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Posted: 02 December 2012 at 2:09am | IP Logged
UPDATE SOON.. PLEASE.. DIEING TO READ THE NEXT PART..!!! Cry

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Waiting!! waiting!!! waiting!!!!update!! update!!update!!!
PLSSS update soon ...ab bachi sorry itne sari bachiyo ki jaan logi kya????Cry

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CHAPTER 7

Viren and Jeevika were in the car

VI- Jeevika thank you

J- kis liye viren ji

VI- meri zindagi mein aane ke liye

Jeevika smiled

VI- and meri birthday ko aur special banane ke liye

Jeevika smiled

VI- I love you

J- I love you too

They had an eyelock for a mini second

VI- ab mujhe apni aankhon se mera concentration mat hatao or else hum ghar ek piece mein nahi pohonch payein ge

Jeevika blushed...

After a while,
Virika saw someone near a car. Viren stopped his car

VI- itni raat ko koi yahan kyun aaye ga??

J- shayad unki gari kharaab ho gayi hogi

VI- yeah maybe, I'll go ask

He got out of the car and went over to the guy, followed by Jeevika

VI- erm...excuse me, do u need any help??

GUY- well actually my car has broke down

Jeevika recognized his voice but could not see his face properly as it was dark

J- ek minute. Maine aapki awaaz kahin sunni hai

GUY- haan maine bhi aapki awaaz kahin sunni hai, lekin kahan??

VI- one sec

He turned the light on from his phone, Jeevika was stunned to see the person

J- tum!?

GUY- tum!?

Viren was confused and got a bit scared

VI- oh no Jeevika! Don't tell me ke tumhara iss ke saath koi past hai! Please please please!

J- Viren ji yeh aap kya bol rahe ho!?

The guy started laughing

J- yeh Taani ka bhai hai!

Viren was surprised

VI- Taani ka bhai!?

He turned to the guy

VI- erm...I'm sorry I didn't know ke...

GUY- its ok, aur waise bhi aap mujhko kaise jaante, we didn't even introduce ourselves

He put his hand forward

GUY- hi, I'm Swayam Shikhaawat

VI- Viren, Viren Vadhera. Hi

They shook hands

SW- btw Jeevika is like my sister, aur koi apni behen ke saath...u know its awkward

Jeevika started laughing and Viren smiled guilty

J- waise tum yahan kaise??

SW- woh actually I came to meet Taani. I heard ke woh Chandigarh mein hai aur u know ke main uss yahan akele nahi chor sakta, its dangerous for a girl

VI- hmm possessive bhai!

He teased

J- acha phir chalo

SW- kahan??

J- arre abhi toh keh rahe the ke Taani se milne aaye ho toh chalo. Humare ghar

SW- woh tum logon ke ghar mein hai??

J- haan

SW- ok but meri gari...

VI- don't worry woh teek karwa de ge...

In Vadhera House...
...

Sharon, Maanvi and Taani were sitting on the couch chatting. Virat was standing near the staircase on his phone. Rey walked up to him

R- acha yaar chalta hoon

V- abhi?? At least bhai bhabhi ka toh wait karo

R- nahi phir kabhi, I'm getting late

V- for what??

R- for rehearsal. Mujhe next week ke show ke liye rehearse bhi karna hai

V- well so do I

R- Virat samjha kar na please

Virat sighed

V- chal teri marzi

Sharon walked up to Rey leaving Maanvi and Taani chatting

SH- kya hua??

R- chalo

SH- kahan??

R- ghar. Aur kahan

SH- what?? Lekin abhi toh main aayi hoon. Tum jao na I'll come later

R- no Sharon, abhi chalo mere saath. Mere ko practice bhi karni hai next week ke show ke liye

SH- but I just made new friends atleast mujhe unke saath thora time toh spend karne do

R- kal aa jana. Woh kahin bhaag nahi jaye ge. Now lets go

SH- bhai tum samaj nahi rahe

R- Sharon come on

SH- but Rey...

R- Sharon go! Now!

Sharon got frustrated and stomped out of the house. Virat started laughing

V- ab jaa usse manna

R- bye. He said plainly. He was about to go

V- Rey

Rey turned around

V- whats wrong?? Tu itna chup kyun hai??

Rey looked away

R- kuch nahi. Just a bit tired. Chalta hoon. Bye

V- bye

Virat knew that Rey was upset about something but thought of asking tomorrow...

After Rey and Sharon left, Taani walked up to Virat

T- erm...Virat...Rey kahan gaye??

V- apne ghar

T- apne ghar?? But I thought ke woh yahan aap ke saath rehte hain

Virat smirked
V- nahi. He has his own house. But he comes here everyday

T- oh...ok

Maanvi joined them

M- Virat! Di aur jeeju kab aayein ge?? Itni raat ho gayi hai

V- don't worry aa jaye ge

Just then the door bell rang. Maanvi went to open it

M- Di! Jeeju!

She hugged both

VI- woah! Agar mujhe pata hota ke meri saali mujhe itna miss kar rahi thi toh main thori jaldi aa jata
He smiled and winked at Maanvi. She smiled back. Then Maanvi saw someone else behind virika and was surprised

M- tum!?

She quickly turned to Taani and called her from behind

M- Taani! Dekho kaun aaya hai!

Taani came running and saw her brother in front of her

T- bhai! She hugged him

Virat went over to viren and whispered

V- bhai. Yeh kaun hai??

VI- yeh Taani ka bhai hai

V- what?? Taani ka bhai?? Wow! Waise aur kitni entries hongi humare ghar mein??

He said as a joke. Viren nudged him

VI- ab go and introduce yourself!

V- o yeah!

He went over to Swayam

V- hi! I'm...

SW- Virat Vadhera. Former supermodel along with older brother Viren Vadhera. Currently lead singer of band V&R. Hi

Everyone was surprised except Taani

V- erm..wow! Tumhe toh mere baare mein sab kuch pata hai

SW- jiske paas Taani jaisi behen ho usse tumhare baare mein jaane mein kya mushkil ho sakti hai

Everyone started laughing and Taani blushed

SW- I'm Swayam

They shook hands

Swayam walked to Jeevika

SW- waise Jeevika I heard ke tumhare sasural mein bohot saare log rehte hain lekin yahan toh bas tum log..

J- well actually, dadaji, swamini bua and maa dadaji ki behen ko milne gaye hain Delhi, she's ill. Aur chachu, chachi and shlok chachi ke maternal home gaye hain so for now its just us.

SW- oh ok

VI- Swayam I think u should rest now. Bohot thak gaye hoge right??

SW- well yeah

VI- virat jaa Swayam ko uske room mein le ja

T- Viren jeeju! Main bhai ko le jati hoon!
She said enthusiastically. Viren smirked and agreed

Taani dragged Swayam upstairs

T- chalo bhai!

SW- arre Taani!...

An hour later, the rest of them went to their respective rooms...

Maanvi was alone in her room as Taani was busy talking to Swayam in his room..
Maanvi was reading a book, there was a knock on the door

M- arre Virat! Come in

V- hi. Maanvi tumne mera guitar dekha hai yahan??

M- tumhara guitar?? Yahan kaise hoga??

V- well actually before u guyz came, main yahan practice karta tha but now ofcourse the room is your's and Taani's

M- well sorry tumhara guitar yahan nahi hai

V- hmm ok I'll look in my room again. Thanks!

He left to his room...

Later on...
Maanvi was looking for her slippers

M- Maine apni chappal kahan rakh Di??

She looked under the bed and found them. Maanvi was about to get her slippers out when she felt something hard. She got it out. It was a guitar

M- yeh guitar?? Maybe this is the guitar that Virat was looking for! I should give it to him. Kya pata woh paaglon ki tarha isse dhoond raha ho

Maanvi went near Virat's room, the door was slightly open. Maanvi could see Virat shouting on the phone. She got a bit scared

V (on the phone)- listen! I told u not to call me! Don't u bloody understand! Agar phir se phone karne ki koshish ki toh mujhse bura koi nahi hoga! Now get lost!

He threw the phone on the bed. Maanvi was scared

M- should I go or not?? Guitar toh dena parey ga

She took a deep breath and went in his room

M- erm...v...virat..

Virat looked behind at her

M- erm...tumhara guitar...

She quickly put it on his bed and turned around to leave

V- Maanvi. Tum yahan kyun aayi??

Maanvi slowly turned around

M- virat...m..maine kaha na...tumhara guitar...dene

V- o really?? Guitar dene ya meri baatein sunne

M- kya?? Kya matlab

V- don't try to play innocent Maanvi! I know ke tum sirf meri baatein sunne ke liye aayi thi! Aur achaanak se mera guitar tumhe mil gaya??

M- Virat main sach mein. Tumhe guitar dene aayi thi! Mujhe bed ke neeche mila

V- o save it Maanvi! Bahaane mat banao!

Maanvi knew that Virat was pissed off over the conversation he had on the phone but he was crossing the limit!

M- dekho just because tum uss conversation ki waja se gussa ho uska matlab yeh nahi ke tum mujhpe chilao

Virat raised his eyebrows

V- woah! Pehle guitar ka bahana bana ke meri baatein sunti ho and ulta mujhpe ilzaam laga thi ho!? Wow! U know ur so cheap!

M- stop it Virat! Stop it! I can't believe maine tum jaise insaan ko apna dost banaya

Virat scoffed

V- dost? U know main tumhe sirf Jeevika bhabhi ki waja se bardaash kar raha hoon. Ur just a simple girl. U mean nothing to me! Got it!

This hurt Maanvi. She didn't know why it killed her so much. She couldn't control her automatic tears and ran from his room. Virat punched the wall...

Precap: Virat asks Taani to deliver some CDs to Rey's house. Taani ends up in Rey's bedroom and sees Rey shirtless with shorts as he came out of the shower...
Virat and Maanvi share some aggressive and hot moments while Virat tries to apologize but Maanvi's ignoring him...

(pm will be sent later)

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Posted: 03 December 2012 at 4:10pm | IP Logged
Sof finally u update Big smile as always it was beautifully written. Swayam entry nice, but Im confused about Rey hmm. Vriman fight again, this virat again hurt our maanvi hope she dont forgive him too easily this time. Recap is hott can't wait for u to update im too excited.

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Posted: 03 December 2012 at 5:23pm | IP Logged
Wow just read all the updates and loved it.so many twists
And different love stories awesome updates do pm me me for
Future parts

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Posted: 04 December 2012 at 4:04am | IP Logged
WOw awesum update!!!!kash thoda lamba hotaCry but luved it jaldi next part upload karo plsss...and swayam s entry masttt thi...and pls pm me the update... 

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loved it...plz update next soon...

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