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Ariya FF: D techies Diary part14 page 56 18/03 (Page 11)

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Posted: 15 November 2012 at 9:12pm | IP Logged
Tani wow updates were fabulous .read in one go n liked it very much.
Continue soon

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Posted: 15 November 2012 at 11:02pm | IP Logged
he ran 4m restaurent after seeing arjun!!! lolLOL

email -propose!!! hmm...


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Posted: 15 November 2012 at 11:09pm | IP Logged
great update dear...Clap

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Posted: 15 November 2012 at 11:27pm | IP Logged
wow!!!awesome update purva!!!


arjun-roshni marriage from shree's point of view..and shree's heart beats seeing sharmishtha Wink


Aakhir use pyaaar ho hi gaya!!!


dinner date pe propose start hone se pehle hi samjhe ya samjhaun aa gya Big smileand den shree proposing her thru gadget!!


thappad toh padna hi tha Tongue


roshni ne dekh lia!!!wonder kya bolegi!!!


update soon

Edited by priya00147 - 15 November 2012 at 11:28pm

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Posted: 16 November 2012 at 12:07am | IP Logged
Arjun-Roshni marriage ceremony is very cute Wink
Shree is so scared of Arjun that he returns the shoes without taking money..!!!kya yaar shree LOL

OMG Shree proposed Sharmistha through E-mail...!!!yeh sunke main hasun ROFL ya shock mode pe chali jayun Shocked samajh nehi aa raha hai LOL only Shree can do this in this whole world I guess Wink

Purva now truly hats off to you dear Thumbs Up how you are managing to write this from Shree's POV thats too keeping suspence in between I am totaly loving this Big smile
thanks for this beautiful update & thanks for the pm Smile

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Posted: 16 November 2012 at 12:31am | IP Logged
Dear TPurva,

Very, very nice going.

Apart from the TV visuals that one can conjure up for the Arjun-Roshni wedding, - and Shree's ruining the joote churana  - what delighted me was the bumbling way in which Shree handles his courtship of Sharmistha, and how he searches, confusedly, for the meaning of the unaccustomed feelings he is experiencing.

 "Whenever rathore sir, gives a case, I always pray, in some corner my heart, that my duty should b with her. My heart parties if she is there with me for a case" is  so sweetly and so truly expressed, and :"I held her hand, n then said d Not-so magical words:"Haila Arjun sir". Sharmishtha was shocked . She luked backward n I ran from d place, before arjun sir would have seen me. I was hiding from him behind  a pillar" is side-splitting..

Now of course you will have to move on to a case, and I am looking forward to that. Keep it up! I am sure you won't forget that you cannot write anything that Shree could not have seen or heard  or been told.

Shyamala Aunty

[QUOTE=tani23]

Chapter 4:




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Posted: 16 November 2012 at 2:58am | IP Logged
Originally posted by shrutisweety

kya baat hai tani
roshni and arjun marriage was wounderful
it was awsome update
continue soon

Thanks for liking d part shruti dear 

Stay tuned to know how she died n ria's entry

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Posted: 16 November 2012 at 3:00am | IP Logged
Originally posted by vidya.anand

Arjun-Roshni shaadi from Shree's point of view was cute...

funny cute romance for Shree...his proposal was unique...emailing a love proposal...only he can do it...WOW...sweet!
nice one...update soon!

thanks for liking d chapter ,...

Glad u like d different way of proposal

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