I'm late! *agitated**shrugs off coat, makes a dive for her chair, rapt attention*
Note: Apt title.
Brb!
Edited*
Oh. My. God. Of all the things in the world, I expected this the least. Shyam comes to Khushi? He tracks her? Oh, this is so much better this way! Arnav sees his other side before he can be mislead... So good of you. I loved this update!
The way Arnav restricted himself, but stayed with her nonetheless - shows he will always be there for her, even if she cannot know of his presence, like now, when she fell asleep. When he goes out to let moonlight wash over him - Khushi's presence made him do that, in a way, it showed that, Khushi would also lead him to light, much stronger than the soft moonlight and let it wash his walls and pain and haunting memories away. He himself is a man who encloses him within darkness, but he won't let even a "shadow" cause her harm. Touching.
Trust me when I say that I started reading the chapter with anticipationthat made my heart go dhak-dhak and it's still "dhak-dhak-ing"... all that chase and shock! Hay Devi Maiya!!
Great update, Lin! Good luck for your exams!!
Love,
Mav
Edited by maverickmartin - 11 years ago
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