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Ariya FF: D techies Diary part14 page 56 18/03 (Page 15)

Radhika Shah IF-Sizzlerz
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Posted: 19 November 2012 at 6:27am | IP Logged
Great update

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Posted: 19 November 2012 at 7:20am | IP Logged
Hey ...
That was amazing ...
Awww roshni died ... :(
But Riya came back as an angel ... :)
Awww Arjun met Roshni the same way he did wih Riya ... But poor Riya Arjun is scolding her a lot... :(

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Posted: 19 November 2012 at 7:32am | IP Logged
awesome update yaar...Smile

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Posted: 19 November 2012 at 10:51am | IP Logged
My dear Purva,

It is going well, and I see that you are keeping it close to the screen version, if not  exactly the same. You are also managing to stick  to the rules for a first person narrative quite well, which is usually rather difficult; you have not slipped up even once!

Best of luck for the rest of the story!

Shyamala Aunty

[QUOTE=tani23]

~~~Chapter 5~~~

6 August 2010,


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Posted: 19 November 2012 at 10:57am | IP Logged
@Radhika, @kunchu, @pihu_angad: thank u so much for d precious comments ...
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Posted: 19 November 2012 at 10:58am | IP Logged
@Gurmeet4Drshti, @Prava: thanks for d beautiful comments

Yes in my story Ria wud b clossely like Roshni ..n dat wud b d reason y arjun wud maintain a distance ..but Whether he will accept her in his life is STILL A QUESTIOn 


wait for diary to unfold

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Posted: 19 November 2012 at 11:01am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sashashyam

My dear Purva,

It is going well, and I see that you are keeping it close to the screen version, if not  exactly the same. You are also managing to stick  to the rules for a first person narrative quite well, which is usually rather difficult; you have not slipped up even once!

Best of luck for the rest of the story!

Shyamala Aunty


Thank u so much Aunty ...

My v/s s similar to orginal show but dere wud b sum cases in future , which r differnt

besides dis : i m glad u liked first person narration 

Actually i always wanted to try my hand n frst person narration , (as i thot i was not gud in it)

U made my day ...sayng u liked d conceptSmile
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Posted: 19 November 2012 at 11:04am | IP Logged
Amazing part dear...
felt that i was watching those scenes again..
Roshni's part was tragic...and who is this V??? mysterious character, huh?? update soon...

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