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Arshi SS- I Bet,I Love You...Thread II (Page 78)

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Posted: 16 November 2012 at 3:17am | IP Logged
Originally posted by harinderparmar

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sorry for being late...Embarrassed

morning star..i absolutely love your writing style <3

the way you show things from diff persons perspectives, it almost gives me a virtual tour of the whole situationClap

and i believe, this story is gonna be another milestone of your writing history Party

about the story, i believe akash always had a strong reason for doing something like this to khushi, and instances like message reading for dare are confirming my doubts.

i think our real friends always know whats good for us, and here akash has taken things into his hands to kill two birds at a time, rather three-
1. making arshi realise they are meant for each other
2. help them come over their past
3 save khushi from the heartbreak about her parents, because by the time she will realise, she will have arnav's love to rely upon as strength


but what i missed was khushi's fiesty behaviour. she knows about bet, and she should have done something big, to make arnav a fool in front of himself...but i believe your talent and the way you are shaping up story.ClapClapClap



Awww...Thank You..<3

And a BIG Thank You for actually pointing out some points for my future updates...WinkWink
I tend to forget my own twists and turns.

and whatever you are missing is definitely coming Up!

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Posted: 16 November 2012 at 3:20am | IP Logged
Originally posted by blablabla_mo7

I just found your index out of random (thanks to tempted by arshioholic) Finished reading the Lucknow story, it was superb! Super cute and sweet (sorry talking abt this in a wrong thread I guess, I didn't comment there)

Then I moved to this, this was even better!! Perfect mixture of humor and drama. You write really well. Keep going.
An update everyday? Seriously I have no complains in fact totally loving it.

Can't wait for tmrw!


That is very sweet of You...<3
Its okay..Its the wrong thread but the right person...Wink

And Thank You for liking this story.I hope I surpass your expectations...<3<3



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Posted: 16 November 2012 at 3:23am | IP Logged
its really a stupid bet hope so thimgs go smoth next
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Posted: 16 November 2012 at 3:26am | IP Logged
Stupid bet...both r faling for each other bt not ready to accept it...btw nice part..luvd it
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Posted: 16 November 2012 at 3:32am | IP Logged
Hahaha, akashs part was hilarious.
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Posted: 16 November 2012 at 3:33am | IP Logged
soon there is gonna be hell lott of confusions...says my gutt feeling (regarding the track)...
good work...nice...
update soon
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Posted: 16 November 2012 at 3:37am | IP Logged
Lovely !!! both the idiots does not know that they both are falling for each other... but the bet part is there and both of them wants to win... lets see how far will they go on like this... thanks for pm... Smile
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Posted: 16 November 2012 at 3:39am | IP Logged
ROFL Both are thinking that the other is falling for them! 
God this couldn't get any better!
Loved it! :)
Waiting for the next update! 

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