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"Relationship to new level...MARRIAGE..." KR FF (Page 114)

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Posted: 06 January 2013 at 10:37am | IP Logged
Amazing update..
Loved sharon n kriya's teasing session!!
Plzzz update soon..
N thanx 4 the Pm!!:):)


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Posted: 08 January 2013 at 12:48am | IP Logged
demad kab ki cpmlete ho gayi hai yr
ab update kar bhi

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Posted: 08 January 2013 at 8:51am | IP Logged
__EPISODE 18__

Sh-Rahne do kriya. vase bhi mein aaj raat yahi 
rehne vali hu.
K-Oh thats great.

Sharon gets away  from kriya and call all the girls .
First she calls neha.
S-Hiii neha.
N-Hii sharon. tum kasi ho?
S-Mein acchi hu aur tum.?
N-Mein bhi thik hu aur batao kyu call kiya?
S-Tum ruko mein sari gals ko confrence pe leti hu.

Sharon gets all girls on confrence and then they all 

S-Toh meine yeh batane ke liye call kiya tha ki aaj
   kriya apne ghar ayi hai 2-3 dino ke liye toh meine
   yeh decide kiya hai ke aaj raat hum sab girls apni
   girls nightout party karenge kriya ke ghar par. toh
   kasa laga mera plan?
All-very nic .
N-Mein sare decorations dekhungi.
R-Mein food
S-Mein music.
All-Aur hum sab dance plan karenge jo hamari fav.
     thing hai aur kriya ki bhi.

All gals gather at kriya's house sharp at 8.00 .All were
looking stunning in their outfits.

S-I hope tum logo ne hamare plan ke bare mein 
   apne pati devo ko nahi bataya?
All-Offourse not.
S-Ok so lets start the fun.

All girls gather in the sitting room and started 
playing games and chitchatting about ramdom stufs.
Then all girls startes dancing on ramdom music.
Kriya had kept her phone in her room and was siting
far away from her room so she could not hear her 
cellphone ringing. offcourse it was rey. he was missing
her badly but kriya was busy in enjoying the party
and talking to her frends .

Onother side rey was tensed because kriya was not 
picking his call. he then tried to message her but she
even did not reply his messages. By some reason kriya 
goes to her room and sees that there were 12 missed
call of rey she was now tensed she knew that rey will
be angry on her. Then she checked the messages but in
all msgs it was just written "PICK MY CALL HONEY"
She had a smile on her face . as soon as she was about
to call rey sharon comes to call her and said that "it
is not allowed to keep cellphone in our girls nightout"
so kriya had to keep her cell back in drawer and goes 
out with sharon.

After that she could not concentrate on any of the 
game or any of the talk. she just kept on thinking
about rey and his condition when she is not answering 
his call . All the girls understood her condition and 
decided to tease her.

N-Aaj toh puri raat yahi bathenge.

Kriya had her mouth wide open on hearing this. All
girls giggeled at her reaction.and decided to contiue 
their play.

S-Ha neha tum thik keh rahi ho.
K-nahi nahi
S-Kyu kriya tumhe hamare saath time spend karna 
   accha nahi lag raha hai?(Makes baby face)
K-Nahi sharon asi baat nahi hai.
K-Vohh vohh Mujhe neend aa rahi hai is liye.
N-Accha toh kriya tum jao apne room mein aur hum
     apne ghar chalte hai. ok?
K-Accha lekin mein tum sab ko door tak drop kar 
     deti hu.
K-Lekin bhulna mat kal subha sharp 8:00 at my 
    house. hum sab picnic ja rahe hai.

Kriya drops everyone to the door and goes to her room
and was shocked to see 50 new msgs and 30 new
missed calls.
She hurrriedly called rey to ask what the matter was.
but she was very scared thinking was he very much 
angry on her.

She called rey.
R-Kriya tum ase kyu baat kar rahi ho.
K-Nahi kucch nahi.
R-Tum mera phone kyu nahi utha rahi thi?
K-Voh voh voh mein.
R-Pehle toh tum daarna bhandh karo.
K-Voh voh mein...
R-Kriya mene kaha daarna bandh karo.
R-Haa toh aab bolo mera phone kyu nahi pick kar 
    rahi thi
K-Voh mein sharon aur sab ke saath sitting room 
    mein thi aur phone bedroom mein that. so mein 
     aap ke phone attend nahi kar saki
R-Toh iss mein daarne ki baat kya hai??
K-Voh mujhe laga ki aap naraz hoge kyuki mene 
    aap ke phone answer nahi kiye .
R-Kya linecutter kabhi apni baatcutter se naraz ho 
     sakta hai??

Kriya started blushing to the core.

R-Aab blush karna bandh bhi karo baatcutter.
K-Rey aap ko kase pata ki mein blush kar rahi hu??
R-Mein tumhe tumse bhi zyada janta hu.

Kriya was happy on listening this

Someone disturbing kriya and rey between their 
phone conversation.

This time demand page 135Smile

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Posted: 08 January 2013 at 8:51am | IP Logged


awesome update

Edited by anjalijayan - 08 January 2013 at 8:53am
kritzzz_ArSha IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 08 January 2013 at 9:01am | IP Logged
nice update sooon
dancersqueen IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 08 January 2013 at 9:13am | IP Logged
awesome update...precap sounds interesting...
glmorous_diva IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 08 January 2013 at 9:13am | IP Logged
loved it...

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