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Posted: 02 February 2013 at 9:09pm | IP Logged
update please..!!SmileStar

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Posted: 02 February 2013 at 11:42pm | IP Logged
Hie! Um new here...Smile
startd to read ur story 4m 2day itslf nd so far til chap 11 i found it amazing... Star
great wrk..loved it...plz pm me whn u update nxt Big smile
tkcre..
xxx Smile

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Posted: 02 February 2013 at 11:43pm | IP Logged
R u bengali???

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Posted: 03 February 2013 at 1:34am | IP Logged
Originally posted by shonagudia


OMG i am more excited for the next part after reading this one.. Wink
Khusi in Red saree and Arnav in black suit. I can't wait for the magic to be re-created.
I loved the easy routine they have fallen in to. Khusi ran coz she's late but doesn't know Arnav would have wait for her unless she came . More than Khusi , Arnav is affected i can say. Every , time thinking of her and looking for his lemon, In fact thinking to install a small lift for them so the distance will be less. Arnav had lost it .. really.. LOL And poor Akash thinking he will lunch a new venture LOL
How the hell Payal think Arnav will be bald , middle aged Man Angry Please make her MU resolve asap.
Continue soon,,

 
I am grinning every time I am thinking of how to resolve Payal's MU about Khushi's "bald-headed" boss! LOL
 
Thanks for stalking my thread!!! Hug It really flatters me! Embarrassed

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Posted: 03 February 2013 at 1:38am | IP Logged
Originally posted by arshi-pooja

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omggg...wat a beautiful update...just perfect...Wink
arnavji and his khushi are so cute...
Blushing m so happy wid the precap...cant wait..plzz update soon dis time...
i wud be havin sleepless nights...Wink

my stalkin skill rocks...m second yaay..
 
You girls really flatter me big time .. Blushing .. I hope your nights were full of awesome dreams! Wink
 
Thank you sooo much Pooja for keeping me inspired. Smile

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Posted: 03 February 2013 at 1:39am | IP Logged
Originally posted by SamiyaIPKKND

NAHI!

I am third :(

Amazing amazing update babes

I love their passion and attraction

Ha ha even Akash felt something was definitely wrong with Arnav... So he'll tell Anjali.. Lets see what she does :)

Me super duper excited about the precap

 
lol .. I just wrote the BG music as the precap. Wink
 
I am very excited to bring Akash, Payal & Anjali in the story .. but I dont know if these two will let them do much! D'oh

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Posted: 03 February 2013 at 1:41am | IP Logged
Wen r u updatin dear...stalkin everyday

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Posted: 03 February 2013 at 1:51am | IP Logged
Originally posted by bs_deeps


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ok...that :( was bcoz I read the update late...You have posted it when I was super bzy...
and it continued..as I read the update from phone in hurry and I was all confused and the essence didnt hit me at all..I finally read the update couple of days back and this time I didnt fail...lovely update once again dear...

I am not able to give a lengthy reply this time...but I cant wait as I dont want these three days to be wasted..so here I am..chleepy..chleepy reply...

Some lines that cracked me up..
" I cannot disappoint Arnav ji"  --> You will never disappoint him, Khushi..or should I say he
will never be disappointed with whatever you do
 
" You are not going to get it."     --> How  will she? Only crazy ppl can understand you..so except your Arnav Ji, no one else can / will understand you..

He must be some bald-headed middle aged arrogant jerk...LOL..Big smile

Loved this entire para..I can see Arnav's eyes moving around...
 

A smile appeared at the corner of Arnav's mouth without his knowledge as his eyes fell on her. He could smell "his" lemon even from so much distance .. her green chudidaar only intensified the air. Her braided hair over her left bosom .. the colorful, sequined jhola covering the leftmost corner of her hip .. He could see her matching bangles and nagra as he drove the car closer to her. Was she panting? He could see her heaving chest and her right hand over the middle of her bosom. Arnav swallowed down the fluttering feelings inside him before she got into the car.

 
keeping her away from the male population and anything that can lead to anything even close to dangerous...hahaha...hahaha...close to dangerous..what was that?


My fav line...I am sure yours too...

Scars take time. Pain goes away but scars can be stubborn.

I am still waiting for him to vent out his biggest frustration..this line and jadu hain nasha hai tells me something bigger is awaiting...


 
 
Ok! I am a baddie .. I kind of blackmailed you into writing the comment when you were so chleepy. Unhappy But this much I can do .. cant I? Embarrassed
 
Yeah .. the fav line .. you know it is mine as well as yours. Smile We have talked about it, havent we? Wink
 
His biggest frustration .. hmm .. dont know when & how the man is going to do something about it. Tongue Readers hate to see an irrational Arnav .. but that is the part that needs to be shown first to the fullest before the story goes on to the next stage. So ... lets see. Smile
 
When I describe a scene or their feelings .. I try to write as I visualilze. If you could his eyes there .. I feel lucky! Smile

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