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OS: Colors of Life (Page 5)

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Posted: 08 November 2012 at 2:31pm | IP Logged
BEAUTIFUL CONCEPT YAAR!!

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Posted: 08 November 2012 at 3:27pm | IP Logged
Wow Lilly, that was beautiful. I can't believe this is your first ever fictional writing it seems as though you've written so many other OS's/FF's I think you should start writing more.Considering this is your first one, this is awesome!
I love the whole concept of this story with the whole orphanage idea it was so different and something enjoyable to readBig smile
Khushi getting Arnav ready in the morning is so cute! I love how Khushi had managed to get through to the 'mini Arnav' and also supporting Arnav too when he had needed her. When Arnav embraced Khushi into that tight hug that was just heart touchingEmbarrassed
 
Life offers you every color, you just need to use them to make your life colorful. And one way of coloring your life is to let your sorrows and pain to go away by sharing them with your loved ones and embrace whatever the little happiness life is giving you. That's the life and everyone should learn the art of living a happy life
 
^That little paragraph you added was literally outstanding, you're a brilliant writer you should continue writing more.. Thanks for the PMStar

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Posted: 08 November 2012 at 9:01pm | IP Logged
Superb..u wrote it very well

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Posted: 08 November 2012 at 9:28pm | IP Logged
SO beautiful!!! absolutely loved it ...

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Posted: 08 November 2012 at 9:51pm | IP Logged
Awesome os

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Posted: 08 November 2012 at 10:43pm | IP Logged
Really that was a beautiful os...
i just loved it...
beautifully written with all the emotions...
Do write more...
you have long way to go...



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Posted: 08 November 2012 at 10:44pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by mayabegum

Wow Lilly, that was beautiful. I can't believe this is your first ever fictional writing it seems as though you've written so many other OS's/FF's I think you should start writing more.Considering this is your first one, this is awesome!
I love the whole concept of this story with the whole orphanage idea it was so different and something enjoyable to readBig smile
Khushi getting Arnav ready in the morning is so cute! I love how Khushi had managed to get through to the 'mini Arnav' and also supporting Arnav too when he had needed her. When Arnav embraced Khushi into that tight hug that was just heart touchingEmbarrassed
 
Life offers you every color, you just need to use them to make your life colorful. And one way of coloring your life is to let your sorrows and pain to go away by sharing them with your loved ones and embrace whatever the little happiness life is giving you. That's the life and everyone should learn the art of living a happy life
 
^That little paragraph you added was literally outstanding, you're a brilliant writer you should continue writing more.. Thanks for the PMStar

thanks a ton maya Hug 
your comment is indeed very encouraging Smile

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Posted: 09 November 2012 at 12:18am | IP Logged
that was superb... Smile

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