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Posted: 12 November 2012 at 5:28am | IP Logged
awesome update pls update soon the next part... i think virika both will have karva chauth...

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Posted: 12 November 2012 at 7:12am | IP Logged

Precap :

Viren says that he'll keep fasting for jeevika..

PART 3 :

 < Its 2:00am in the morning… vien wake up and saw jeevika 

sleeping.. he was just lost in her beauty.. he slowly kissed her f

orehead. He tells in his mind. Jeevika tumhe tumhare viren ka aaj 

sacha pyar milega. He said this and goes away from there.. he went 

to kitchen,, and saw Maa and chichi there.. >

Chachi : hayeni viren tum yahan.. tum v jeevika ke liye vrat rakhe ho…??

Viren : ji chachi wo jeevika mujhse gussa hai isiliye maine socha ki main 

v uske liye vrat rakhun…

Maa: par viren jeevika ye kav nhi chahegi ki tum use manane k liye uske 

liye vrat rakho..

Viren : mujhe pata hai badi maa.. plzzz mujhe rakhne dijiye.. aur maa ye 

baat plzzz badi maa ko mat batayega..

Maa : thik hai viren..

< everyone goes from there… viren start making food for jeevika by 

seeing the recipe from a book… and he is finaallyyy done.. he goes 

to the rooms and put the food on the center table.. and goes to bed 

and pretend to sleep.. jeevika woke up and sees the food on the 

table. And she gets to know that viren has only cooked the food for 

her.. she was very hapie. She goes near the table and smiles  and 

says to her self.. >

Jeevika :  < to her self > mujhe pati v bada ajib mila hai kav hasta hai 

toh kav rulata hai.. par hai bada acha,, jo mijhse itna pyaar karta hai..

< jeevika goes to washroom to get fresh up.. she comes out and sit 

on the couch and start eating up.. she has not eaten anything from 

yesterday afternoon so she was very hungry.. so she eats up all the 

food.. viren was seeing her lovingly inside the bed…. And was 

smiling.. >

Jeevika : < to her self > manna padega viren ji khana bada acha banate 

hai.. and she get to sleep..

< viren was very hapie after listening his tareef.. he gets up and 

goes near the couch and he was surprise to see that their was no 

food.. he smiles and say " koi gal nhi " >


< viren was busy in decorating the house for karvachauth…. He 

then starts feeling like fainting bt then he control his self.. at the 

jeevika arrived near the dinning table and start serving dadaji 

chachu and virat with food.. >

Dadji : jeevika bete jao viren ko khane k liye bula le aao..

Jeevika : ji dadaji..

Jeevika : viren ji chaliye khanna lag gaya hai..

Viren : umm nhi maine kha liya.

Jeevika : kha liya par kab..

Viren : wo ek ghante pehle.. maine tarun se khanna banwa liya tha,, mujhe bahut bhuk lagi thi isiliye..

< jeevika goes to kitchen and ask tarun that viren has eaten food or 

not.. tarun says no.. jeevika get tensed nad started thinking ki y 

viren ji told lie to her..  chachi was listening everything >

Chachi : wo isisliye kyunki viren ne tumhare liye vrat rakha hai.. hayeni jeevika ye toh DDLJ wala scene ho gaya..

Jeevika : par kyun ?

Chichi : isiliye ki tum use naraz ho..

Chichi : acha jeevika main chalti hun warna mujhe bhuk lag jayegi..

< jeevika smiles >….

< jeevika went to room an dgoes near viren and hugged him 

tightly... viren shocked :o >

Viren : jeevika kya hua..

Jeevika : aap mujhse itna pyaar kyun karte ho ?

Viren : hain ?

Jeevika : aapne mere liye vrat rakha hai na..

Viren : wo main..

Jeevika : I LOVE YOU VIREN JI…aap duniyaa ke sabse best pati ho..


< virika hugged each other. >

Jeevika : I am sorry viren ji.. maine aapko galat samjha. Plzz mujhe maaf kar dijiye.

Viren : nhi kar sakta..

Jeevika : kaha na sorry.

Viren : iski tumhe sazaa milegi..

Jeevika : main tayaar hun..

Viren : soch lo < gives a nughty look >

Jeevika : < gets his intension.. > ummm .. viren ji raat hone ko hia mujhe taiyaar hona hai < and tries to run away >

< viren hold her dupatta.. and stops her from running away.. he then pulled her towards him. And lifts her up.. jeevika was totally red and she was blushing and blushing.. >

Jeevika : viren ji chodiye na..

Viren : kapde hi change karne hai na toh yahi kar lete hai.. isme kya problem hai..

< jeevika gain blushed >..

Viren : tumne jo aapne pyare s pati k upar itna bada iljam lagay ahai usi saza tumhe milehi.

Jeevika : aur wo sazaa kya hai..

< Viren put his finger on his lips.. jeevika blushed >

Jeevika : dhekho viren ji agar aap nhi uthe toh main jor se chillaungi..

Viren : chilao… mujhe tumhara muh ache se band karna aata hai .

< viren caresses jeevika cheek. He removed the hair from her sholuder and started kissing her shoulder. Jeevika was enjoying that.. he then kissed her her forehead.. and then touched her lips with his finger.. >

Jeevika : vi viren ji…

Viren : sshshhh…

< viren put his upper lips into jeevika lower lips and starded kissing 

her… jeevika was enjoying it.. virika then broked their kiss..

< Suddenly their was knock on the door.. it was vanishka maa >

Maa : jeevika beta..

< jeevika pushed viren and ran to open the door.. >

Maa : jeevika puja ka time ho gaya hai tum jaldi se taiyaar ho kar neeche aa jao..

Jeevika : ji maa

< jeevika then goes to bathroom and unfortunately she forget the towel.. >

Jeevika : viren ji main apna towel bhul gayi hun plzz de do..

< viren do not reply her.. >

Will continue it after diwli..  

till then u gys enjoy and think y viren is not answering.. is he fainted…


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Posted: 12 November 2012 at 7:20am | IP Logged
wooow have never comed across this its,reallly goood, plz pm me

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Posted: 12 November 2012 at 7:24am | IP Logged
awesome update...
continue soon
Happy Diwali...

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Posted: 12 November 2012 at 8:14am | IP Logged
A very Very Happy diwali to you also, and thanks for the wonderful diwali gift it was great... waiting to see your update after diwali and thanks for the update it was a Diwali Gift for me... Continue soon... 
"Pal Pal se banta hai Ehasas,
ehsas se banta hai Vishvas,
vishvas se bante hai Rishte,
aur rishte se banta hai koi Khas,
Wishing you a Diwali Jhakas"

"Dhamako Ki Starting, Patakho Ki Bauchar,
Suraj Ki Kirane, Apno Ka Pyaar,
Mubaark Ho Aapko Dipawali Ka Tyuhaar,
Jiwan Main Ho Khushiya Apar."

Wish You A Very Very Very Very Happy Diwali To You... Have A Blast Diwali! 

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Posted: 12 November 2012 at 8:41am | IP Logged
eekkksss <3
thanx alot guyss for ur feedbacks.. it makes up my day.. and it encourage me 2 wr8 more. will be back wid th eupdate after diwali.
love u all.

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Posted: 12 November 2012 at 9:44am | IP Logged
continuee soon!!!y u always end ur update at the wrong place :P
and do pm me




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Posted: 12 November 2012 at 2:54pm | IP Logged
Really Nice!!..
Please pm me wen u update..

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