ArHi FF:3:The BEASTS and the BLEEDING ROSES - Page 58

You are a star dear Lin.  Another chapter full of Rabba ve's.  I was literally singing rabba ve when he was devouring the grapes.   Edited by bablio09 - 11 years ago

i love u Lin love u sooo much[>:D:<]... Loved the update❤️... It was epic... So romantic n cute... My smile grew wider and wider with each line... I m quoting some lines from the update and remaining will also be quoted when cant tell u... So here i go

Lord arnav stopped confused ''what'' and then he frowned at the bird '' is it a green female bird,this Green heart? really lordy u thought fortune has found a crush lolz and of cource how can he understand to whom Fortune is meant by green heart... In intellegence he is not as good as khushi i guess...

When he saw some torn clothe of her gown in paw of Fortune he became worried for khushi... Hai such concern love it

hahahahah 😆[ROFL] he called her '' village monkey''... lordy has some sense of humor[:O].

He looked at her "something i will soon regret''Lolz i dun think so lordy

Instead he leaned down at her feet and without touching her with his hands to keep her still,knowing that astonishment would keep her immobilized for him,he opened his mouth and bit the rich violet grape that was on creeper around her ankle.

i couldnt help but blush and my heartbeat going all DHAK DHAK and unlike khushi i was sure it has nothing to do with acidity...

And then the torture went on and so does my heartbeat and my smile grew wider... Till he ate the grape on her neck... Time stopped so does my heartbeat for a moment and then my cheeks grew red and my heartbeat as wild as khushi... Loved it... It was such a romantic update without much of physical touch as being physical is not necessary for being romantic and love doesnt need too much of physical touch a mere glance a smile little brushes of touches... I really love this kind of love... And i always love this kind of update lots of applause... I wont mind to say it a sizzling update...

Than u so much Lin sweetheart for the special pigeon I really m thankful to u. Really i cant thank u enough. There will very rare storytellers like u not only by the way u narrate but most because of the beauty of ur heart... We the comrades and readers r honored to have such a geniune person with us.Edited by -Farwa_Ibrahim- - 11 years ago

Thanks for sending the pigeon dear...

 

 

 

His subtle way of expressing his emotions... her childish acts... their continuous bickering... their repeated struggles to control the conflicting emotions and desires of heart and mind... the gradual strengthening of the emotional bond they share even unknown to themselves... its always a pleasure to read about these two sweethearts.

 

Edited by hoopoe - 11 years ago

awesome

Wow greatly written 😃
That was quite hot lol with him eating the grape out of her neck, damn fortune for interrupting!!! 😛

You seriously have no idea how happy i am to read this scene in the story! It brought back so many joyful memories. As I was reading i kept remembering how the scene was played out on Iss Pyar. I truly am thankful for you in writing this out. The Nanital scene was one of my favorite scenes and I was so happy that you managed to grab the essence of the scene. You did a wonderful job in writing everything out including a few twists of your own! I love you for writing out this story it truly is helping us remember how awesome Iss Pyar was. I cant wait to read the update on Monday! Have a nice weekend!!!

Great update waiting for the next one u know what ipkknd wil live in our hearts only if arhi writers never give up their passion to write...until the next season comes it is really going to be tough with no ipkknd so cheer up give us updates whenever u can make arshi live...

[QUOTE=Aquiline]I wanted to thank each of you individually but I'm preparing to leave for my grandmother's now and once again, my planning of time leaves me with no choice but to shorten my thank you speech. But here's my love and thanks to all my Comrades and Readers for everything they have given me, You made me create Arhasia and Arhasia will be there for you to visit anytime you want. 

 

 

Actually,we should be the one thanking to you for recreating this magical fairy tale & for creating arhasia

 

love you loads🤗

 

 

 

Edited by kushipugly - 11 years ago

Loved 2days update...

awe...what a nice update...love ur writting skill...