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SS: Of Lemons & Limes #2 (Chapter 7-12) (Page 9)

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Posted: 07 November 2012 at 10:45am | IP Logged
omg!!!! i LOVE this update

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Posted: 07 November 2012 at 10:50am | IP Logged
i loved this update!can't wait for the next one!Smile
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Posted: 07 November 2012 at 10:55am | IP Logged
Congratulations on Thread - 2..

Well, what should i say..
As usual, perfectly written.. n Lovely part.. Smile

even here, Arnav don't know how to fix tire..!!!! so typical ASR..
n Khushi being Khushi.. always ready to help..

poor Khushi, din't knew that her simple activity of fixing a tire was creating a havoc on someone's mind n body..!!!  Wink LOL Embarrassed

i was all d while grinning..
like Devi Maiyya was doing from heaven, watching her perfect plan going well... Wink LOL

i request u DM, please create more Rabba Ve situations 4 these two idiots.. Embarrassed 

they r sooo ignorant about d fact that both r equally affected by each other...

Thanks 4 d PM.. Smile


Edited by BitsArShian - 07 November 2012 at 10:56am
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Posted: 07 November 2012 at 10:57am | IP Logged

fantastic, love it

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Posted: 07 November 2012 at 10:57am | IP Logged
Originally posted by tash10

It's just pure luck that I fell on this LOL
 
Congrats on the new thread Hug
 
Will get back to this soon Embarrassed
 
-edited-
 
I had to read it now, else I will never read it LOL
 
OMG Khushi is a total sanka devi!! She actually thought Arnav was going to kill her?ShockedROFLROFL I could imagine her reactions!!ROFL
 
I loved the use of this expression 'jalebi gifted calorie' Heart
 
And the accidental kiss on the palm!!Blushing Me likey!! Very much in fact!!Blushing
 
I love how you stay true to the concept of the lemony smell and here Arnav was really close to that!!Embarrassed
 
The whole tyre changing part made me travel down the memory lane to the epi where this happened!! Thank you for this Hug
 
Arnav's staring session was so cute Embarrassed He is falling for her more and more!!Big smile
 
Loving the pace of the SS! It gives such a realistic feel, letting both Arnav and Khushi actually realising their feelings. It's still a start for love to bloom, but Devi Maiyya is here na Wink
 
PS: My mood is also ruined by the rumours floating around!!Ermm But your update was fab Hug I just realised that my comment got a bit long ROFLROFL
 
Your comments always lift up my mood!! Hug
 
And it is really great to know what you felt about my udpate .. coming from you, it means a lot! Smile
 
I am really happy that this update made you feel good! I am just trying to get you guys walk down the memory lane .. recreating the original moments .. Smile those were the days ... *sigh*
 
The smell is the core concept of the story ..and I will keep it flowing. This smell is what will conclude the story.
 
Thank you so much reading! Hug
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Posted: 07 November 2012 at 11:04am | IP Logged
Congrats on new thread diParty
Farah di..Awesome one againHugby reading the update...all i can say is missing the old IPK...Disapprove
Only Khushi can hav such wierd thts of Arnav killing her lol...LOL
Awww...Arnav standing and watching khushi...I can totally imagine that scene in my mind...Day Dreaming
So aag dono taraf barabar lagi hai...All thanks to devi maiyaan...LOL
And the day is nt over yet..WowWinkWat Surprise do u and devi maiyaan have for us????Wink
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Posted: 07 November 2012 at 11:18am | IP Logged
nice update.  wonder what else is in store for them today.
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Posted: 07 November 2012 at 11:20am | IP Logged
Great update..
The first stirrings of desire in Arnav..I didn't know changing a tyre could be so seductive..

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