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Ariya FF: D techies Diary part14 page 56 18/03 (Page 4)

kaveriw2008 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 09 November 2012 at 8:40am | IP Logged
wow...ff on shree and his love life...tani sautan jaldi update kar na...aur sun yaad se pm bhejna ...warna soch le tera kya hoga...after all its sautan wala love,.Wink

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Posted: 09 November 2012 at 10:37am | IP Logged

LEMME WARN u : Dis part s a bit cmic ...i njoyed writing it 

Chapter 2:

30 April 2008:

Second day at ETF was a mixture of adventure, confusion, Fun and most importantly sum gr8 revelations. I got scolding from d great Rawte , Arjun rawte . Actually I shud not write like dis for him, after all he s my boss , but he deserved dat'khadoos kahin k .

My day started with me n chotu reaching together. We become friends soon. He told me about his experience of working wid Arjun Sir.  Then before I could have told him my experience, Sharmishtha entered . I started chatting wid her n came to know she wants to go in forensic science.

I was telling them both about a new software, when that Sharmistha , told me dat I m a Nerd. She even told me dat I will become a Computer , if I keep on sticking to my laptop. Hey bhagwaan, y all mad people r working wid me . I also fought with her . But then Chotu , sorted out d differences in between us. I think she should have thanked Chotu , otherwise I would have Hacked her laptop n den ''..<I m wicked sumtimes>.

But I didn't knew what is in store for me in d next hours.

Me n sharmishta were discussing a case with Roshni Ma'am.  Suddenly Arjun sir entered n excused roshni ma'am for a moment. Both of them left d room. I personally didn't liked it because I like Roshni ji a lot. Might b I m n idiot who is liking his own boss, n that too on second day of my work, but kya kare 'Dil Hain ki manta nahi'.

Out of my frustration of Arjun sir taking Roshni Ma'am, I opened my mouth in front of Sharmishtha. I said that how much irresponsible Arjun sir is, How can he excuse her when we are in a meeting.

Then what sharmistha said to me shook me for sum tym. Arjun sir was her brother. Arjun sir n her father were very good friends, n so she always tied Rakhi to him. That meant I was in trouble because I said wrong about her brother. I better b careful next time.(Bachke rehna shree)

But I think today was not at all my day. I did d same mistake again. After lunch time, Sharmishtha was busy with some files. I was in roshni ma'am room and I was trying to Jam mobile networks of a Hotel,as rathore sir assigned d task to me.

But I couldn't successfully do that , after all it was my first experience at it. But who will make Rathore sir understand this. He scolded me like hell. He even warned me that if these mistakes are repeated , then I m sent out of ETF.

Then Roshni ji interrupted for my rescue. But wait , she referred to rathore Sir in a sentence as 'Bhai' , though she immediately corrected it wid 'Sir', after Rathore gave her a glare.

So now I got second jhatka of the day , Roshni ji n Rathore sir were brother sister. Sharmistha madam was Arjun sir sister. Dese people should have a family get-together in ETF. I think I m d only who doesn't have any relatives in ETF.

1 more unusual thing happened. When I was telling wrong about Arjun sir, wen he took roshni ma'am , along with him. That time my eyes noticed a smirk on Sharmishtha's face. I just hope that Arjun sir n Roshni ma'am are not related , warna meri prem kahani to start hone se pehle hi ruk jayegi.


PS: i m waiting for ur likes n comments

Please read a note on Page 5,..its important

Edited by tani23 - 09 November 2012 at 9:08pm

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Love_Arnie IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 09 November 2012 at 10:42am | IP Logged

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prava55663 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 09 November 2012 at 10:43am | IP Logged
family get together in ETF...shree was superb...
awesome update purva...

thanks for the pm...

Edited by prava55663 - 09 November 2012 at 10:49am

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Sneha113 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 09 November 2012 at 10:46am | IP Logged
i loved it dear Clap
shree ne toh arjun ko roshni ka bf hi samaj lia Big smile
family get together lol Tongue
shree se jhagra toh lappy hack!!!
update soon dear Smile

Edited by priya00147 - 09 November 2012 at 10:53am

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salta IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 09 November 2012 at 10:54am | IP Logged
omg tani... puri ki puri etf rishetedaar's awesome... loved it..
plz continue soon...

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purecure IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 09 November 2012 at 11:12am | IP Logged

Tnk god u done wid boards...n ur colg too...i guess warna...

Tere english formats ki toh waat lag jaati bidu...again exceeded 125 words...very bad very bad!!!Wink
First of ol ye riya kab aayegi...!!!!DisapproveDay Dreaming
& bechaara probz...i feel aagey ke pages jab khulege to zaroor kuch khushi  ki baat bhi milegi...!!!Approve
kya pata agla jhatka ye na hoo ki roshni aur arjun...married hai??!!!ROFL
& get together...lolxx dat was so funny!!!!LOL
Nice update dear ...Keep it up!!!!Clap
Looking to read further!!!Day Dreaming

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sashashyam IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 09 November 2012 at 11:23am | IP Logged
Dear Purva,

Very light and funny, like a souffle that turns out well. A pleasant change from the usual linear narrative. You are doing just fine,

Shyamala Aunty


LEMME WARN u : Dis part s a bit cmic ...i njoyed writing it 

Chapter 2:

30 April 2008:

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