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CGM SS: Because...The Cocoanut Heart was Undefined (Page 6)

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Posted: 16 November 2012 at 8:34am | IP Logged
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PART-2        First-Middle Chapter

Dreams:Lead To What- DIRECTED BONDING or BROKEN AFFECTION??
 
...But acharya was unique- he is, he was & he will be.Despite living with him more than 30 years, I couldn't properly recognise him! When I was ready to change my decision of death due to starvation just for that tear-drop appeared in my acharya's eye...he himself stopped me! with a pleasant yearning in his eyes, he murmured,'Pain: the winner'...then firmly stated-'if you finalise your decision, leave all the fascination. Go ahead. Please go ahead. Don't look at the past.'
Just past!! You're my past, present & future- I'm made of you acharya- you're my entire world. I find my GOD in you...
 
But these words couldn't reach my lips; they're roaming about my heart.Ohh...my emotional heart, don't cry such loudly. Though none can hear the sound...it'll make me brust into tears.Control yourself my wounded heart- very soon you'll find the real peace.
Real peace?? Huh...what is called real peace??...the tormenting language of Nandini's eyes...
 
''It's neither the feeling to achieve you fully...
...nor the unhappy sense to lose you...
I know you're not with me,
but...I can't help blowing with this undescribable sentiment...
 
You begin my day,
You end it half-willingly, half-reluctantly!
With your touch- every second of my life comes alive...
Because you're...unique.
 
When I get lost in your eyes,
I feel the heaven in your arms-
...I anchor the shore of my dreamland...
...I turn to a NIL ENTITY...
I've nothing to stop my heart...''
 
-That magnetic eyes- the untold words of the eyes," it's neither the feeling to achieve you..." fascinated me once upon a time. But what was the result??...everything was ACTING...A VERY GOOD ACTING...After Durdhara's demise when I was broken, daughter of Dhanand...her comfortable care...& the mind-blowing eyesight...used to sooth me even for a moment. Fate, that night...I was ready to tie the knot of husband-wife's relation with Nandini,...her actual purpose was revealed.
 
...She was determined to take a powerful revenge for her father's death...she was the chief spy of Amatya Rakhas!!...the wedding night...turned too heart-wretching...
That very moment I removed her transparent veil ...,a sharp knife hurt me with all its strength within a fraction of second...Just then a man appeared before me...my almost unconscious brain  was astonised!!...the man...the man...
 
...Let those painful episodes get closed.Isn't there any person who never hurt me??- Acharya?
 
No, I'm so so unfortunate. Acharya was so much protective about me...but his rigid care & hidden  affection caused a great loss...sighing...
 
"You're my first friend
I'm the shore of your heart, you even are unaware of it!
You're my path-finder
You're the best shelter...
God portrays you because...
In his absence on earth
You fulfil his duties with so much care & affection."
 
-The quotes were really the reflection of my thought about Acharya. But...one day his few words made me speechless-"I'm responsible for the COMPANIONLESS MOON."
...Who was the companionless moon??
He narrated whole story...I felt as if someone snatched the ground under my feet...


hmm compassionless moon?
something fishy?Ouch

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Posted: 16 November 2012 at 8:35am | IP Logged
update chapter 3 soon and do pm me.Wink

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Posted: 16 November 2012 at 11:04am | IP Logged
@lucykaede: page 4 me hay A LITTLE GLIMPSE ON NEXT CHAPTER
...Kuch guess karo naWink 
...COMPANIONLESS MOON- hmm...thora sa suspense to hayEmbarrassed 
 
@chand1234: I'm Rumpu.


Edited by surprising - 16 November 2012 at 11:22am
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Posted: 17 November 2012 at 2:54am | IP Logged
hmm...finally i read ur ff...its really unique n awsm...i cud imagine Ashish ji n ur story...ur style of writing is also different...good going... :) waiting for next...

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Posted: 17 November 2012 at 2:58am | IP Logged
i am very confused,who is nandini?
and about moon,is it acharya?Shocked

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Posted: 17 November 2012 at 3:47am | IP Logged
Wonderful Glimpses !

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Posted: 17 November 2012 at 6:35am | IP Logged
lol na re ur ff is interesting so m eager to read the full ud

lucy nandini in some version is dhana's daughter

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Posted: 17 November 2012 at 10:02am | IP Logged
Friends, maine boli thi ye short story hay- to jaada chac. ki jarurat nehi paregaWink
But...I'm including some more very familiar chac.Tongue
 
CHITRA
MIHIKA
SHASHANK
BINDUSAAR
DURDHARA & CORNELIA bhi hay par CGM ke bhavnayon me Embarrassed
 
next upd is gonna to be a long one- I think
tumlog padhne ka to time payoge na???
us upd me kuch convers hay
wo english ya hindi : kisme padhna pasand karoge????


Edited by surprising - 17 November 2012 at 7:54pm

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