Thread 2 - Sanam bewafa.part 25 - PG 140 20/7/13 - Page 71

Posted: 10 years ago
its was a perfect update. Perfect verbal slap on ayesha face, perfect nuaghty act by the kids, perfect fb scene and raya ko romance toh double perfect.. It always worthy to wait for ur updates.. Thanks for the pm, update soon. Edited by Pinkjali - 10 years ago
Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update,...continue soon !!!
Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by 123fiza1


Yaaayyy me first...
Wow this is a fantastic update Molly...
Finally their mu got cleared...
Omg Ayesha had planned to kill priya n that to in this way...
Ayesha n kids part was hillarious..
😔 sudden interuption in much waited romance...
Looking frwd to a romantic update...

P.s why do u feel that something is missing...
I think everything was just prfct in this part...
Dont feel sad...update soon


am  so happy that u liked  my  update.  
Posted: 10 years ago

Loved the update!! 

But why did you stop at such a crucial moment? Lol 

We want ROMANCE between Raya! 😉

Posted: 10 years ago
 dear...😛.4 ur good job..👏👏..
ur updates..⭐️⭐️⭐️..
Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by naznin17


Loved the update!! 

But why did you stop at such a crucial moment? Lol 

We want ROMANCE between Raya! 😉



 thanku so  much .. i stopped because that should be  super hot   wanting  more and the  desire build up  and then the  reunion .. 

wait for it .. romance is on  the way  
Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by name2saakshi


 dear...😛.4 ur good job..👏👏..
ur updates..⭐️⭐️⭐️..

thanku so much 

am glad u liked it 
Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update...thanks for PM...😃
Posted: 10 years ago
awesome update yaar.. 👏 👏 
specially kids naughtiness with ayesha luv it.. 😆
atlast raya misunderstanding get cleared. 
.rajat ka character kuch thik nahi hain.. 
bt this part jst superbbb..pls cntinue soon..!!! 😊
Edited by anuraya - 9 years ago
Posted: 10 years ago




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Awww molly those were fantastic updates ...Finally i got to read them ...

Enjoyed till the end ...loved the flash back it entertaining as RAYAs younger age and their love fightings ...and Present track is soo different that a husband and wife fighting over their hidden feelings and love towards eachother ...

Ayesha is a such a leach ,Doesnt she knew priya is her didi and in next chapter she came to knew it .. she tried to kill priya in such a cheap way ,.. Anyway finally Ram comes to knew their dirty plan ...

B/N ... are you trying to bring any health isuue of priya ...as oneline she said "He doesnt knew my health condition " hmmm eager to knew whats your plan ..

And when she was having stomach pain ... He soothened her pain ...woww i loved it soo much .. raging bulls caring nature you have written so beautifully ,,

COMing to kids they were really naughty ...and played with their dady and whom he should eat first ,soo many confusions in one dy he got to knew kids mischefness ...
Loved to see the twins naughty ness when RAYA were on romance ..
So finalyy their misunderstanding cleared and and waiting eagerly for their ongoing romance ..hmm that too after years and with the kids around them.. when they will get time ..
The last update was sensuouslyy sizzling update ..


loved it totally ,superb updtes .. thanks for the Pms but i expected more parts as i knew u r super busy ..Didnt tell anything iam super happy with the updates ..

eagerly waiting for next update .. love you .. missed your stories .. And was read first your updates ..
What about other story .. you havent written it .. .plzzz continue that alsoo ...
Desperately waiting for another super duper update ..
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👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏





Edited by luvsakshi - 10 years ago

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