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SS: Of Lemons & Limes #2 (Chapter 7-12) (Page 160)

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Posted: 23 June 2013 at 8:07am | IP Logged
I've started reading this SS... Lovely!! Will comment properly on the last thread.

Just wanted to tell you I slapped my forehead with both hands when the phone decided to ring inspite of DM deciding to look away at their private moment... The kiss-miss again!!
And yes, ouch. My forehead hurts.

That's how much I'm loving this.

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Posted: 24 October 2013 at 10:43pm | IP Logged
nice going very interesting to read

loved your work

keep rocking

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Posted: 28 January 2014 at 12:31pm | IP Logged
This is a really a very cute story! . Most of all I am in love with Devi Maiyya in this story!  Tongue

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Posted: 31 March 2014 at 11:19am | IP Logged
hey, 
I read the first and second chapters and they are really so good
awsome writing I like it 
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Posted: 19 May 2014 at 11:44am | IP Logged

O man u r Amazing!! ur story is Amazing, ur style of writing is Amazing. ur writing gives me sensations i cannot describe, i jus love u for it. muaah Clap Tongue. keep up the work.

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Posted: 23 May 2014 at 11:56am | IP Logged
Big smileFinally, I reached on the second thread ...Very refreshing and light-hearted storyline...very captivating concept and spectacular story you've written.Star.I think it's a treat to read your storiesClap..I am thoroughly enjoying..
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Posted: 23 May 2014 at 12:19pm | IP Logged
Part 7...arshi breakfast scene and khushi reaction over tea.. and in this part khushi's misunderstanding that arnav will kill her and her tire fixing scene..after reading above all these scenes reminds me the IPKKND...I can easily visualise.. you write it exceptionally well..but the situation and story is different...I can say that I am reading IPKKND in anew perspective...he was mesmerized by her beauty and flabbergasted that khushi easily fixed the tire that too efficiently... fabulous chapter..
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Posted: 23 May 2014 at 8:04pm | IP Logged
EmbarrassedHeyee, I can't forget the scene where he unintentionally caresses her cheek... And his slightest touch makes her shiver... That's called chemistry... The super romantic moment that was...

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