Ariya FF: D techies Diary part14 page 56 18/03 - Page 9

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Posted: 11 years ago
he ran 4m restaurent after seeing arjun!!! lolπŸ˜†

email -propose!!! hmm...


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Posted: 11 years ago
great update dear...πŸ‘
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow!!!awesome update purva!!!


arjun-roshni marriage from shree's point of view..and shree's heart beats seeing sharmishtha πŸ˜‰


Aakhir use pyaaar ho hi gaya!!!


dinner date pe propose start hone se pehle hi samjhe ya samjhaun aa gya πŸ˜ƒand den shree proposing her thru gadget!!


thappad toh padna hi tha πŸ˜›


roshni ne dekh lia!!!wonder kya bolegi!!!


update soonEdited by priya00147 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Arjun-Roshni marriage ceremony is very cute πŸ˜‰
Shree is so scared of Arjun that he returns the shoes without taking money..!!!kya yaar shree πŸ˜†

OMG Shree proposed Sharmistha through E-mail...!!!yeh sunke main hasun 🀣 ya shock mode pe chali jayun 😲 samajh nehi aa raha hai πŸ˜† only Shree can do this in this whole world I guess πŸ˜‰

Purva now truly hats off to you dear πŸ‘πŸΌ how you are managing to write this from Shree's POV thats too keeping suspence in between I am totaly loving this πŸ˜ƒ
thanks for this beautiful update & thanks for the pm 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Dear TPurva,

Very, very nice going.

Apart from the TV visuals that one can conjure up for the Arjun-Roshni wedding, - and Shree's ruining the joote churana  - what delighted me was the bumbling way in which Shree handles his courtship of Sharmistha, and how he searches, confusedly, for the meaning of the unaccustomed feelings he is experiencing.

 "Whenever rathore sir, gives a case, I always pray, in some corner my heart, that my duty should b with her. My heart parties if she is there with me for a case" is  so sweetly and so truly expressed, and :"I held her hand, n then said d Not-so magical words:"Haila Arjun sir". Sharmishtha was shocked . She luked backward n I ran from d place, before arjun sir would have seen me. I was hiding from him behind  a pillar" is side-splitting..

Now of course you will have to move on to a case, and I am looking forward to that. Keep it up! I am sure you won't forget that you cannot write anything that Shree could not have seen or heard  or been told.

Shyamala Aunty

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Chapter 4:


Edited by sashashyam - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: shrutisweety

kya baat hai tani
roshni and arjun marriage was wounderful
it was awsome update
continue soon


Thanks for liking d part shruti dear 

Stay tuned to know how she died n ria's entry

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: vidya.anand

Arjun-Roshni shaadi from Shree's point of view was cute...


funny cute romance for Shree...his proposal was unique...emailing a love proposal...only he can do it...WOW...sweet!
nice one...update soon!


thanks for liking d chapter ,...

Glad u like d different way of proposal
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Posted: 11 years ago


Thanks for liking d part Radhika dear 

Stay tuned to know how she died n ria's entry
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: aroojarain

nice update...:) continue soon...:)



Thanks for liking d part dear 

Stay tuned to know how she died n ria's entry
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: prava55663

loved shree and sharmistha...shree proposed with the help of gadget...that was cool...


nice update...waiting for ria's entry..



Thanks for liking d part Prava 

Stay tuned to know how she died 

Ria's entry in next part ..pakka πŸ˜Š