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Posted: 07 November 2012 at 1:42am | IP Logged
Originally posted by purecure

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yipeee...me first one...Dancing

i guess dis will b first tym i'll b responding so srsly...n confusingly to any  story...!!!Smile

i'm srsly confused...wo major kaun hai?? n whr is ariya kab aayenge??..n omg...u wer IF national poet...bt aftr reading dis...u r suspense queen from now on!!!LOL

aftr evry story i hav my own guessess...bt for dis im not able to make any...Unhappy
is it dat major riya's or arjun's ke papa???Ermm

or is dat major arjun itself ...n dat dairy belongs to her wife riya...or soemthing???Ermm
 
i guess major ki age mil jaati to madad ho jaati...guessing mein lolxx... !!!!ROFL

n yea aftr reading dis part ...i dunno wats d further story... bt evn thn wen i read dis...i start humming only one song...
"do pal ka khabo ka karwa aur hum chal diye tum kaha hum kaha..."

awesome update...it was much better than wat i thot n  how i thot...!!!Dancing

plss jaldi update karna...mein wallah intezaar kar rahii hoon...Day Dreaming

n yea hazaar taliyaan tere liye...!!!! Clap
 
OMG... ye kaisa comment tha..? totally unusual...I LOVED ITBig smileLOL
 
Yes you are seriously confused, I hope tere quries would be solved soon... and LET me tell you that MAJOR is definitely not Riya's or Arjun's papa!!!LOL
 
hahaha ageee...lolxxx
 
awww... I love that song.. and movie Veer ZaaraHeart
 
thanks glad you liked itEmbarrassed
 
hazaar taliyaTongue thnk u thanku Tongue
 
 
ROFL IF national poetROFL AND now what? SUSPENSE QUEENShockedROFL
 
you crack me up neelu... loved the comment thank you for your precious commentEmbarrassed

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Posted: 07 November 2012 at 1:46am | IP Logged
Originally posted by funkylicious

Originally posted by purecure

 
aftr evry story i hav my own guessess...bt for dis im not able to make any...Unhappy
is it dat major riya's or arjun's ke papa???Ermm

or is dat major arjun itself ...n dat dairy belongs to her wife riya...or soemthing???Ermm
 
i guess major ki age mil jaati to madad ho jaati...guessing mein lolxx... !!!!ROFL

n yea aftr reading dis part ...i dunno wats d further story... bt evn thn wen i read dis...i start humming only one song...
"do pal ka khabo ka karwa aur hum chal diye tum kaha hum kaha..."

 
OMG... ye kaisa comment tha..? totally unusual...I LOVED ITBig smileLOL
 
Yes you are seriously confused, I hope tere quries would be solved soon... and LET me tell you that MAJOR is definitely not Riya's or Arjun's papa!!!LOL
 
hahaha ageee...lolxxx
 
awww... I love that song.. and movie Veer ZaaraHeart
 
thanks glad you liked itEmbarrassed
 
hazaar taliyaTongue thnk u thanku Tongue
 
 
ROFL IF national poetROFL AND now what? SUSPENSE QUEENShockedROFL
 
you crack me up neelu... loved the comment thank you for your precious commentEmbarrassed
tnx for liking it...
 
bt yea u responded to my "papa's" query...n not to major being arjun itself??
hmmm...!!!Ermm
can dat b some pointer or hint??!!!ErmmWacko
 
no probz...nahii batana mat batao...
 
tehkikat karna to mera kaam hai...Arjun ki Deewani jo hoon...so let it b!!!
 
raaz tu apne aap khol hi degii!!! ikrare jurm kinds!!


Edited by purecure - 07 November 2012 at 1:52am

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Posted: 07 November 2012 at 1:55am | IP Logged
Interesting...super duper story...
well u really are an expert in building up suspense...loved the style and the poetry!!!

the whole plot sounds poetic!!!
my guesswork points that Arjun is the major but he being called hitler sounds really funny...lol
Rohan and Abhi are very cute!!! loved them!

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Posted: 07 November 2012 at 3:39am | IP Logged
Originally posted by purecure

Originally posted by funkylicious

Originally posted by purecure

 
aftr evry story i hav my own guessess...bt for dis im not able to make any...Unhappy
is it dat major riya's or arjun's ke papa???Ermm

or is dat major arjun itself ...n dat dairy belongs to her wife riya...or soemthing???Ermm
 
i guess major ki age mil jaati to madad ho jaati...guessing mein lolxx... !!!!ROFL

n yea aftr reading dis part ...i dunno wats d further story... bt evn thn wen i read dis...i start humming only one song...
"do pal ka khabo ka karwa aur hum chal diye tum kaha hum kaha..."

 
OMG... ye kaisa comment tha..? totally unusual...I LOVED ITBig smileLOL
 
Yes you are seriously confused, I hope tere quries would be solved soon... and LET me tell you that MAJOR is definitely not Riya's or Arjun's papa!!!LOL
 
hahaha ageee...lolxxx
 
awww... I love that song.. and movie Veer ZaaraHeart
 
thanks glad you liked itEmbarrassed
 
hazaar taliyaTongue thnk u thanku Tongue
 
 
ROFL IF national poetROFL AND now what? SUSPENSE QUEENShockedROFL
 
you crack me up neelu... loved the comment thank you for your precious commentEmbarrassed
tnx for liking it...
 
bt yea u responded to my "papa's" query...n not to major being arjun itself??
hmmm...!!!Ermm
can dat b some pointer or hint??!!!ErmmWacko
 
no probz...nahii batana mat batao...
 
tehkikat karna to mera kaam hai...Arjun ki Deewani jo hoon...so let it b!!!
 
raaz tu apne aap khol hi degii!!! ikrare jurm kinds!!
 
hahaha...Tongue yes that could be some pointer dearWink
 
ikrare jurmROFL

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Posted: 07 November 2012 at 3:40am | IP Logged
Originally posted by vidya.anand

Interesting...super duper story...
well u really are an expert in building up suspense...loved the style and the poetry!!!

the whole plot sounds poetic!!!
my guesswork points that Arjun is the major but he being called hitler sounds really funny...lol
Rohan and Abhi are very cute!!! loved them!
 
Thank you dear..Embarrassed glad you liked it
 

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Posted: 07 November 2012 at 3:42am | IP Logged
Originally posted by KiSha13

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shru you are brilliant as a poet dear,I seriously mean it Clap Clap
the update created so much suspence,wondering who the major is..didnot leave a single clue even writer madam Wink LOL
name of the cadets are cool, Rohan & Abhi the hottis of SOTY Embarrassed LOL
whos diary was that??
OMG so many questions are roaming around my head Shocked
so update soon(I know you will as you promised to finish it before 12th Tongue )
love you Shru HugHug
 
Yaar please change the line 'Brilliant poet'Tongue jyada tareefe bhi achi nhi hoti rightWink
Clue will be revealed in the upcoming chap LOL
 
Yaa I couldnt think of any other names so used their namesWink
 
Diary kiska hai ye toh I cant tell youTongue
 
Updating now...!!! Love you too dearHug

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Posted: 07 November 2012 at 3:44am | IP Logged
Originally posted by samiya.059

Firstly i am listening to the song
'har sawal ka jawab nahi mil sakta'
n ur update is full of sawals
>who is the girl to whom diary belongs
>who is the major
>is major arjun
>is major rathore
>where are riya n arjun
>is major young n smart or oldie
>why major wants dat diary
>is it out of curiosity or woh us diary ko pehchanta hai
boht sawal aur ek jawab aapka agla update isliye yeh aise sawal nai hain jin ka jawab nai mil sakta so if u dont want me to write foolish comments den update soon
Sami kitni chalak ho gayi hai apna nikalna ata hai
 
oye ye kya hai???? Sawalon ka dukan?
No wait my question paperLOL
Major is smart and youngTongue
 
Sammy sach mai chalak hogayi haiTongue
 
Thanks for liking it and commenting dearBig smile

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Posted: 07 November 2012 at 3:45am | IP Logged
Originally posted by M.V.Kohli007

Hey Funky really nyc update dear..
 
 
I ws waiting 4 1st chapter , its ossam.
 
Greedy to know abt dairy & Major..
 
 
Plz update soon..
 
 
love ADI  Smilemeri PankhiLOLLOLLOL
 
Thanks manuu...Hug
 
updating now...Smile

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