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Ariya FF: D techies Diary part14 page 56 18/03 (Page 14)

_TaNi_ IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 16 November 2012 at 3:22am | IP Logged
Originally posted by fatima15

Nice update :)
continue soon

Thanks for liking d part dear 

Stay tuned to know how she died n ria's entry

_TaNi_ IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 16 November 2012 at 3:25am | IP Logged
Originally posted by -sree13-

Arjun-Roshni marriage ceremony is very cute Wink
Shree is so scared of Arjun that he returns the shoes without taking money..!!!kya yaar shree LOL

OMG Shree proposed Sharmistha through E-mail...!!!yeh sunke main hasun ROFL ya shock mode pe chali jayun Shocked samajh nehi aa raha hai LOL only Shree can do this in this whole world I guess Wink

Purva now truly hats off to you dear Thumbs Up how you are managing to write this from Shree's POV thats too keeping suspence in between I am totaly loving this Big smile
thanks for this beautiful update & thanks for the pm Smile

thanks Sree Smile

i m super happy,...thanks for liking d part 

Stay tuned : shree-sharmishta LS+ Roshni's death+ ria's entry in next part
_TaNi_ IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 16 November 2012 at 3:29am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sashashyam

Dear TPurva,

Very, very nice going.

Apart from the TV visuals that one can conjure up for the Arjun-Roshni wedding, - and Shree's ruining the joote churana  - what delighted me was the bumbling way in which Shree handles his courtship of Sharmistha, and how he searches, confusedly, for the meaning of the unaccustomed feelings he is experiencing.

 "Whenever rathore sir, gives a case, I always pray, in some corner my heart, that my duty should b with her. My heart parties if she is there with me for a case" is  so sweetly and so truly expressed, and :"I held her hand, n then said d Not-so magical words:"Haila Arjun sir". Sharmishtha was shocked . She luked backward n I ran from d place, before arjun sir would have seen me. I was hiding from him behind  a pillar" is side-splitting..

Now of course you will have to move on to a case, and I am looking forward to that. Keep it up! I am sure you won't forget that you cannot write anything that Shree could not have seen or heard  or been told.

Shyamala Aunty

Thank u aunty 

i m glad u liked d parts...

yup will focus on ArNi next tym ...Shree-sharmishta's relation n most important ria's entry in next part
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Posted: 17 November 2012 at 12:07pm | IP Logged
awesome part ...
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Posted: 19 November 2012 at 5:45am | IP Logged
Thanks Dia for liking the part

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Posted: 19 November 2012 at 5:49am | IP Logged

~~~Chapter 5~~~

6 August 2010,

OMG I m quite excited about tomorrow, roshni di know about my n sharmishtha's relation. After the valentines day confrontation, she was very happy for me n sharmishtha. She wanted to tell d truth to arjun sir,ASAP. She was quite all dis while , just because of both of us. First sharmishtha feared n den I . Who will not b afraid f Arjun sir.

Now diary , u must b thinking …what is so special about tomorrow, dat roshni di chose d day. Arrey yaar, u forgot , kal Arjun sir n roshni di ki First anniversary hain. Roshni di is so sweet , she is going to ask about both of us, as she very well know Arjun sir wont b able to deny this tomorrow. Very smart n very intelligent move.

By the way there is one more news , A big news. Rathore Sir is a big chupa rustam. He didn't let anyone come to know about his long time relation with a college friend of his. Her name is Megha. According to roshni di, Sameer sir n megha bhabhi , were very gud friends, and even roshni di didn't knew about there relation . Isn't it funny, roshni di, sameer sir ki sis, even didn't knew about it. Finally Sameer sir told about the relation n they are getting engaged tomorrow itself.

So basically its Roshni di arjun sir first wedding anniversary. Rahore sir-Megha bhabhi 's Engagement and mine n sharmishtha's relation 's revelation in front of 'Samjhe ya samjhayun'.

God I just pray that to keep every1 happy n d day should b perfect. It should b free from all d sadness .



7 August 2012,

Two years back, same day we were all so happy. Everybody had a new outlook towards life. Everybody had a lot of dreams which we all want to fulfill. But no of us, had any idea, that destiny has something, very bad, very much fatal, in store for all of us.

The storm came and it took away all the happiness from our lives…..Never thought such thing would have ever happen to us.

Roshni di was d ray of hope, d ray of light who was shining in every1 's life. With her leaving, our lives shattered completely. The best day of our lives become d worst nightmare.

Whenever I think, that She is no more with us, tears dwell in my eyes. She was one of the most purest soul I ever met. She never thought wrong about anybody. She helped me,chotu, rathore sir, Megha bhabhi n most importantly Arjun sir, in every aspect of life.

I heard when I joined ETF, Arjun sir was very rude in his training days, but then d princess changed him. She softened him. She made him enjoy every part of life.

She was the one who was going to tell him n every1 about me n sharmishtha. But before she would have fulfilled her wish, She was no longer in between us.

A big drift was created in between Arjun sir n Sameer sir. Arjun Sir, would have killed Megha bhabhi, that day, because of the misunderstandings. Sameer sir came in between but arjun sir misunderstood him as well.

 Sharmishtha is in US for past 1 year  for some case. Arjun sir, though , has recovered from the shock, after staying in hospital, but still we don't see him in ETF now. He s in his own world,  trying to solve crime in the city, looking out for V……..

Though sameer sir n megha bhabhi are married now, but still they don't seem to be happy. There is always a pain in there eyes, A pain for not able to do anything for roshni di and most importantly, Arjun sir.

But I have heard that Arjun sir might join ETF again . Actually raghu sir doubts that Sheen is in some danger. He wants Arjun sir to look on the case, personally.  Might be, he will join us soon. I just hope, he starts living his life once again. Me and sharmishtha, have already decided, the moment Arjun sir, will start living his life again, both of us will fulfill Roshni di's wish.

God I pray from my heart, to send some angel in all our lives. Some1 who can make us all cherish our lives again.



11 August 2012,

Today 2 new people joined ETF. One was ACP Arjun Suryakant rawte, to solve Sheen's kidnapping case. The other officer was Ms. Ria Mukherjee, research specialist. She will b working with us in place of roshni di. Ria is nice, fun loving, hygiene  freak and most importantly , she reminds me of Roshni di. Her views , d way she talks, reminds me of Di.

Strange thing happened today. Ria had no idea about arjun sir, hoga bhi kaise, the time she joined, arjun sir to ETF office mein nahi the, he was suppose to directly meet us at raghu sir's place.

Now what happened, ria madam found, a man trying to check a car. She , thinking that he must b a thief, went and attacked d person. Her bad luck, it was Arjun sir. This is how they met for the first time. Arjun Sir counter-attacked her and caught hold of her. Wo to hum sab sahi tym par aa gaye , warna Ri was gone today….

By the way, the incident reminded me of something. Actually Sharmishtha told me, the time when Arjun sir, Roshni maam, and V……(I cant even write his name, such a nonsense fellow)…joined ETF. That time Roshni ma'am and Arjun sir had a similar fight. Arjun sir was trying to find some files in the archive room and roshni Di thought him to b a thief. So she attacked him n he counter attacked her.

Arjun Sir face was worth watching, I m 100% sure , he also recalled the similar incident. Mujhe yaad aa gaya unhein yaad aana hi hain…

Anyways we concentrated on the case. Finally Arjun sir's instinct, Sameer sir's guidance worked. We finally found her. It was a human trafficking racket, which we found. Arjun sir, was very indifferent towards Ria, throughout.  He kept on scolding her, for her statistics theories.

What is unusual is , he is getting so irritated with ria, for no reason. Again n again , he kept on scolding her, for very small reasons. Arjun sir, never, got affected by such small things. Is he getting affected by her presence??? But why?? …

Main bhi kuch jyada soch raha hun, …..i m becoming Filmy day by day…..Shree u need to sleep, tera dimaag kharaab ho gaya hain.


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Posted: 19 November 2012 at 6:03am | IP Logged
Great yaar.. too good..
it seams like we are watching it through Shree's eyes..
too good...Embarrassed 
prava55663 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 19 November 2012 at 6:05am | IP Logged
awesome purva...
Loved the way the past is opening up..
Megah and rathore hope they will be happy soon

ria and roshni both taught arjun as theif..he he
hope rathore and arjun will be friends again..

Edited by prava55663 - 19 November 2012 at 6:37am

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