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SS:Saans(The last breath) Chap9 Pg50 29th JAN (Page 8)

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Posted: 07 November 2012 at 3:40am | IP Logged
Originally posted by vidya.anand

Interesting...super duper story...
well u really are an expert in building up suspense...loved the style and the poetry!!!

the whole plot sounds poetic!!!
my guesswork points that Arjun is the major but he being called hitler sounds really funny...lol
Rohan and Abhi are very cute!!! loved them!
 
Thank you dear..Embarrassed glad you liked it
 

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Posted: 07 November 2012 at 3:42am | IP Logged
Originally posted by KiSha13

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shru you are brilliant as a poet dear,I seriously mean it Clap Clap
the update created so much suspence,wondering who the major is..didnot leave a single clue even writer madam Wink LOL
name of the cadets are cool, Rohan & Abhi the hottis of SOTY Embarrassed LOL
whos diary was that??
OMG so many questions are roaming around my head Shocked
so update soon(I know you will as you promised to finish it before 12th Tongue )
love you Shru HugHug
 
Yaar please change the line 'Brilliant poet'Tongue jyada tareefe bhi achi nhi hoti rightWink
Clue will be revealed in the upcoming chap LOL
 
Yaa I couldnt think of any other names so used their namesWink
 
Diary kiska hai ye toh I cant tell youTongue
 
Updating now...!!! Love you too dearHug

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Posted: 07 November 2012 at 3:44am | IP Logged
Originally posted by samiya.059

Firstly i am listening to the song
'har sawal ka jawab nahi mil sakta'
n ur update is full of sawals
>who is the girl to whom diary belongs
>who is the major
>is major arjun
>is major rathore
>where are riya n arjun
>is major young n smart or oldie
>why major wants dat diary
>is it out of curiosity or woh us diary ko pehchanta hai
boht sawal aur ek jawab aapka agla update isliye yeh aise sawal nai hain jin ka jawab nai mil sakta so if u dont want me to write foolish comments den update soon
Sami kitni chalak ho gayi hai apna nikalna ata hai
 
oye ye kya hai???? Sawalon ka dukan?
No wait my question paperLOL
Major is smart and youngTongue
 
Sammy sach mai chalak hogayi haiTongue
 
Thanks for liking it and commenting dearBig smile

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Posted: 07 November 2012 at 3:45am | IP Logged
Originally posted by M.V.Kohli007

Hey Funky really nyc update dear..
 
 
I ws waiting 4 1st chapter , its ossam.
 
Greedy to know abt dairy & Major..
 
 
Plz update soon..
 
 
love ADI  Smilemeri PankhiLOLLOLLOL
 
Thanks manuu...Hug
 
updating now...Smile

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Posted: 07 November 2012 at 3:47am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sweetdoc

Loovve u funnkyyys.
U included ro nd abhi...soty
Varun dhawan <3
Intresssting...updatw soon
 
haha well I'm more of Sid's fan<3 but like Varun coz he can dance betterWink
 
thanks for liking itEmbarrassed
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Posted: 07 November 2012 at 3:48am | IP Logged
Originally posted by kaveriw2008

wow yaar this not a fairy tell the background after this story read i feel like it is a fairy tale...

but dear their is sign of ariya in this yaar...but still i like it...

the way ro and abhi quarrel and major entry at the time of abhi sleep and lost in his dreamgirl... fabulous story yaar...

hey please update soon i want to know more 
 
awww... thanks dear...
 
yes Ariya is going to be there for sureEmbarrassed
 
Actually its not dreamgirl but his Guitar's name is pankhiLOLROFL how unusual I knowTongue
 
Updating...
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Posted: 07 November 2012 at 3:50am | IP Logged
Originally posted by SanchayitaM

Shru.. Kya likkha hai.. Sab kitna complicated hai! Baapre!
Major, soty... Suspense queen ban chuki hai tu!
Kya likhoon main...! Mere paas bohot saare questions hai poochhne k liye! Will wait 4 the next update!
Take care sis!
 
Aww... Shuchi...thank youEmbarrassed
complicatedLOL
not you as well Suspense queenROFL
 
YES Just wait updating now...
thanks sisHug

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Posted: 07 November 2012 at 3:51am | IP Logged
Originally posted by -dia-

Well let me make a guess, Is the /dairy has some(every)thing to do with Major???

U know @ the end of Update, I have too many question & i know all I have to do is wait to get answer for my questions.

I like Ro & Abh character.

Great part!!
 
Well the diary is a mystery I guessTongue
 
Thanks dearEmbarrassed

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