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Thanks a lot friendsSmile ...Could u recognise the beginning lines?? It's really  very familiar to all MouryansSmileTongue

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Posted: 08 November 2012 at 12:09pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by machinegun

very unique concept dear.first chapter was heart touching and mindblowing.
NIVI, please guess the original quotesWink

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Posted: 09 November 2012 at 4:58am | IP Logged
Originally posted by surprising

Thanks a lot friendsSmile ...Could u recognise the beginning lines?? It's really  very familiar to all MouryansSmileTongue


i recoginised themStarStar.it is the english version of song jai ho of cgmSmileSmile

here is the hindi versionSmileSmile
shaktishaali avinaashi,
haare na jo haan main he to hoon woh,
man se patthar,tan se khanjar
hoga ab ghayal mujhse ladega jooo,
jitna haraao utna vijayii hoon,
main pralay hoon yuddh kare to koi,
bhim hoon main arjun bhi hoon,
akhada ho ya ranbhoomi ho,
jai ho,jai ho
jai ho,jai ho
jai ho,
jai ho,jai ho,
jai ho,jai ho,


i guess i am rightSmile

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Posted: 09 November 2012 at 8:57am | IP Logged
hey i recog those lines! those are jai ho lyrics. i loved the background score. it was simply awsome.Day Dreaming
chp1 really well written. Thumbs Upi liked the concept. its fun having and reading so many new ffs on the forum.
do continue soon dear. m waiting...Smile

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Posted: 09 November 2012 at 8:10pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by sapphirose176

hey i recog those lines! those are jai ho lyrics. i loved the background score. it was simply awsome.Day Dreaming
chp1 really well written. Thumbs Upi liked the concept. its fun having and reading so many new ffs on the forum.
do continue soon dear. m waiting...Smile
thanxxx a ton dearSmile I'll try to ud soonEmbarrassed

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Posted: 09 November 2012 at 8:14pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by machinegun

Originally posted by surprising

Thanks a lot friendsSmile ...Could u recognise the beginning lines?? It's really  very familiar to all MouryansSmileTongue


i recoginised themStarStar.it is the english version of song jai ho of cgmSmileSmile

here is the hindi versionSmileSmile
shaktishaali avinaashi,
haare na jo haan main he to hoon woh,
man se patthar,tan se khanjar
hoga ab ghayal mujhse ladega jooo,
jitna haraao utna vijayii hoon,
main pralay hoon yuddh kare to koi,
bhim hoon main arjun bhi hoon,
akhada ho ya ranbhoomi ho,
jai ho,jai ho
jai ho,jai ho
jai ho,
jai ho,jai ho,
jai ho,jai ho,


i guess i am rightSmile

u r absolutely right my friendThumbs Up...actually i'd a dream to update the english version of jai ho song in my own english though poorUnhappy

Edited by surprising - 09 November 2012 at 8:15pm

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Posted: 09 November 2012 at 9:47pm | IP Logged
1st of all Welcome to CGM family surprisingHug 
Actually the Name of Ur SS is Very Different and sounds cuteEmbarrassed 
Hey U translated Jai Ho!! song naBig smile
I really liked ur SSClap...Concept is very uniqueThumbs Up and Very Well describedClap 
CGM's description about his Acharya was soo GuddTongue...
Continue soon dear
Do PM  me when u update



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PART-2        First-Middle Chapter

 
Dreams:Lead To What- DIRECTED BONDING or BROKEN AFFECTION??
 
...But acharya was unique- he is, he was & he will be.Despite living with him more than 30 years, I couldn't properly recognise him! When I was ready to change my decision of death due to starvation just for that tear-drop appeared in my acharya's eye...he himself stopped me! with a pleasant yearning in his eyes, he murmured,'Pain: the winner'...then firmly stated-'if you finalise your decision, leave all the fascination. Go ahead. Please go ahead. Don't look at the past.'
Just past!! You're my past, present & future- I'm made of you acharya- you're my entire world. I find my GOD in you...
 
But these words couldn't reach my lips; they're roaming about my heart.Ohh...my emotional heart, don't cry such loudly. Though none can hear the sound...it'll make me brust into tears.Control yourself my wounded heart- very soon you'll find the real peace.
Real peace?? Huh...what is called real peace??...the tormenting language of Nandini's eyes...
 
''It's neither the feeling to achieve you fully...
...nor the unhappy sense to lose you...
I know you're not with me,
but...I can't help blowing with this undescribable sentiment...
 
You begin my day,
You end it half-willingly, half-reluctantly!
With your touch- every second of my life comes alive...
Because you're...unique.
 
When I get lost in your eyes,
I feel the heaven in your arms-
...I anchor the shore of my dreamland...
...I turn to a NIL ENTITY...
I've nothing to stop my heart...''
 
-That magnetic eyes- the untold words of the eyes," it's neither the feeling to achieve you..." fascinated me once upon a time. But what was the result??...everything was ACTING...A VERY GOOD ACTING...After Durdhara's demise when I was broken, daughter of Dhanand...her comfortable care...& the mind-blowing eyesight...used to sooth me even for a moment. Fate, that night...I was ready to tie the knot of husband-wife's relation with Nandini,...her actual purpose was revealed.
 
...She was determined to take a powerful revenge for her father's death...she was the chief spy of Amatya Rakhas!!...the wedding night...turned too heart-wretching...
That very moment I removed her transparent veil ...,a sharp knife hurt me with all its strength within a fraction of second...Just then a man appeared before me...my almost unconscious brain  was astonised!!...the man...the man...
 
...Let those painful episodes get closed.Isn't there any person who never hurt me??- Acharya?
 
No, I'm so so unfortunate. Acharya was so much protective about me...but his rigid care & hidden  affection caused a great loss...sighing...
 
"You're my first friend
I'm the shore of your heart, you even are unaware of it!
You're my path-finder
You're the best shelter...
God portrays you because...
In his absence on earth
You fulfil his duties with so much care & affection."
 
-The quotes were really the reflection of my thought about Acharya. But...one day his few words made me speechless-"I'm responsible for the COMPANIONLESS MOON."
...Who was the companionless moon??
He narrated whole story...I felt as if someone snatched the ground under my feet...


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