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Ariya FF: D techies Diary part14 page 56 18/03 (Page 2)

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Posted: 08 November 2012 at 11:20am | IP Logged
Originally posted by purecure

first ol in school days i wer thot dat diary entry shld contain 125 words only...si i think 29 th april posts exceeds the word limit so ur marks sry comments r deducted for it lolxx


Oh my marks deducted AWWWCry

But no problem as far as u liked it ...thanks 

i always wanted to do sumthing wid Shree's character ...dats y i chose him Smile


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Posted: 08 November 2012 at 11:22am | IP Logged
Roshni and Riya back...thats great news...
Amazing story line...from Shree's POV...very different!!
plz cont soon!

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Posted: 08 November 2012 at 11:29am | IP Logged
Wow that's a completely different concept ...
So shree is the narrator ...hmmm that sounds interesting ...
So even roshni is there and shree is gonna work under her ... N poor chottu he has to work under Arjun ...
Lookin forward to read the next update ...

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Posted: 08 November 2012 at 12:17pm | IP Logged
super duper niceee... wohoo... Clap
this diary entry is something unique and great idea...
mazaa aa gaya...
and I can totally imagine Shree... agar tumhare badle wo likhta to bilkul aise hi likhta Big smile

and wow.. u included Roshni... !! liked it verrryyy much... would love to see her as an ETF member... Thumbs Up

p.s. - The thing I liked the most is that u started the diary entry of Shree from 28th April...  LOL ... and  Roshni is my nick name
so by this way got a connection with ETF ROFL

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Posted: 08 November 2012 at 12:18pm | IP Logged
Fantastic start nd nice conept... poor chotu... continue soon...

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Posted: 08 November 2012 at 12:19pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by ankita2804

p.s. - The thing I liked the most is that u started the diary entry of Shree from 28th April...  LOL ... and  Roshni is my nick name
so by this way got a connection with ETF ROFL

U Liked it so thanks for dat 

U know d reason of me starting wid 28 April (v have a Common reason for itWink)

Dat s a nice connection ...Roshni n 28 april ...

All set to join ETF denWink
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Posted: 08 November 2012 at 12:34pm | IP Logged
Awesome Concept ...looking forward to read more

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Posted: 08 November 2012 at 1:41pm | IP Logged
Dear Tani,

It is a very novel concept, to write the whole story from Shree's point of view, and I liked what you have done so far.  Your only limitation will be that you can only put down what Shree knows on his own, and you cannot include the thoughts of the others, or their interactions of which he has no direct knowledge. That is what will make this an interesting experiment for you, and I am sure you will handle  it just fine.

Shyamala Aunty

Originally posted by tani23

Heyaa Ariya fans,

An idea struck me ...it is basically Shree's point of view towards d whole story...
It will have a new character "Sharmishta " (opposite shree..)

Character Sketch :
1. Arjun suryakant rawte
2. Sameer rathore
3. Roshni
4. Shreekant sen.
5. Chotu
6. Sharmishta 

Dun worry i have RIA Also ...
7. Ria (cant foget her , but her entry would b after 2-3 chapters)

It is gonna b a diary entry format ...so everything is in first person...

I wud Like to tell : please check d dates (on which d entry is written)



~~~Chapter 1~~~

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