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Ariya FF: D techies Diary part14 page 56 18/03 (Page 39)

sashashyam IF-Sizzlerz
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Posted: 13 December 2012 at 5:43am | IP Logged
Dear Purva,

Well, well, this is getting exciting with a vengeance! I also see that you are maintaining the conventions of a first person narrative faithfully till now, which is very good. However, I find it difficult to believe that a girl from such an opulent background would actually fall for Chotu as he is shown in the serial. But perhaps love is blind after all!

Shyamala Aunty.

Originally posted by tani23

Thanks to ever 1 for d super amazing comments...



~~~CHAPTER 10 ~~~


princesshelen IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 13 December 2012 at 5:46am | IP Logged
Awesome...continue soon...
nivanthi2 Senior Member
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Posted: 13 December 2012 at 5:54am | IP Logged
omg   poor  rathor!  tomato ki  tara  lal  hogeya!!!!ROFLROFL
wow  wonderful  update!
_TaNi_ IF-Sizzlerz
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Posted: 13 December 2012 at 6:05am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sashashyam

Dear Purva,

Well, well, this is getting exciting with a vengeance! I also see that you are maintaining the conventions of a first person narrative faithfully till now, which is very good. However, I find it difficult to believe that a girl from such an opulent background would actually fall for Chotu as he is shown in the serial. But perhaps love is blind after all!

Shyamala Aunty.

Thanks for liking it ...n i will try to maintain d first person narration further also ...sumtimes it is actually difficult to write from sum1 else's POV
@Bold: i wud say luv is deaf n dumb alsoLOL


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Posted: 13 December 2012 at 6:05am | IP Logged
hey that was so cute update...

loved so many things in the update...all the small details you wrote...
specially the one on rathore...Lipstick mark on his cheek..OMG..i was blushing while reading that part...

arjun instant saying she is looking good in blue...LOL...he must be so embarrassed...

he knows about shree and sharmishta...what a possessive brother he is??

Loved the update...it was really very cute...
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Posted: 13 December 2012 at 6:13am | IP Logged
Awesum update di..!! like d shramista teasing arjun.! arjun warn shree for shramista..!! whos d shooter waiting to knw..!!

Edited by 012345678912345 - 13 December 2012 at 6:13am

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Posted: 13 December 2012 at 6:37am | IP Logged
Nice update

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Posted: 13 December 2012 at 6:46am | IP Logged
great update :) continue soon :)

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