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Ariya SS: Tere pyaar mein.. Fanaa..(Epilogue)16/11 - Page 6

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Posted: 11 years ago
Avantika what a heart wrenching update, I loved every word every line from the start to the end. Loved the emotions displayed by both Riya and Arjun, and little Arya.

Good thing I read your comment about being in tears while penning this, I had a tissue handy before I started reading it, and yes I felt their pain as if I was watching the scenes play out in front of my eyes. Fantastic update. Loved it.

Thanks for the PM. Looking forward to the next part.

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Posted: 11 years ago
Nooo!!!!!!!!!!! You cannot stop there I want to read more...uni can wait..please please update soon!!!!!!!
Thank you so much for the pm and the super fast update
Loved it so so much. The Arjun-Ariya first meeting was sooo beautifully written. I loved how he hugged her and wanted her to know that he was her papa. And Ariya was too cute. Calling her papa buddu in their first meeting😆 She is such a doll ❤️
The was Riya hugged her daughter and kissed her and loved her, thinking of leaving her the next day was so touching and it was so sad😭 Poor Riya😭
Loved the cute little papa-beti moments❤️ Arjun feeding her, Ariya showing him the pictures..sooo cute!!!!!!!
Phew the Arjun-Riya confrontation was sooo intense I think I nearly stopped breathing. Just fell so so sad for Riya. She hurt him on purpose and hurt herself too😭 And Arnav teaching her what it feels to be used OMG that was like..I really cannot find any words to express how I felt. 
Please dear don't leave us in misery..please update soon. Dying to know what will happen next!!!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
That wS awsuummm
The confrontation was awsum
Father daughter talk so cute...loved it
Update soon :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
brilliant anvantika di
i just loved loved it.the way u described their inner turmoil was just awespme

u wrote about snow n i hate snow n its just a matter of one month and it would start snowing in valley .
it seems to me that i wl screw my results coz i am just reading eriya ffs lol
waiting eagerly for next part
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey Avantika di,
Words of Appraisal are very small if i start describing d chapter...

it was dat gud...

1 movie which i thot was best to describe a father-daughter relation was "Father of the bride"
After dat movie, it is dis OS which i read in which d emotions of Father n daughter were so beautifully portrayed ... Gr8 work by u👏

Loved every word dat u used to describe : Arjun n Ariya's Bond...😊

Now coming to Ria , i actually felt very bad for her ...Sacrificing ur happiness for ur loved ones ...is a very difficult thing ...



So in all ; The Chapter was just fantastic..very emotional n very beautifully written
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Posted: 11 years ago
It was so intense... Best emotional part I've ever read...
No words to appreciate u...
Just wow!
M so sad... Or, u can say me too in turmoil fter finishing this part...
Waiting eagerly for the next part,
please update soon Avni di...
Thanks for the pm.. N take care!
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Posted: 11 years ago
😭 omg y riya iz dng dis to him 😭

ariya n arjun awsome bond..

awsomee dear loved it soo much waitng for nxt prt huggieee
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Posted: 11 years ago
omg...speechless...ARjun and Riya...and ariya...


my mind is really crying now...awesome...
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Posted: 11 years ago
very nice update
want to know what happens next.
if you dont mind me asking when are you going to
update tujko jo paaya and adhoori si dua??
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Posted: 11 years ago
Very emotional... Superb dear...