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"Relationship to new level...MARRIAGE..." KR FF (Page 59)

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Posted: 29 December 2012 at 11:22pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by princessSonia

do pm me dear
i read ur whole ff its jzzz 
FAB
AMAZING
AWESUM

do cont soon
n do pm me wenever u update...

ok i will  surely pm you dont worryBig smileBig smile

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Posted: 29 December 2012 at 11:25pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by angel_luvkreya

its k...
we will wait..
bt dont 4get to pm me...

dont worry i will not forget to pm youSmileSmile

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Posted: 29 December 2012 at 11:31pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by d3_rox

Finally read all the updates...
It was sooo cute n amazing...
Romance n all was soo cute...
N then gang not letting kriyaansh meet...
So amazing...
Now the demand is also completed...
Plzzz update..
Thanx 4 the PM!!!:):)

-Tehmina!!
 
thanks for reading and liking itBig smileBig smile
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Posted: 29 December 2012 at 11:38pm | IP Logged
 __EPISODE 14__

_Recap_
All girls take kriya to her room.

Now kriya was sitting on bed and seeing the 
which was very nicely decorated with her fav. 
flowers. Because rey has still not came she was 
talking to herself.

K-Yeh rey bhi na, pehle hi din mujhe akele 
    chod diya.

On other hand all boys was not allowing rey to 
go to his room and teasing him.

R-Jane do yaar .tum log kya kar rahe ho.
V-Kuch nahi yaar , thoda intezar to banta hai.
R-Kya banta hai ?
N-INTEZAR matlab wait.
R-Ohh wait . Lekin mujhse nahi ho raha hai.
B-Kya ??
R-Wait Angry
Sw-Huh vo to sab ko karna padta hai. kyu guys?
All-Haa.
Sw-Chalo yaar dost samaj kar jane dete hai. kyu?
All-ok. Jao rey bhabhi wait kar rahi hogi.
R-Kon ?
Sw-He means kriya.
R-OhhhBig smile

Rey goes to his room and opens the door and sees 
kriya sitting there. He goes near bed and sits on 
bed near kriya's leg . kriya takes her leg away.

R-Sorry vo sab mujhe ane nahi de rahe the.
K-No its ok

There was some silence an then kriya gives rey 
the glass of milk and the pan.

R-Yeh kya hai?
K-Yeh almond milk hai or yeh pan.
R-Ok.

Rey haves both and then was about to move 
towards kriya but there was a knock on door.he
was really angry but goes to open the door. All
d3 boys were standing there and pulls rey out 
of room and talks to him in slow voice.
(In slow voice)

Sw-Rey kuch hua?
R-Kya?
Sw-Tumne kuch kia?
R-I was about to... lekin tum log ne sab bigad
    diya.
Sw-Ok sorry . Ab tum jao.

Rey again goes inside and sits on the bed.

K-kya hua?
R-Kuch nahi .vo bas ...

And keeps his hand on kriya's hand and moves 
front and takes off kriya's earring and necklace and
makes her sleep. he took of his shirt and threw
 her saree to the ground And laid upon her
She was still being nervous and moving every-
now and then He kissed her nape and caressed 
her bare back as her blouse was backless.

He moved his hands around  her waist and
stomach and turned her to face him she 
lowerd here eyes and wrapped her hands 
around his neck

He kissed on her forehead he kept nibbling 
around her eyes.. He moved down to her cheeks
planting kisses all over her face

He moved down to her neck and started getting
 more pleasure as he took in her fragrance and
 her taste in his lips..

Her hands were entangled in his hair he took 
off her blouse getting exposed to her curves  
which made her  tightly shut her eyes and dug
 her fingers on his shoulders he touched dem..
 caressed them kissed them making her leave
  moans his name evry now n then

He caressed her curves and started sucking
 them.. it gave her pain but the pleasure 
which both had was above all the pain He 
nuzzled more wid her curves Now he couldnot
 take anymore he want her and nothing else.
 But he thought if kriya was ready or not. He
looked at her. Kriya understood wat he wanted
to ask so she closed her eyes giving him green 
signal after so much of waiting finally made 
his way into her wid several thrusts nd her
 cries because of pain Wid few thrusts wich 
gave her pain he made kriya relax by 
continuously kissing her.. finaly they became 
one. "Kriyaansh" always from now

At almost 2:30 both rey and kriya were sleeping .
kriya had her head on rey's bare chest and was 
sleeping and both was waken up by a call in reys 
phone.

R-Ohh sorry, pata nahi kon hoga?
K-Its ok.

He picks up the phone.

R-Hello, kon bol raha hai?
All boys-Kuch kiya ?
R-Tum log mad ho ? itni raat ko koi phone 
     karta hai.
All-Sorry lekin hame janna tha.
R-Yeh koi jan ne ki baat hai?
K-Kon hai rey ?
R-Koi nahi tum so jao.
K-Thik hai.
R-Gud night.
K-Gud night.
R-ab ap log bhi phone rakho.
All-thik hai . gud night.
R-Gud night.

NOTE- I DONT ANYTHING MORE ABOUT 
SUHAGRAAT SO I WROTE WAT I KNEW . 
SORRY IF I DISAPPOINTED ANYONE. THIS
TIME DEMAND TILL 75 PAGE .THIS WOULD 
BE  VERY SMALL FOR RIYA, KUSHA, SHUKTI 
AND MADHUKUMARI...

__Precap__
First day of kriya in rey's house and somemore 
romance.

guys somepeople here just read and comment and
doesn't like the post. Instead of increasing likes
it is decreasing .1st part had 24 likes and part 13
had just 14 likes so plzzz dont just read or comment
also like it and vice a versa

sorry if i was too rude...really sorry

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Posted: 29 December 2012 at 11:56pm | IP Logged
updte was superb...Thumbs Up

romanceEmbarrassedBlushingmast tha...

yeh boys Angry aisa koi poochta yeh kya that kya kia???ROFL

n 2:00 phone karke poochingROFL

loved itWink


Edited by kreya_pearl - 29 December 2012 at 11:55pm

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Posted: 30 December 2012 at 12:04am | IP Logged
awesome...
boys part was funny...
loved it...
thnx  for pm...

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Posted: 30 December 2012 at 12:13am | IP Logged
awsum update...kr romance was superb...boyz part was funny...thanx for d pm

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Posted: 30 December 2012 at 12:39am | IP Logged
amazing update

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