Fan Fictions

   

SS:Saans(The last breath) Chap9 Pg50 29th JAN (Page 49)

Post Reply New Post

Page 49 of 57

funkylicious

IF-Rockerz

funkylicious

Joined: 20 March 2012

Posts: 9811

Posted: 29 January 2013 at 4:23am | IP Logged
Originally posted by samiya.059

Kash humTum Bhi Ajnabi Hote
Jis Tarah Or Log Hote Hain
Be-taaruf Se La-taaluq Se
Na Tasaadum Na Bandishain Hoti
Dil Main Chahat Na Khwahishain
Hoti
Na Wafaon Ke Silsile Hote
Na Mohabbat Ke Fasle Hote
Phir Na Hoti Shikayatain Tum Se
Youn Na Milti Aziatain Tum Se
Be-qarari Na Be-kali Hoti
Youn Shikista Na Zindagi Hoti
Choor Hota Na Aina Dil Ka
Koi Lamha Na Hota Mushkil Ka
Hum Na Milte Teri Nigaon Se
Na Youn Do Char Hote Aahon Se
Kar Ke Tujh Se Wafa Mila Kya Hai?
Too Ne Ghum K Siwa Dia Kya Hai?
Mujh Ko Un Lamhon Ki Yaad Jo
Ayee Hai
Mar Dala Teri Judayee Nai
Awesome shru just loved loved it.
Update was just fab
loved arjun roshni n rathore convo.
Finally there is smth abt saans
Is abhi n ria related somehow
Sorry dear meine aapko bht tang kia update k liye
u r d best
love u so much
 
Mashallah kya khub h ye poemEmbarrassed thank you sammy ji
I'm sooo happy that ur still hooked to this madlyLOL
 
But is bar aapne tang nahi kiya mujhe acha nahi lagaLOL
Love uHug and thnk uEmbarrassed

Dear Guest, Being an unregistered member you are missing out on participating in the lively discussions happening on the topic "SS:Saans(The last breath) Chap9 Pg50 29th JAN (Page 49)" in Fan Fictions forum. In addition you lose out on the fun interactions with fellow members and other member exclusive features that India-Forums has to offer. Join India's most popular discussion portal on Indian Entertainment. It's FREE and registration is effortless so JOIN NOW!

funkylicious

IF-Rockerz

funkylicious

Joined: 20 March 2012

Posts: 9811

Posted: 29 January 2013 at 4:25am | IP Logged
@sana, payal,rashi, shruti and Leki
Embarrassed thank you so much for the lovely comments dear...
 
I'm sooo happy that you guys are still liking it and all...
 
updating soon...

funkylicious

IF-Rockerz

funkylicious

Joined: 20 March 2012

Posts: 9811

Posted: 29 January 2013 at 4:27am | IP Logged
Originally posted by tani23

Shru ...Boss maan gaye apko 

yeh New year ka jhatka diya aapne 

Rathore n roshni married ..OMG now dis left meShocked

Yeh Ria ka kya chakkar hian

ab thoda suspense khol de 

Liked ro-panchi-Abhi...all 3 very CuteSmile


Poetries amazing as usual
 
Suspense is vale mai thoda khulega but u have to be careful kyunki mere hisaab se samjdhar ko ishara hi kafi hLOL
 
Thanks for liking itEmbarrassed

funkylicious

IF-Rockerz

funkylicious

Joined: 20 March 2012

Posts: 9811

Posted: 29 January 2013 at 4:28am | IP Logged
Originally posted by prava55663

Reserved!!!
 
aap kab unres karogi??LOL

funkylicious

IF-Rockerz

funkylicious

Joined: 20 March 2012

Posts: 9811

Posted: 29 January 2013 at 4:29am | IP Logged
Originally posted by -sree13-

edited****

shru ki bacchi ruk teri khair nehiAngry mera pm kahan hai???

chal jaane de update was mindblowing toh chodh rahi hoon.

WHAT??? i am in huge shockShocked rathod and roshni got married??Shocked toh fir riya ka kya hua??Shocked kya twist daalaClap

why abhi is behaving so indifferent?? is he in love with panchi?? okay lots of question.

but most beautiful thing was as always and ofcourse your mindblowing  poems..koi bhi shabd kam hai un sab ke liyeClapClap

its a great experience to go through such a brilliant new tear treat..lovely

happy new year..love youHugHug
 
sree di...Hug
 
I'm so happy your liking it... Embarrassed hayeee m updating soonLOL
lov youHug

funkylicious

IF-Rockerz

funkylicious

Joined: 20 March 2012

Posts: 9811

Posted: 29 January 2013 at 4:31am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ankita2804

aaaiiieee... **screaming**

OMG... rathore and Roshni ... wowww Shru... Dil khush kar diya yaar tumne ...
nice new year gift ;)
and thanx for not killing Roshni...


abhi bhaagti hu... baaki ka baad me likhti hu... 
nahi to pitayi ho jayegi meri new year me hi... :D



_____________________________
by the way,,,,
ek secret batau ... 
Roshni is my nick name Blushing

 
Mai Roshni ko kyu marti? ohh show k jaiseLOL no way this is different naTongue
 
ohhooo tum bhi Roshni hoEmbarrassed
Hug

funkylicious

IF-Rockerz

funkylicious

Joined: 20 March 2012

Posts: 9811

Posted: 29 January 2013 at 4:35am | IP Logged
Originally posted by umamah70

awesomeee SS...Thumbs Up
plzz update soon im dying to read more...
and where iz riya???????
 
updating updatingDancing

funkylicious

IF-Rockerz

funkylicious

Joined: 20 March 2012

Posts: 9811

Posted: 29 January 2013 at 4:37am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ...pujan...

sis ur just fantabulous writer...

hats off to u...Clap

this ss is really mindblowing...Smile

about ur poems they r outstanding...Clap

u r a perfect poetess...

update asap...Smile
 
Bhai...Hug first of all thank you so much for reading and commenting
It seriously means a lot to meEmbarrassed
 
I'm so happy that you're liking it... hayeee poetess?LOL
Sab aapka ashirwaad hLOLEmbarrassed

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

.....pujan.....

Post Reply New Post

Go to top

Related Topics

  Topics Topic Starter Replies Views Last Post
Maneet: <Mujhe Haq Hai> ThD-2 Chap 39:: PG: 93

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 100 101

NZ_rockx 804 73658 18 April 2014 at 10:08pm
By kabslocks
~Caged Hues~ ArHi FF (Chap:15 Pg.144)

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 151 152

Lhethal.Me 1210 181923 03 January 2014 at 9:18pm
By _Devaki_
IPKKND FF - Hunters and Gatherer (note P96)

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 95 96

sharneil92 762 67561 26 October 2013 at 4:59am
By Arshi67
FF Abhiya: In ur Arms Forever Chap15-Pg-120

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 129 130

SheDevil 1033 62857 30 March 2013 at 3:46am
By prachi.kajen
Bewafa-LAST PART(pg.44)2nd to last(pg.43)

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 55 56

simplyconfused 441 105399 07 February 2006 at 9:12pm
By nabz8888

Forum Quick Jump

Forum Category

Active Forums

Fan Fictions Topic Index

Limit search to this Forum only.

 

Disclaimer: All Logos and Pictures of various Channels, Shows, Artistes, Media Houses, Companies, Brands etc. belong to their respective owners, and are used to merely visually identify the Channels, Shows, Companies, Brands, etc. to the viewer. Incase of any issue please contact the webmaster.