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Posted: 29 January 2013 at 4:23am | IP Logged
Originally posted by samiya.059

Kash humTum Bhi Ajnabi Hote
Jis Tarah Or Log Hote Hain
Be-taaruf Se La-taaluq Se
Na Tasaadum Na Bandishain Hoti
Dil Main Chahat Na Khwahishain
Hoti
Na Wafaon Ke Silsile Hote
Na Mohabbat Ke Fasle Hote
Phir Na Hoti Shikayatain Tum Se
Youn Na Milti Aziatain Tum Se
Be-qarari Na Be-kali Hoti
Youn Shikista Na Zindagi Hoti
Choor Hota Na Aina Dil Ka
Koi Lamha Na Hota Mushkil Ka
Hum Na Milte Teri Nigaon Se
Na Youn Do Char Hote Aahon Se
Kar Ke Tujh Se Wafa Mila Kya Hai?
Too Ne Ghum K Siwa Dia Kya Hai?
Mujh Ko Un Lamhon Ki Yaad Jo
Ayee Hai
Mar Dala Teri Judayee Nai
Awesome shru just loved loved it.
Update was just fab
loved arjun roshni n rathore convo.
Finally there is smth abt saans
Is abhi n ria related somehow
Sorry dear meine aapko bht tang kia update k liye
u r d best
love u so much
 
Mashallah kya khub h ye poemEmbarrassed thank you sammy ji
I'm sooo happy that ur still hooked to this madlyLOL
 
But is bar aapne tang nahi kiya mujhe acha nahi lagaLOL
Love uHug and thnk uEmbarrassed
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Posted: 29 January 2013 at 4:25am | IP Logged
@sana, payal,rashi, shruti and Leki
Embarrassed thank you so much for the lovely comments dear...
 
I'm sooo happy that you guys are still liking it and all...
 
updating soon...
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Posted: 29 January 2013 at 4:27am | IP Logged
Originally posted by tani23

Shru ...Boss maan gaye apko 

yeh New year ka jhatka diya aapne 

Rathore n roshni married ..OMG now dis left meShocked

Yeh Ria ka kya chakkar hian

ab thoda suspense khol de 

Liked ro-panchi-Abhi...all 3 very CuteSmile


Poetries amazing as usual
 
Suspense is vale mai thoda khulega but u have to be careful kyunki mere hisaab se samjdhar ko ishara hi kafi hLOL
 
Thanks for liking itEmbarrassed
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Posted: 29 January 2013 at 4:28am | IP Logged
Originally posted by prava55663

Reserved!!!
 
aap kab unres karogi??LOL
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Posted: 29 January 2013 at 4:29am | IP Logged
Originally posted by -sree13-

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shru ki bacchi ruk teri khair nehiAngry mera pm kahan hai???

chal jaane de update was mindblowing toh chodh rahi hoon.

WHAT??? i am in huge shockShocked rathod and roshni got married??Shocked toh fir riya ka kya hua??Shocked kya twist daalaClap

why abhi is behaving so indifferent?? is he in love with panchi?? okay lots of question.

but most beautiful thing was as always and ofcourse your mindblowing  poems..koi bhi shabd kam hai un sab ke liyeClapClap

its a great experience to go through such a brilliant new tear treat..lovely

happy new year..love youHugHug
 
sree di...Hug
 
I'm so happy your liking it... Embarrassed hayeee m updating soonLOL
lov youHug
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Posted: 29 January 2013 at 4:31am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ankita2804

aaaiiieee... **screaming**

OMG... rathore and Roshni ... wowww Shru... Dil khush kar diya yaar tumne ...
nice new year gift ;)
and thanx for not killing Roshni...


abhi bhaagti hu... baaki ka baad me likhti hu... 
nahi to pitayi ho jayegi meri new year me hi... :D



_____________________________
by the way,,,,
ek secret batau ... 
Roshni is my nick name Blushing

 
Mai Roshni ko kyu marti? ohh show k jaiseLOL no way this is different naTongue
 
ohhooo tum bhi Roshni hoEmbarrassed
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Posted: 29 January 2013 at 4:35am | IP Logged
Originally posted by umamah70

awesomeee SS...Thumbs Up
plzz update soon im dying to read more...
and where iz riya???????
 
updating updatingDancing
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Posted: 29 January 2013 at 4:37am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ...pujan...

sis ur just fantabulous writer...

hats off to u...Clap

this ss is really mindblowing...Smile

about ur poems they r outstanding...Clap

u r a perfect poetess...

update asap...Smile
 
Bhai...Hug first of all thank you so much for reading and commenting
It seriously means a lot to meEmbarrassed
 
I'm so happy that you're liking it... hayeee poetess?LOL
Sab aapka ashirwaad hLOLEmbarrassed

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