Ariya SS: Tere pyaar mein.. Fanaa..(Epilogue)16/11 - Page 5

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Posted: 11 years ago
I'm so sorry for replying so late ...
Omg I just read both the chapters and I just love it ...
I just love your story ...
It was just fantastic ...
Awww love ariya ... Omg she told Arjun buddhu ... Lol
The roses part was so cute ...
My poor baby riya ...she is going through sooo much ...
Finally Arjun realized that riya loves him a lot and she didn't mean anything whatever she told ...
I really can't wait to read the next chapter ...
As usual you did a fab job ...

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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey !!! πŸ˜Š 
First of all thanx for the PM πŸ˜Š 

Emmm,πŸ€” Wow!!!!!!! what an update..  it was an emotional one. I read your post before ur update which said that you were actually teary by the end of this update!!! πŸ˜­ Well, mera bhi kuch esa hi haal tha... Even i was teary by end of the whole updateπŸ˜­πŸ˜’.

Ariya , daugther of Arjun and Riya , i loved the scene between both Father and daughter , all the emotions and feeling were very well potraied.. 
"Aap Ariya ke Papa hain, Buddhu!" πŸ€£πŸ˜† hehehe.. perfect answer from Ariya πŸ˜† Loved it..!!!

Truely , i loved each and every part of this chapter , father-daugher conversation and affection, Arjun confronting Riya, hurting himself by hurting her, and offcourse even after whatever she said he believes her and is guilty for hurting her...πŸ˜’ loved it utterly... 

Gosh !!! i can't wait for the next update , can't wait until the mystery solve's "Arjun Riya aimed guns at one another  " Please!!! update soon... 

Waiting, and offcorse keep it up!!!πŸ‘πŸΌ

Love ,
πŸ˜›Deep!!!πŸ˜›

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Posted: 11 years ago
its awsome dear
wounder ful update
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
I have no words to describe it!
It was truely awesome!
You made me cry again! :(
Eagerly waiting for the next part.
Thnx for the pm :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
I cant find a single word to describe this..dont want to say much, just want to feel the emotion by heart..update soon please
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome...brilliant part indeed...
Arjun, the papa...the loving husband...WOW...so cute and sweet! loved Ariya!!
was expecting that u will complete it today...well i will wait eagerly now...cont soon!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Its just OSM!!!

U have beautifully penned down every bit of emotions.

Though he was angry, but his love for her over powered & all he wants is to take her in his arms & drown in her love, their Love.

Love Father-Daughter Duo, specially the Buddhu wala!!!

Needless to say how much I love reading this, & at the end of each update U never failed to bring a smile on my face, thnx for that.

So the starting scene of the FF, where Arjun is at gun point, Is whether Arjun asking Riya to prove that she doesn't love him??

thnx for the PM & waitng for the next part.



PS: I have edited my previous RES post in page #1
Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update dear loved it :)
Thanks for the PM
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update! I can't wait to read more! Thank you for the update and PM!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow!!! Superb!!! Loved it!!!
Amazing update!!!
Can't wait 4 the next part!!!
Continue soon & thanks 4 the pm!!