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...SankaDevi...

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Posted: 06 November 2012 at 8:38pm | IP Logged
It had been six months to their marriage. Asad and Zoya's marriage. But nothing had changed. Not one single bit. To the outside world they made it seem they were the couple made for each other, but really they weren't.                                            ''Asad breakfast is ready,'' yelled Zoya.                    ''Great another day of burnt toast and salt less omelette,'' thought Asad. Nor she knew how to cook or clean the house, she was just a modern girl w/ modern ways. Ammi was away for vacation along w/ Najma to her sick brother's house, to take care of him. So Asad didn't when Ammi would come back and take care of the house again.          ''Allah miyan, wat is taking him so long? thought Zoya. Meanwhile she was thinking, as Asad thought about the burnt toast and saltless omelette, she repeated the same mistake.                             ''Allah miyan, Asad you take forever to get ready!''   ''Why don't I say this, Allah miyan, why does my wife Zoya burn the bread and makes saltless omelette everyday?!?!''                                           ''Ugh!''yelled Zoya.                                                                        THE END!!                                           I know it was really bad!! It's my first OS, but please comment and Hit like button!!!! Thanks:)                    

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zainab03

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Posted: 06 November 2012 at 8:44pm | IP Logged
Its very cute   Thumbs Up

zoya-ammy

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Posted: 06 November 2012 at 9:51pm | IP Logged
It was gud try dear
 cute one 

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Posted: 06 November 2012 at 10:48pm | IP Logged
i really liked it

cutiepreet

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Posted: 07 November 2012 at 12:36am | IP Logged
Lol... Allah miyan.. It was cute 

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Posted: 07 November 2012 at 12:43am | IP Logged
nice...

write long stuff 

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Posted: 07 November 2012 at 12:53am | IP Logged
Aww that was so cute :)
Right more please :*

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Posted: 07 November 2012 at 3:39am | IP Logged
nice one!

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