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SS: Of Lemons & Limes #2 (Chapter 7-12) (Page 9)

SarunArshilover Goldie
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Posted: 07 November 2012 at 10:43am | IP Logged
nice one yar
Omoraboti IF-Sizzlerz
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Posted: 07 November 2012 at 10:44am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Ruki.F

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TOO GOOD KHUSHI ClapClapClap and shame on u ASR .. being a boy he cloudnt do that  ..shame one u and WONDERFUL khushi .. ClapClapClap   really cant stop laughing in ASR states ROFL 

Amazing update darling ..was missing it badly .. plz post the next one soon and congratulation for new thread  dear ClapClap
 
LOL .. yeah .. ASR being a man & not admitting he does not know how to do it! Wink KKG rocks!
 
Thanks dear .. will post the next one in the mid of next week, inshAllah. Smile
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Posted: 07 November 2012 at 10:45am | IP Logged
omg!!!! i LOVE this update
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Posted: 07 November 2012 at 10:50am | IP Logged
i loved this update!can't wait for the next one!Smile
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Posted: 07 November 2012 at 10:52am | IP Logged
nice again...
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Posted: 07 November 2012 at 10:55am | IP Logged
Congratulations on Thread - 2..

Well, what should i say..
As usual, perfectly written.. n Lovely part.. Smile

even here, Arnav don't know how to fix tire..!!!! so typical ASR..
n Khushi being Khushi.. always ready to help..

poor Khushi, din't knew that her simple activity of fixing a tire was creating a havoc on someone's mind n body..!!!  Wink LOL Embarrassed

i was all d while grinning..
like Devi Maiyya was doing from heaven, watching her perfect plan going well... Wink LOL

i request u DM, please create more Rabba Ve situations 4 these two idiots.. Embarrassed 

they r sooo ignorant about d fact that both r equally affected by each other...

Thanks 4 d PM.. Smile


Edited by BitsArShian - 07 November 2012 at 10:56am
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Posted: 07 November 2012 at 10:57am | IP Logged

fantastic, love it

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Posted: 07 November 2012 at 10:57am | IP Logged
Originally posted by tash10

It's just pure luck that I fell on this LOL
 
Congrats on the new thread Hug
 
Will get back to this soon Embarrassed
 
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I had to read it now, else I will never read it LOL
 
OMG Khushi is a total sanka devi!! She actually thought Arnav was going to kill her?ShockedROFLROFL I could imagine her reactions!!ROFL
 
I loved the use of this expression 'jalebi gifted calorie' Heart
 
And the accidental kiss on the palm!!Blushing Me likey!! Very much in fact!!Blushing
 
I love how you stay true to the concept of the lemony smell and here Arnav was really close to that!!Embarrassed
 
The whole tyre changing part made me travel down the memory lane to the epi where this happened!! Thank you for this Hug
 
Arnav's staring session was so cute Embarrassed He is falling for her more and more!!Big smile
 
Loving the pace of the SS! It gives such a realistic feel, letting both Arnav and Khushi actually realising their feelings. It's still a start for love to bloom, but Devi Maiyya is here na Wink
 
PS: My mood is also ruined by the rumours floating around!!Ermm But your update was fab Hug I just realised that my comment got a bit long ROFLROFL
 
Your comments always lift up my mood!! Hug
 
And it is really great to know what you felt about my udpate .. coming from you, it means a lot! Smile
 
I am really happy that this update made you feel good! I am just trying to get you guys walk down the memory lane .. recreating the original moments .. Smile those were the days ... *sigh*
 
The smell is the core concept of the story ..and I will keep it flowing. This smell is what will conclude the story.
 
Thank you so much reading! Hug

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