I finally Found You < Virika OS part 13 > - Page 2

I loved your concept, Jeevika just listening half things.

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PRECAP :

Jeevika says she wants to go home'.

PART 2 :

Viren and jeevika reached home. Jeevika runed to her rome 

and locked the door.. she throwed the bags on the bed and 

sat on the bad and starts crying bitterly' viren too run t

owards the door and knock the door'

Viren : jeevika plzzz open the door.. plzz jeevika darwaza kholo.. Virman 

too come there and started pleasing jeevika to open the door.

Maanvi : < tears in her eyes >. Di plzz darwaza kholo na.. plzzz di 

darwaza kholo..

Viren : jeevika yr plzz darwaza toh kholo.

Jeevika : maanu plzzz viren ji se kah ki wo yaha se chale jaaye..

Maanvi : di aapko meri kasam plzz darwaza kholo..

< jeevika opens the door.. and then again goes towards bed and sgain started crying. >

Viren : jeevika tum itna kyun ro rhi ho.. kisi ne tumse kuch kaha. Batao na jeevika.. tum kuch bol kyun nhi rahi.. kuch toh bolo na yr. meri jaan jaa rahi hai..

Jeevika : aapki jaan jaa rahi hai. Viren ji aap kitna jhooth bologe.. sach toh yahi hai ki aap mujhse pyaar hi nhi karte.

Viren : ye kya bevakufo ki tarah baat kar rhi ho..

Jeevika : acha agar ye jhooth hai,, toh phir wo kya tha jo aapne restaurant mein virat se kaha..

Viren : maine virat se kya kaha tha

Jeevika : jab virat ne aapse puch ki aapne kajal jaisi hawt larki ka prosal kyun reject kiya toh aapne kaha ki tab aap nhi jante the ki wo aage chal kar itni hawt hogi. Nhi toh apko kisi pagal kutte ne nhi katta tha jo aap kajal se shaddi karne k liye manna karte.

< jeevika says dis and ran from their and don't listen to viren >

Next day::

< viren gets a bouquet for jeevika and placed on the table.. an dgoes from their. Jeevika saw that booke and gave a big smile. She thought to her self.. viren ji mujhse kitna pyaar karte hai. Lagta unhe apni galti ka ehsaas ho gaya hai.                     she calls up maanvi. >

Jeevika : mannu viren ji mere liye booke laye hai.

Maanvi : awww di jiju apse kitn apyaar karte hai. Ab toh gussa chod do.

< just then jeevika heard viren talking to his friend about kajal.>

Viren : yr pata hai kal main kajal se mila. Yr wo kitni hawt lag rahi thi.. pata hi tujhse she has totally changed. Chal thk hai main tujhse baad mein baat karta hun..

< jeevika was seeing viren wid angry face >

Jeevika : use kya farak parta hai mannu,, dilo aur dimag par toh sirf wo hi larki chahi hui. Main aise pati k liye karvachauth nhi rakhungi.

< jeevika goes away from there.. >

Viren : koi gal nhi jeevika.. tumhe vrat nhi rakhna hai toh koi baat nhi par main tumhare liye vrat jarur rakhunga..

[ sorry guys have to go.. but will continue soon ]'

U all keep on guessing will jeevika keep fasting for viren or not'

Edited by Medha11 - 11 years ago

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