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"Relationship to new level...MARRIAGE..." KR FF (Page 6)

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Posted: 03 December 2012 at 7:06am | IP Logged
Originally posted by SHAKTI_PATEL

Originally posted by kreya_pearl

tum chota chota kyu dete ho???Angry

but it was very niceThumbs Up

amit ko nikal diyaShocked

awesome...

update soonBig smile
thanks for the pm dear:))))))))

The reason for giveing short update is i have alreay written it till part 10 .
so i cant change the further past as it will affect the next part .
thats the reason

by the way thanks for ur comments

ohh its k...i understandBig smile

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Posted: 03 December 2012 at 7:56am | IP Logged
Nyc update

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Posted: 03 December 2012 at 8:33am | IP Logged
thx 4 pm
all parts r awesum

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Posted: 03 December 2012 at 8:52am | IP Logged
Awsome update ..!
Loved it ..!
Thanks 4 d pm ..!

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Posted: 03 December 2012 at 10:16am | IP Logged
Awesome ff... continue soon...

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Posted: 03 December 2012 at 12:05pm | IP Logged
Wow. . .
Awsome part. . .
Rey being so jeolous. . .
Ha ha ha superb. . .
And swaron part was so cutttee. . . .
Swaron's and kriyaansh's students r gona perform 2gethr. . .
Yuppiee. . . .
And rey kriya ko dekh ker gaya kaam se. .
And precap was sweet.
Update soon.
And thanx 4 d pm.

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Posted: 05 December 2012 at 8:18am | IP Logged
__EPISODE 5__

Recap
R-Tum us amit ke saath kitna has has ke baat kar rahi thi.mujh se to kabhi nahi karti.
K-(laughs) To aap jelous ho??Big smile

After kriya arrives they starts talking to each other.

K-Rey aap kab aye.
R-Kyu mene kha tha ki aaj se me bhi yeha ka dance teacher hu. bhul    gayi?
K-Mujhe laga aap masak kar rahe the.
R-Me aur masak !!!! me khabhi masak nahi karta 
K-UhhhAngry
R-Ab jaldi karo sab student aa hi  rahe honge.
K-Acha to mein change karke ati hu.
R-OK.

She goes in change room and forgets to lock the door .when rey was finding a CD .he comes to know that kriya has left door open he thinks
lets have some fun and goes back to his place.

R-Kriya tumhe pata hai tumne apna change room ka door open hi rakha  tha.
K-Kya??
R-Ha.
K-Apne sab kuch dekh liya.
R-ha sab kuch.
K(in sad tone)-Rey aap sach bol rahe ho?
R-ha kriya

Kriya turns on other side.
Rey hugs her from back.

R-Kriya i was joking .  mene kuch nahi dekha.
K-Sach ?
R-Kya tume apne rey ko trust nahi karti.
K-Haan karti hu na.

she turns and they was about to hug suddenly all student comes .

1 st.-Kriya didi, aaj kon sa dance style ?
R-Didi !!!!!
K to R-Ap mujhe didi kyu keh rahe ho?
K to st.-Salsa.
All st.-Hum change karke ate hai.
K-OK

Kriya chooses partners for all then tells to pay attention as she dance

1 st.- Didi aap rey sir ke saath dance karogi ?
K-Haan (shyly)

They start dancing and kriya's leg slips and was about to fall but Rey 
holds her very tightly so she didn't fall. she straigtens and again
starts practising and now they were so close that even air cannot pass
between them .
Music gets over then also they keeps stareing eachother and dancing.
One student comes and tells that time was up and all student left for 
their houses.

K-Rey chalo hum bhi chalte hai.
R-Kaha??
K-Office .kam nahi hai kya?
R-Ha chalo.

They both goes to office.but to their surprise there was no1 in 
office .Then rey remembers thst today is holiday for the workers and
he tells this to kriya.Kriya gets angry.Angry

K-Rey tumhare iss bimari ka kuch karna padega.
R-Mere pas ek way out hai.
K-Kya?

He slowly shows his lips and kriya's cheek becomes red and she starts
blushing.Blushing


__Precap__
Sworon scene
Full episode dedicated for  swaron and all other pair.

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Posted: 05 December 2012 at 8:31am | IP Logged
awesum update
thx 4 pm

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