous chapters and guess what, I found the romantic grape eating chapter to be very dark,foreshadowing the impending storm which Aquiline mentioned... Its just my point of view ... Kindly read the following excerpt from Ch 110- TANGLES and share your views my dear friends...
And to make matters worse, he was hungry.
His hunger, that he had been suppressing all this while, ravaged his mind again and he cast a glance on her face.

"I'm hungry too," he said in a low voice and resumed picking on the grapes upon her body with his mouth.

"You're the Master of an Empire," she tried to reason with him to try to stop this sweet torment which she could take no more, "You are not used to eating forest fruits without having them washed well."

"Hunger in a Man does not make him pause to think of cultural norms."

she groaned, "Please stop. If you're hungry, I will try and pluck whatever fruits I can find as soon as we get out of this hole."

"My hunger cannot wait," he stated simply, and his mouth was around a rich round grape near her waist.

"Do you want me to stop?"

"Yes, please!" she cried into the air, feeling his mouth near her shoulder.

And then fire exploded.

One last grape had remained in the crook of her neck, the only exposed part of her skin where the grapes were to be found. He had thought of stopping the torment with that one last fill but the moment his wet mouth had pressed on neck, his hunger found new delight.

Kushi froze the moment she had felt his hot breath on her neck, and then when his burning mouth had pressed on her tender skin, she lost all sense of where and who she was. All she knew was she wanted him to find more grapes on her skin even though they would not be there.

She closed her eyes as he bit the grape, a drop of the violet juice falling on her fair skin. After having devoured the grape, he licked the drop on her neck with his burning tongue and she moaned.

Lord Arnav was lying along her length, when he had come to take the grape from her neck.

He looked at her when he had licked the drop of grape juice off her neck. Her cheeks were red and her lips trembling, while her eyes remained closed, taking in the torture he was meting out to her.

Her moan had undone him and he had leaned down to taste her neck again, to hear that moan again, when the parrot squawked overhead from a tree branch.

The spell broke and he moved away from her and she stared at him, her gaze dazed under the heated moment's aftermath but shocked too as realization seeped into her consciousness.

Suddenly Kushi cried, "Oh, my dress!! It's ruined!"

Lord Arnav looked at her and saw her turning about, trying to look over her shoulder to the rear of her gown, and he saw that the grapes under her had crushed with her fall and the back of her gown was drenched entirely in the violet gluey juice.

He shook his head, "You invite hazards, don't you? One after the other!"

She stopped looking at her gown over her shoulder and shot him a look, "Well, good you mentioned it because you seem to be a recurring hazard in my life. Over and over again, popping up everywhere to wreck my life."

So some damage done... and to rectify it...
Then he leaned forward and stretched out an arm towards her.

She stood staring at the hand for a moment, not wanting to touch it, but she found her dusty hand slid into his dirtied one. The warmth in his hand assured her and he closed his fingers around her hand, securing her for the hoisting.

Then he lifted her up and they were out of the lurid hole at last.

And they lived happily ever after...
What do u guys think? I know my mind is in overthinking mode after i read Aquiline's disclaimer... but do share ur point of views.

Edited by hoopoe - 07 December 2012 at 4:07pm

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